Phew, that was quite the long ordeal your protagonist went through ! And you dramatized each lash accordingly, with appreciable respites for the reader in between them. All while technically impeccable, with good posing and expressions, good lighting, well done comic style effects (the lash wound did get somewhat blurry at the end though), and even a nicely developed political plot to heighten it all. As most well made torture scenes, it's indeed quite harsh/shocking to read, yet... I believe real life can go farther than that in both areas, and here the erotism underneath somewhat alleviates the toll your heroine had to undergo. So to me, those story are as legitimate on LL than the more common light-spirited ones. I do hope there's light at the end of the tunnel for your Delia, however grim the immediate future seems. 😬

Also kudos not only for the remarkable work, but for the Gladiator reference as well. 👍

« That Delia gal looks very intelligent and very pretty, and so I'm not surprised everyone is mean to her, 'cause they're very jealous.

                Still, that was no reason to whip her, no. 

                She should sue them, so she can pay her doctor, uh. »

37 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Phew, that was quite the long ordeal your protagonist went through ! And you dramatized each lash accordingly, with appreciable respites for the reader in between them. All while technically impeccable, with good posing and expressions, good lighting, well done comic style effects (the lash wound did get somewhat blurry at the end though), and even a nicely developed political plot to heighten it all. As most well made torture scenes, it's indeed quite harsh/shocking to read, yet... I believe real life can go farther than that in both areas, and here the erotism underneath somewhat alleviates the toll your heroine had to undergo. So to me, those story are as legitimate on LL than the more common light-spirited ones. I do hope there's light at the end of the tunnel for your Delia, however grim the immediate future seems. 😬

 

Also kudos not only for the remarkable work, but for the Gladiator reference as well. 👍

 

 

 

« That Delia gal looks very intelligent and very pretty, and so I'm not surprised everyone is mean to her, 'cause they're very jealous.

                Still, that was no reason to whip her, no. 

               

                She should sue them, so she can pay her doctor, uh. »

Ah a comment in this one not the other one? (part 2/3 is where some kind of let me know their opinion on this more vocally...though all in good faith/with good intents I will say). I had assumed all comments would go to that instead of this.

I was prepared to defend all aspects with "well it was from before I learned more about slavetats/SAM ect) but targeted the blurriness of the whip itself...and that was all me. I just wish it was a posable item in game...I've tried everything and in the end its just me taking the zaz cane under the same area/lighting...retexturing it and then mesh transforming it in photoshop. That is to say...until someone makes it a rigged/posable item in game it'll probably never be better under my limited skills. I've even tried using retextured netch tentacles (since SAM poses those)...just nothing ever looks right.

As for things getting better. In these alt tales...

5 minutes ago, dryuya said:

 

 

Ah a comment in this one not the other one? (part 2/3 is where some kind of let me know their opinion on this more vocally...though all in good faith/with good intents I will say). I had assumed all comments would go to that instead of this.

Well I saw this one didn't get any comments while all the prologue/setup work was established in it. Also... didn't have the time to read the other... yet. XD

Though I'm guessing it's probably going to be even more brutal.

5 minutes ago, dryuya said:

As for things getting better. In these alt tales...

 

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nah...these are mean spirited comics all the way through. And most take a page (or the whole book) from my personal favorite sadist artist Skatingjesus 

 

But I dont have 1/13237th of his skill so on these I settle for the same sort of things but using Skyrim assets

 

Figured as much. 😳

5 minutes ago, dryuya said:

I was prepared to defend all aspects with "well it was from before I learned more about slavetats/SAM ect) but targeted the blurriness of the whip itself...and that was all me. I just wish it was a posable item in game...I've tried everything and in the end its just me taking the zaz cane under the same area/lighting...retexturing it and then mesh transforming it in photoshop. That is to say...until someone makes it a rigged/posable item in game it'll probably never be better under my limited skills. I've even tried using retextured netch tentacles (since SAM poses those)...just nothing ever looks right.

Though you shouldn't badmouth your photoshopping skills; they are awesome. I even thought you were using slavetats and had textures issues, but if that's all photoshopped by hand then it's impressive.

Though the software has evovled quite a bit since the prehistoric Photoshop Elements I got my hands onto. Mesh transforming, complex layers, smart selection are unknown wonders to me.

Damn almost true to life story you have here. Good work on the emotional damage- I mean emotional capture of the heart things with every crack of the whip. 

3 hours ago, Jay-Omms said:

Damn almost true to life story you have here. Good work on the emotional damage- I mean emotional capture of the heart things with every crack of the whip. 

TY... It was actually one of my first whipping scenes. Even before most shown in the tales chapters. 

I have learned a little since then (see Amadeus Navale chapter... I think it was higher quality but maybe not as much quantity)