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[STORY] The Four - Part One: Watchful Eyes


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Here's the next part, folks! Not sure when the next part will be because I'm re-doing my Skyrim for the hundredth time. But it's gonna be a fun one. I've also got a few videos I never posted, so maybe... anyway, a lot of work went into this one, hope you enjoy it.

 

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1. Watchful Eyes

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2. Making Deals

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3. Dungeon Crawl

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Nice You have the Crow sword. I like it's design. And such a wonderful set of characters as well. Good movie style of screens too. ;):thumbsup:

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Great job and a bunch of really cool screenshots!

 

However you use quite a lot of close up shots of small details I think during combat scenes it's better to have more shots like these:

 



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that give the reader a good overview of what's happening and how the characters are positioned in relation to each other. 

A bunch of shots like these:



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May look cool each by themselves and it's nice to give some details, but it's pretty easy to get lost as a reader. 

Not sure if intended or not, but if you can get rid of the grey space between each image. You write on the images and have black dividers so the grey space is not that necessary.

But great combat shots, I love where this is going!

Hope to see more :) 

 

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I'll agree with Alter, your close-ups are nice for an immersive cinematographic style during dialogues, but shouldn't be abused during fights. Aside of viewpoints, showing the key events of each fight, as they're happening and when they're happening is the way to go IMO. Think of it being clear enough to be followed without dialogues, then you'll be sure to get something unmistakable once adding them back.

Now that it is said, you have a knack for creating ambiances and atmospheres, with a good graphical quality (including outfits and lighting), an impeccable writing style and well designed protagonists. Your style does induces a lot of images to get to one point to another however (just like Bolster's works), but makes it fluid and easy to read. So overall, it was a pleasure to let oneself get immersed into that chapter. :smiley:

 

Malicia : « That gal at the start does not need to rub her own pee-pee, no. She just has to find one guy and tell him she feels very lonely. That's way more effective, uh. :classic_lightbulb: »

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