Oh wow .

Always wondered when I'm going to see Nora's manor as part of another story.

I love it 

Glad Nora is not at home so she can't get any dangerous stupid ideas... 

At least the ladies got some eye candy ?

Aria: Well... hello there

Hey great work on the expressions!

Such a small thing, but makes the read so much more believable/enjoyable.

And I'm keenly aware how much time it takes to do that! 

Bravo!

If there's something we can say is that your stories often have a quirky side, and this one is no exception. Good job at picturing the fantasy aspect of being Sheogorath's son ; though aside from some effects this entry was mostly made of dialogues, and came with only two twists. Careful also about the fov, it was overly wide on some of the first screen, which translated into a distorted perspective. Anyway, intriguing setup, with some nice potetnial considering the possibility of a conflict with another dragonborn. ?

Malicia : « That guy is funny ! And he has a big pee-pee. He looks proud of it, uh.

                But, he's very right, it's always gals that have to get naked around here first. So it's fair that guys do it while we're sitting, for once.  »

On 9/26/2020 at 7:41 PM, Alter Native said:

Oh wow .

Always wondered when I'm going to see Nora's manor as part of another story.

I love it 

Glad Nora is not at home so she can't get any dangerous stupid ideas... 

And there is more to come 

On 9/27/2020 at 1:26 AM, SpyVsPie said:

 

At least the ladies got some eye candy ?

 

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Stupid sexy Flanders!

 

And it's not the last of Stupid sexy Flanders. 

On 9/30/2020 at 4:01 PM, WANOBI12 said:

Hey great work on the expressions!

Such a small thing, but makes the read so much more believable/enjoyable.

And I'm keenly aware how much time it takes to do that! 

Bravo!

Thank you... I'm happy you liked my story.  Yeah it is a lot of work involved especially my next chapters coming up. 

On 10/3/2020 at 8:42 AM, Tirloque said:

If there's something we can say is that your stories often have a quirky side, and this one is no exception. Good job at picturing the fantasy aspect of being Sheogorath's son ; though aside from some effects this entry was mostly made of dialogues, and came with only two twists. Careful also about the fov, it was overly wide on some of the first screen, which translated into a distorted perspective. Anyway, intriguing setup, with some nice potential considering the possibility of a conflict with another dragonborn. ?

 

 

Malicia : « That guy is funny ! And he has a big pee-pee. He looks proud of it, uh.

 

                But, he's very right, it's always gals that have to get naked around here first. So it's fair that guys do it while we're sitting, for once.  »

Yes the ladies tend to be so neglected here on LL.  

That's odd, I never touched the FOV on any chapter I did thus far.   

I often wondered if Sheogorath can have children or any Daedra for that matter and found out only if they posses the body of a mortal like Sheogorath did with Oblivion's player character. 

Yeah I tend to put so much dialogue that it probably turns people away. Well I guess it's because I wanna get my story lore out there as much as possible so I can later tone it down and take it easy. Because I've been holding too much back on posting my content that I'm so far behind on what I wanted to post and kept dallying and messing with mods too much. 

And Thanks for the feedback