Ohkay ... from probably not going to be continued to whoa what a roller coaster ride. Came to this entry ... wondered ... wondered a bit more, then noticed I had already mised the second part in the story. You been fast. ^^
Excellent so far, though I feel kinda sorry for Lydia, as it wasn't enough she had to go through live like she had a stick in her ass ... now she actually might.

Anyway I hope we will see yet more of this story. I'm for one are looking forward to it. ^^


As far as the splitting goes ... does not make much difference to me, so I'm fine either way.

> Awesome!!!! I died laughing on the prisoner's insults of Imperials and so many other scenes .... ? Like the story very much. You have some talent in story telling Casting the sex spell is way easier to get laid than seducing.

8 hours ago, Talesien said:

Excellent so far, though I feel kinda sorry for Lydia, as it wasn't enough she had to go through live like she had a stick in her ass ... now she actually might.

Anyway I hope we will see yet more of this story. I'm for one are looking forward to it. ^^


As far as the splitting goes ... does not make much difference to me, so I'm fine either way.

Thank you so much

Yeah i tried some times to make a continuing story and failed after a few chapters, this time i actually might be able to make it regularly, will get slowed down once my vacation is over tho ?

I was kinda worried i would overdo it. Well as for Lydia, she kinda asked for it for traveling with a Succubis in the first place ?

5 hours ago, Evaloves4 said:

> Awesome!!!! I died laughing on the prisoner's insults of Imperials and so many other scenes .... ? Like the story very much. You have some talent in story telling Casting the sex spell is way easier to get laid than seducing.

Thank you Well as of now i think it's the only way to get in Lyidas pants and i like it, i want her to stay the serious character but wanna see her laid, so the spell does it for me ?

Just now, Gukahn said:

 

Thank you so much

Yeah i tried some times to make a continuing story and failed after a few chapters, this time i actually might be able to make it regularly, will get slowed down once my vacation is over tho ?

 

I was kinda worried i would overdo it. Well as for Lydia, she kinda asked for it for traveling with a Succubis in the first place ?

 

 

Thank you Well as of now i think it's the only way to get in Lyidas pants and i like it, i want her to stay the serious character but wanna see her laid, so the spell does it for me ?

> Indeed. You see, when my Prince played Skyrim, he ALWAYS had sex with Adrianne Avenicci and Ahlam. They were "must do". But he Avoided the jarl of Riften and Maven at all cost. Even very nice looking replacement couldn't make him sex them ?.

11 minutes ago, Evaloves4 said:

> Indeed. You see, when my Prince played Skyrim, he ALWAYS had sex with Adrianne Avenicci and Ahlam. They were "must do". But he Avoided the jarl of Riften and Maven at all cost. Even very nice looking replacement couldn't make him sex them ?.

He does value personality and wouldn't waste the few good characters  the game has to offer i see? (can't say the same for most characters but i think the same way for Maven, only going to ignore things probably later for the storytelling here. Have a few ideas ?

Just now, Gukahn said:

He does value personality and wouldn't waste the few good characters  the game has to offer i see? (can't say the same for most characters but i think the same way for Maven, only going to ignore things probably later for the storytelling here. Have a few ideas ?

> Can't wait to see your next episode.

Your work kinda reminds me of early SpyVsPie works, but darker.. in every way ! Indeed, not only the humor and content is quite dark (they're  kinda applying a Stockholm syndrome on the niece), but the lighting also tends to be. Now, the very fact this is done with a humorous fashion all along (whether it's the irony of the dialogues, or of the situation) kinda softens the blow, and gives it features of it's own. Plus "dark" themed stories aren't majority among here. So, interesting work so far. ?

« Those people are very bad : first they cast a spell to fry a gal' brain, and then they kill the people they've honey-honey with.

                Plus the guy is using stallion potions, or else he would go all flabby after the first time, you see ?

                Serana wouldn't like them, no.  »

24 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Your work kinda reminds me of early SpyVsPie works, but darker.. in every way ! Indeed, not only the humor and content is quite dark (they're  kinda applying a Stockholm syndrome on the niece), but the lighting also tends to be. Now, the very fact this is done with a humorous fashion all along (whether it's the irony of the dialogues, or of the situation) kinda softens the blow, and gives it features of it's own. Plus "dark" themed stories aren't majority among here. So, interesting work so far. ?

Yes, i just recently got a little bit used to looking out for lighting sources or using the Tools. Tbh perfectly honest, i don't know what kind of Genre this Story calls home. There are Chapters that a very light hearted and there are ones like this here and some you could call outright pornographic. But i think i am getting some kind of balance. Just doing the Story with a very loose Script in my Head and let the Chapters go with the Flow.

Thank you for your Input on it, i do hope the Story won't get too jumpy or one sided later on ?

(I do know a little off Spy VsPie, sadly i can't remember much from them. It's been too long ?)