Nice work, been loving this story all the way through. My only critism is the purple word bubbles are hard to read, the darker colors for the words do not work well.

While I hope that the end of part 2 is just the start signal for part 3 I guess it can be said that all is well that ends well.
Anyway thanks for bringing this story to us, it's truly been an emotional roller coaster right and obviously a labor of love.

Talking about part 3... as has been stated before, please, please never use those dark font colors again, they are such a major PITA.

very well done on both chapters. I look forward to part 3

Great work as always, love everything about this work.

Look forward to part 3!

She looks wonderful in that armor. Can’t wait for part 3.

18 hours ago, Talesien said:

While I hope that the end of part 2 is just the start signal for part 3 I guess it can be said that all is well that ends well.
Anyway thanks for bringing this story to us, it's truly been an emotional roller coaster right and obviously a labor of love.

Talking about part 3... as has been stated before, please, please never use those dark font colors again, they are such a major PITA.

Same with the light colors, make them solid instead of an outline. Still somewhat struggle to read those as well. 

Really great story, you get me addicted to it :).

And so I hope it will continue with part 3.

Thank you for creating this this, and looking for continuation.

On 4/8/2022 at 8:53 PM, ther1pper said:

Nice work, been loving this story all the way through. My only critism is the purple word bubbles are hard to read, the darker colors for the words do not work well.

On 4/8/2022 at 10:31 PM, Talesien said:

Talking about part 3... as has been stated before, please, please never use those dark font colors again, they are such a major PITA.

On 4/9/2022 at 4:48 PM, Nyx Morrigan said:

Same with the light colors, make them solid instead of an outline. Still somewhat struggle to read those as well. 

Thanks all. Yeah going forward we're definitely gonna stay away from those dark color text choices, and try to keep Sirrae's the only text with an outline. Hindsight is 20/20, lol.

Apologies for the super lengthy time between posts, this is still just a pet project that I do on the side when I have time, and dealing with Oldrim at the same time is a huge hassle. 

Also, there will be a part 3! It's in the works. I wanted to try and have a storyboard more-or-less finalized for this next part instead of the "flying by the seat of my pants" approach that I had been doing. It's been a long effort to get that to where I want for this arc, but it's finally in a place where I'm happy with it.
 

Looking forward to your next entry. Just enjoy what you are doing.