Need Suggestions for SexLab Solutions

[Bromm83]

Here is a file containing all the current dialogue options I have added to SexLab Solutions.

 

What I want from you is that you read through it and come with suggestions for changes to the dialogue. Many things can be changed like

1. Spelling errors

2. Better sentences

3. Adding more possible answers (this will be great for when I get MCM up and running and can let people separate between dirty/funny/romantic and so on)

4. Adding new options to separate between races, sexes, haircolor (do NOT know if haircolor is supported, just used it to show it could be almost anything).

5. Anything at all can be submitted!

 

I ask that you send your suggestions to me through the message system on loverslab or at least in a spoiler tag so that it is hidden from plain view. 

 

 

Reading this file will ruin some surprises, but with plenty of suggestions coming in there will be new surprises to find on a later date! 

 

 

 

SexLab Solutions Dialogue.txt

[Stormsone]

ok I read awhile and didn't see much that bothered me. The first few lines did sound a little cheesy where she says "Hi there handsome." not sure if it sounds better but what about "hey there lovely"

 

also this line where you had snuck maybe this would be better

[spoiler] The Mind Of Madness:NPC: Una[Original] - [S] - Not on your life. It's dangerous in there, and Falk doesn't even like me and Erdi going in every year to clean out the spiders.[PF] - I'll be careful. And in return me and you could have some fun together..[SF] - If you really want to... Just be careful of the ghost! He sneaked up on me once and scared me sick. It took a week for me to feel better. [/spoiler]

you spelled okay okey a few times also I believe its  accommodating 

 [spoiler] NPC: Uraccen

[Original] - [sF] - I hear you're in for life. Sad. I'd get a shiv if I was you, or maybe some Skooma to drown your troubles.
[iC] - Now since you are the first woman I have seen in quite a while, what about you and me have some fun together?
[PF] - It really sounds like you need it and I am all about helping the needy..
[sF] - Hah! Your the most accomodating woman to walk through here in a long time... Most of the others rarely stopped screaming really...
[PF] - Sorry, not in the mood for a pityfuck right now..
[sF] - SO your going to be another screamer? To bad really, you looked like a nice fuck. Well I guess it's just me an miss Willow, she never screams.  

 

I did not see read every line but it was pretty decent overall imo.

[canthics]

prepare yourself for my poor taste

 

 

Riften Gate Guards:

[Original] - - For the privilege of entering the city. What does it matter?

[P] - I am sure we could find some other form of payment...

- Well I wouldn't mind a good blowjob...

[P] - A trade then. You let me go inside Riften, I let you come inside...me.

- Seems fair.

 

[Srende]

Not really a suggestion on the existing dialogue, but perhaps add another persuade or change the current one for those random mercenaries on the roads who can reveal some location for you?

[Coen92]

I have one quite nice suggestion which can be easily done. You have made in your mod option to interact with Random Thieves, so maybe you can do the same with those random guys DB can meet, who are making a party, and drinking Wine. They can be found randomly on the map, and they give to DB bottle of wine, and invite to the party. Maybe you could make an option to change the party into orgy, and have a threesome with them

[aravis7]

Do you think you'll do something for dragonborn or dawnguard? There would be some good ideas to implement...

[lizard_wizard]

I hope you don't mind some criticism, because I gotta say... this is even worse than usual porn logic. The dialogues are so straightforward, it's almost satirical. I mean, come on, there's not even a small bit of flirt involved, just "a fair bargain".

 

Unfortunately I don't have much time to put some sense into those dialogues, but I can give you one example of what I would do with them:

 

 

 

The Golden Claw:

 

From what I've noticed, Camilla seems interested in player character. We may assume that she went to show the Bleak Falls Barrow to take a good look at her guest. It wouldn't be hard to push her a bit forward and turn on by acting like a hero.

 

[Player character returns with the Golden Claw.]
NPC: LucanValerius
- [Lucan talks about giving the PC a money reward for retriving the Golden Claw. The dialogue branches from here.]
  [P] - [Vanilla response.]
  [PM] - I'm not a materialist. You can keep your money.
    [sM] - Well, uhh... if you insist.

 

      [When player character leaves the shop, Camilla follows and approaches him.]
      NPC: CamillaValerius
      [sM] - That was very noble to let us keep the money. You are a true hero, aren't you?
        [PM] - Yeah, you could say that. That job was a piece of cake.

          [sM] - Oh my, you must be very strong.

          [sM] - Why don't you follow me to a nice quiet place to show me how strong you are?

            [PM] - I don't have time for this.

              [sM] - Why, you... Get out of my sight!

            [PM] - Oh, I'll show you...

              [sM] - Follow me then.

 

                [Camilla leads player character to a secluded place.]

                NPC: CamillaValerius

                [sM] - Here. Now I'm going to give you a reward worthy of a hero.

                [Camilla gets on her knees and gives player character a blowjob.]

                [After the act, she engages dialogue again.]

                  [sM] - Mmm... Now how do you want to claim your prize?

                    [PM] - You are a good cocksucker, now get lost.

                      [sM] - What!? You... Get out of my sight!

                    [PM] - Lie on your back and take it.

                      [sM] - Oh yes!

                    [PM] - Bend over, I'm going to fuck your ass.

                      [sM] - I love it rough!

 

 

[canthics]

anything that makes bonking a pervasive social interaction is going to have to adopt porn logic, so might as well have fun with it. I actually appreciate the frankness of some of the lines at least as a starting point; too many people write dialogue in a way that presumes character so much that it breaks RP.  Even the good ones out there like INPC have this problem.