A great visual identity and care as usual, nicely taken profit to highlight the sensual profile of your characters. And I noticed an improvement in English grammar as well (maybe more proofreading ? ). The only drawback I see is scenario-wise, as I find the director of the angels looking like having forgiven Alicia a bit too easily ; but maybe that was only in appearance... The length seems to be getting alright, and I liked the cinematographic aspect of some moments (like when she refuses to gives her her clothes very calmly, because she wants her to listen ; that felt badass in a way ^^).  Anyway, your work deserves more recognition IMO. Awaiting for the next chapter !

That kiss was awesome and dark skin girl is very beautiful and attractive.

@Tirloque

For my grammar, I read a lot (a LOT) of english paper. I have no problem de read (or hear) english content, and maybe I improve naturally. Thank you for your feedback, as usual.

And a little hint, there is no black and white for me, just people.

@EvalovesEP

Thank you.