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[EN/FR] A God's Curse / Chapter 8 : Rebirth


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This chapter doesn't say much, there is only set up here and there. So I had a little fun on this one (testing things...). I hope you enjoy anyway.

Furthermore, I will have less time after this one until the end of the year (more work, projects...). So no new chapter in November and not sure about December.

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Previous chapter Chapter 7 : Lost angel

Next chapter Chapter 9 : Flowers

 

EN.jpg.99c78fa232a641e94201305d2c129b98.jpg English version

 

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FR.jpg.5adb6ebf3fa3c98ed58ea5fe151b3bda.jpg French version

 

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Bonus : The song mention is this one

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A great visual identity and care as usual, nicely taken profit to highlight the sensual profile of your characters. And I noticed an improvement in English grammar as well (maybe more proofreading ? ;)). The only drawback I see is scenario-wise, as I find the director of the angels looking like having forgiven Alicia a bit too easily ; but maybe that was only in appearance... The length seems to be getting alright, and I liked the cinematographic aspect of some moments (like when she refuses to gives her her clothes very calmly, because she wants her to listen ; that felt badass in a way ^^).  Anyway, your work deserves more recognition IMO. Awaiting for the next chapter ! :D

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@Tirloque

For my grammar, I read a lot (a LOT) of english paper. I have no problem de read (or hear) english content, and maybe I improve naturally. Thank you for your feedback, as usual.

And a little hint, there is no black and white for me, just people. ;)

 

@EvalovesEP

Thank you. :)

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