They are going to Isengard!

Lady Ver is so cute, expressive and likeable!

And she is hilariously baffled by Eliza's flirting (that dungeon scene came out great ?).

Even though Lady Ver is the main character, I think Eliza was the star of this entry.  She's both charming and just a bit scary.  And I simply love that sudden transformation of hers from a proper noble lady to a true warrior (especially in a way she went and cut her hair).

I realize you probably have other plans for the story but it would be so cool to see Eliza's and Lady Ver's adventures.  There's a certain chemistry between them. Plus Eliza looks really excited with her new toy ?  I also wonder why she didn't want Ver to wear her amulet.  And the way she said "smile for me" was very suspicious.

Wonderful screenshots as always and a really fun story! Can't wait to find out what happens next! ?

Oh Boy 

Well, Elsa's attempts at being nice really scare me off. It seems to me, that You really admirably conveyed her essence, in a different conditions and surroundings. And...

Right? Right..?

18 hours ago, Deso561PL said:

They are going to Isengard!

Hahah, they probably stay in the bruma legion.

5 hours ago, Devianna said:

Lady Ver is so cute, expressive and likeable!

And she is hilariously baffled by Eliza's flirting (that dungeon scene came out great ?).

 

Even though Lady Ver is the main character, I think Eliza was the star of this entry.  She's both charming and just a bit scary.  And I simply love that sudden transformation of hers from a proper noble lady to a true warrior (especially in a way she went and cut her hair).

 

I realize you probably have other plans for the story but it would be so cool to see Eliza's and Lady Ver's adventures.  There's a certain chemistry between them. Plus Eliza looks really excited with her new toy ?  I also wonder why she didn't want Ver to wear her amulet.  And the way she said "smile for me" was very suspicious.

 

Wonderful screenshots as always and a really fun story! Can't wait to find out what happens next! ?

Thank you ?

Im glad you like Lady Ver and her character works as intended, yes she is probably my most expressive character out of everyone.

Happy the flirting scene worked well with the dungeon, was worried ?

Yes, Eliza was meant to be the focus on the chapter, and how she acted toward Ver, we saw everything from Ver's innocent-ish perspective, but we can see Eliza dont hide her intentions. Im glad she was scary, cause she felt to me like a predator preying with her prey then a nice person ^^.

Eliza is very experienced fighter and magican, she is that narcistic, even focuses to manage the best look and skill the same time ?

Yes Amulet has reasons and good perception checks on the "toy".

We gonna follow their adventure for a while, when next thing comes ^^.

3 hours ago, Jayomms said:

Oh Boy 

hahahaha

2 hours ago, Crw said:

Well, Elsa's attempts at being nice really scare me off. It seems to me, that You really admirably conveyed her essence, in a different conditions and surroundings. And...

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I do really hope that they going for a nice and long sex-crazed adventure!

Right? Right..?

Is it a bit different her being nice and just kind? Its like a snake with the mouse ?

You have to see where the adventure going in the future chapter ?

Who is this person and what has she done with Eliza? Haha, wow this was unexpected. Eliza certainly has some devious plans in mind! Nice job!

9 minutes ago, Collygon said:

Who is this person and what has she done with Eliza? Haha, wow this was unexpected. Eliza certainly has some devious plans in mind! Nice job!

Hahahaha Im glad you like it ?

It is very same we know, it just she seems have different face for a young naive lady compared her own daughter. ?

She sure has, Eliza is not famous of being sweet and kind.

So there wont be any men in this series..

53 minutes ago, Scythion said:

So there wont be any men in this series..

There will be, since thats the main motivation of Lady Ver.

She just unlucky, but I made male characters and plan to use them.

This was the best chapter of the lady V saga so far! Some really great shots and the scene with them at the table intercut with the things they were discussing was really well done. great job, really liking this tale so far!

8 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

This was the best chapter of the lady V saga so far! Some really great shots and the scene with them at the table intercut with the things they were discussing was really well done. great job, really liking this tale so far!

Thank you ?

Im glad you enjoyed this chapter, I was worried if I messed up ?

Nice chapter, the screens really are something in terms of poses, expressions, and vividness. You realize that upon going from the narration to Eliza's and Vera's imagination ones (though they could've benefited from a dreamy border, just like Devianna usually does). The story however... is somewhat farfetched, as Vera's proposing the opposite of who she wants to, Eliza not questioning this, and then casually dating her... the logical transitions between those could exist but aren't obvious to me. However, I agree with the alchemy of Vera's naivety creating a nice intrigue when faced with Eliza's more experienced scheming. Awaiting to see where this will go !

Malicia : « I'm very not awaiting to see where this will go, no. That Mrs Eliza is way too nice with Vera.  »

On 2/14/2021 at 4:21 AM, Devianna said:

I also wonder why she didn't want Ver to wear her amulet. 

Malicia : « 'cause she wanna cast a honey-honey spell on her, and the amulet very protects her. She's gonna end just like Cassandra.  »

5 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Nice chapter, the screens really are something in terms of poses, expressions, and vividness. You realize that upon going from the narration to Eliza's and Vera's imagination ones (though they could've benefited from a dreamy border, just like Devianna usually does). The story however... is somewhat farfetched, as Vera's proposing the opposite of who she wants to, Eliza not questioning this, and then casually dating her... the logical transitions between those could exist but aren't obvious to me. However, I agree with the alchemy of Vera's naivety creating a nice intrigue when faced with Eliza's more experienced scheming. Awaiting to see where this will go !

 

Malicia : « I'm very not awaiting to see where this will go, no. That Mrs Eliza is way too nice with Vera.  »

 

Malicia : « 'cause she wanna cast a honey-honey spell on her, and the amulet very protects her. She's gonna end just like Cassandra.  »

 

 

Eliza just having fun and toying around, I tried make her a bit more dangerous and scary in vibe, while she is all sweet with her words, in reality she just bored and wanted entertain herself.

She not really question, she just found it amusing,

Its not like she is not the same person who bleed her own daughter out casually and calls her trash.

Lady Ver happen to be her new toy.

Amulet has different purpose Malicia, but you can see what kind design it is you use your smarts.

19 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

 

Eliza just having fun and toying around, I tried make her a bit more dangerous and scary in vibe, while she is all sweet with her words, in reality she just bored and wanted entertain herself.

 

She not really question, she just found it amusing,

 

Its not like she is not the same person who bleed her own daughter out casually and calls her trash.

 

Lady Ver happen to be her new toy.

Well that explains it from Eliza's side indeed. But Vera's logic still seems off.

Sorry for commenting that late though, I did receive the status update but the blogs' ones are still random. ?

21 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

Amulet has different purpose Malicia, but you can see what kind design it is you use your smarts.

Malicia : « It very looks like a sword, but on reverse.

                Maybe she can very invoke someone with a knife to save her ? »

1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

Well that explains it from Eliza's side indeed. But Vera's logic still seems off.

 

Sorry for commenting that late though, I did receive the status update but the blogs' ones are still random. ?

 

Malicia : « It very looks like a sword, but on reverse.

 

                Maybe she can very invoke someone with a knife to save her ? »

Lady Ver has generally not use much logic ?, she is like that.

She can invoke things with it yes

18 hours ago, Resdayn said:

 

Lady Ver has generally not use much logic ?, she is like that.

That's a completely legit point.

18 hours ago, Resdayn said:

She can invoke things with it yes

Malicia : « I very guessed it, 'cause I'm very intelligent, yes.  »

Bruma should have some tower. No better place for an "adventure".

High above everybody, nice view, secluded and loaded with associations.

I wonder if Eliza prepared herself under her armour, too.

5 hours ago, worik said:

Bruma should have some tower. No better place for an "adventure".

High above everybody, nice view, secluded and loaded with associations.

 

I wonder if Eliza prepared herself under her armour, too.

hahahahahaha

She indeed did.