Very nice screen caps. Actually portraying Skyrim's harsh terrain is much harder than it seems, but you do it quite well here. I don't think it as stupid as you think either. Actually laying some background as to why your character is as lewd as it is; is a step above what most people do.  Don't fall into the trap of comparing your work to other peoples that you get inspiration from, as that sets up unrealistic expectations on yourself and just look instead at what you yourself can do better in the free time you have. I find your style quite nice and hope to see more of it.

I really like the use of dreams to find out more about a character and think it is quite fun and plan on using that a lot myself.

5 hours ago, yorpers said:

Very nice screen caps. Actually portraying Skyrim's harsh terrain is much harder than it seems, but you do it quite well here. I don't think it as stupid as you think either. Actually laying some background as to why your character is as lewd as it is; is a step above what most people do.  Don't fall into the trap of comparing your work to other peoples that you get inspiration from, as that sets up unrealistic expectations on yourself and just look instead at what you yourself can do better in the free time you have. I find your style quite nice and hope to see more of it.

 

I really like the use of dreams to find out more about a character and think it is quite fun and plan on using that a lot myself.

Thanks, but don't get me wrong, I'm pretty happy how this turned out, I just meant it's stupid because ... you know ... excessive lewdness. But that's intended.

Well, if this isn't quite the surprise... Zhao, the author of Nym's story, has returned ! If was wondering to myself why I knew the name, and it wasn't because of Pierce Brosnan !

@Resdayn will be delighted. Anyway, if you do contact some of the moderators (such as CPU); they might help you retrieve your IDs, or if it cannot be done, have the old blog transferred back to you.

Regardless, your work seems to have the same vibe than before, with nakedness, introspection, and a quite neat comic layout to go with it. The titles however, got extended to manga-like proportions. The shots are colorful and use creative view points, which combined to the posing and expression makes them pleasant to go by. You're not exploiting the full width of the interface however, but as you're going with PNGs, doing so would impact negatively on the performance, so I'll refrain my advices on that theme. However, know that you can insert several images into one same spoiler, you're not force to go one image per spoiler. ?

Anyway, the nymph introduction was original, and the execution of the first chapter is pleasant. Yet, don't fall asleep on the scenario part, surprises, hidden whereabouts, mysteries, action or humor are what make a good story in the end. So do not neglect implementing twists and other entertainment types to avoid stalling. 

Thanks for the share !

« Nellie looks very pretty, and very intelligent, yeah. Plus she's got nice shorts uh. »

               But I very think that she's needy, 'cause she makes only wet dreams.  »

Yay, she is back!

I missed her stories so much

28 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Well, if this isn't quite the surprise... Zhao, the author of Nym's story, has returned ! If was wondering to myself why I knew the name, and it wasn't because of Pierce Brosnan !

@Resdayn will be delighted. Anyway, if you do contact some of the moderators (such as CPU); they might help you retrieve your IDs, or if it cannot be done, have the old blog transferred back to you.

 

Regardless, your work seems to have the same vibe than before, with nakedness, introspection, and a quite neat comic layout to go with it. The titles however, got extended to manga-like proportions. The shots are colorful and use creative view points, which combined to the posing and expression makes them pleasant to go by. You're not exploiting the full width of the interface however, but as you're going with PNGs, doing so would impact negatively on the performance, so I'll refrain my advices on that theme. However, know that you can insert several images into one same spoiler, you're not force to go one image per spoiler. ?

 

Anyway, the nymph introduction was original, and the execution of the first chapter is pleasant. Yet, don't fall asleep on the scenario part, surprises, hidden whereabouts, mysteries, action or humor are what make a good story in the end. So do not neglect implementing twists and other entertainment types to avoid stalling. 

Thanks for the share !

 

 

« Nellie looks very pretty, and very intelligent, yeah. Plus she's got nice shorts uh. »

               But I very think that she's needy, 'cause she makes only wet dreams.  »

 

Thanks for the feedback. Maybe the old account could be recovered, but I probably doesn't have to. I'm doing a reboot and I guess it's better if the old stuff is seperated, since is now officially non-canon. A few elements will come back, but it's mostly a new story.

I suppose the whole thing is more about the images than the story itself, but there will be a cohesive narrative this time, however it might take some time to get going, because I'm planning to introduce some other characters first.

6 hours ago, Zhao_ said:

Thanks, but don't get me wrong, I'm pretty happy how this turned out, I just meant it's stupid because ... you know ... excessive lewdness. But that's intended.

Ahh! Very good then, I mistook what you said as being doubtful with your work? I'm glad you aren't because you shouldn't be. Looking forward to seeing more?

Oh wow it's been 5 or 6 years already since you posted on your old account.  Welcome back.  Trying out the comic style I see. It can get kind of a bit tedious sometime I feel like I don't wanna use word bubbles anymore but I do want to make my blog screenshots look good so I end up continuing to use them. Now I'm currently working on using SE for my new stories but mod trouble and slow load times slow me down quite a bit.  But yeah... Great work! 

2 hours ago, Jay-Omms said:

sometime I feel like I don't wanna use word bubbles anymore but I do want to make my blog screenshots look good so I end up continuing to use them.

That hit right home x_x takes me hours to get a Chapter done but it also makes more fun then just write a text under or above a picture ?

Hope both of you don't mind asking but what program do you use for your speech bubbles? Mine look kinda shitty in comparison

On 6/10/2022 at 7:03 PM, Gukahn said:

That hit right home x_x takes me hours to get a Chapter done but it also makes more fun then just write a text under or above a picture ?

 

Hope both of you don't mind asking but what program do you use for your speech bubbles? Mine look kinda shitty in comparison

I use (an older version of) coreldraw. It's not free though.

On 6/10/2022 at 1:03 PM, Gukahn said:

That hit right home x_x takes me hours to get a Chapter done but it also makes more fun then just write a text under or above a picture ?

 

Hope both of you don't mind asking but what program do you use for your speech bubbles? Mine look kinda shitty in comparison

PhotoScape X 

43 minutes ago, Jay-Omms said:

 

PhotoScape X 

On 6/11/2022 at 8:56 PM, Zhao_ said:

I use (an older version of) coreldraw. It's not free though.

Thank you both, i will look them both up later ? 

Gorgeous screens and really engaging start. I love it!

I always find that the whole sex fueled magic trope can become super cheesy really fast but you really manage to walk that line of keeping it feeling grounded and real.

On 10/5/2022 at 1:34 PM, SpyVsPie said:

Gorgeous screens and really engaging start. I love it!

 

I always find that the whole sex fueled magic trope can become super cheesy really fast but you really manage to walk that line of keeping it feeling grounded and real.

 

I can't guarantee that it will be like that in the future because realism is not my number one priority tbh ...