Thulas Posted April 26, 2013 Posted April 26, 2013 View File Attention: Out of personal reasons I decided to cancel this project. I am sorry to disappoint you. Story Lira and her younger brother Narin are wandering mercenaries since their parents died during a raid of bandits on their village. To get some coins for shelter and food they do simple tasks for people they meet on their travels who need a trained strongarm. Well, atleast one of them does the work while the other one keeps getting both of them into trouble. But Lira doesn't mind to help her little brother because she promised her mother to do so. And mostly because it's fun for her to see the stupid situations he gets himself stuck, even with his "superiority". Narin has the rare gift of magical powers and he is pretty good for his young age, which made Lira quite jealous. But at least she has her skills with the naginata and the right of the older sibling. They still are family after all, not rivals, so all in all they get along well. Their journey leads them to a small town called Tevon, a place where many wandering mercenaries come along. Actually many enough that there could a mercernary-guild be established. There also is a temple of Karleen, the godess of mankind, which is quite common, because many believe in Karleen in a way, and there are many ways to believe in her. Many do, but Lira and Narin don't. "Better put your trust into a good iron or spell rather than in a statue". That's what their father said, and this is what both of them do. Religion or not, what they need is more gold to buy new equiptment, to rest in thelocal inn and simply to enjoy life, so they decide to stay a while, do some jobs and have some fun. And then Narin does what he can do best. While his sister was taking one drink after another and getting offended by bad pickup lines he goes windowshopping. He meets two lovley girls and tries to impress them. As they start loosing interest in him he uses his secret weapon: he summons a flamespirit and lets it dance in the air. A great show for two girls that never saw a mage yet. Unfortunatly for him he gets the attention of the local cult of Karleen, too. But this cult is not like most other cults of Karleen: they are less a group of religious people than a bunch of might-hungry zealots who want to get full control over the town. And the power within this new and unknown mage would fit perfectly into their plans. It doesn't matter to them if he'll help them willingly or if they have to rip the magic out of his veins; they simply want to get it. Of course Narin refuses their "offer" to join the cult, and this is where the problems begin. The influence of the cult in the town is quite big already, so Lira and Narin soon can't even sleep in the inn without beeing threatened by it. A new and safe place to stay is needed and friends are rare, everyone could be an enemy now. Running won't help, the cult would follow them. Fight is the only option. Wipe out the cult, eliminating all its influence on Tevon, what ever bloody or dirty things they'd need to do. But both are sure that they will get their peace again. And a huge load of coins. Features - Battle system: Battles are fought in little arenas matching the locations where the battle finds place. You can perform various attacks while moving around. If you hit an enemy then you will eather damage him depending on Lira's stats or reduce his parrys by one. When your enemy can't parry and is dealt damage, his parry-counter will then be set between 0 and 2 randomly. Winning fights lead into improved conditions for you, but losing will ofthen lead into rape or in a few cases in a bad end. All in all you should be able to play the whole game without winning any battle (really interesting for those who aren't that much interested in the storry). Moves: (W) : Dashes forward and strikes during the movement. Enemies passed through during the dash will be hit by the attack. (Q) : Shortly focuses during the heat of the battle to increase the dealt damage of the next unparried hit. (A) : Dashes backwards to avoid being hit. - Stats: Well, stats really are nothing new, still they give a good frame. The stats will be devided in "Battle" and "(Semi-) Sexual" and probably will be: Attack: A simple value used for battles Defence: Also a simple stat for the battle Arousal: High arousal will influence scenes by leading them into more sexual ones Charisma: Determines how attractive the maincarakter is for others. This will lead to more forcing scenes. Reputation: This will influence how people see the maincharakters; you can have the reputation of a hero, skilled warrior, slut, etc. - Incest: During the fight against the cult Lira and Narin are mostly on their own, and in the darkest times even the bodyheat of the own sister can arouse a young man. Despite that Narin allways was a bit attracted to his elder sister. - Slavery: The cult of Karleen has its own dark ways and sinister rituals to praise their goddess. Who ever comes into their fangs will soon feel the oppression of the cultists during orgies, ritual sex and the daily activities. Beeing a slave of the cult isn't a good life. - Bestiality: Evil creatures and big beasts are a continual problem to the town of Tevon. Going out during night or even leaving the city without preparing isn't really advised if you don't want to end up getting killed or being a breeder for these monsters. - Rape: The world is cruel. And even more if you are a beautiful woman. Lira may handle herself well, but there could appear situations, where neather her nor her brother are strong enought to avoid being touched. Only a strong will and sweet revenge will be helpful in these times. Installation 1.: You first need the RPK Maker RTP (download it here) You may need to scroll down 2.: Install it as described 3.: Unpack the game you can download here on LL to any destination, your desktop for example 4.: Start the game Note: If you have a previous version of CoK, then you can copy your savegame into the new folder and delete the old one. Submitter Thulas Submitted 07/24/2013 Category Hentai Requires
Thulas Posted April 26, 2013 Author Posted April 26, 2013 Some explanations / Requests In this thread I will write down a few things people are into. Parts written in green will be added to the game or even are already. Yellow are things I am not certain about but still are somewhat likely. Everyting in red is a no. You can argue with me about anything you want mentioned here, but keep your expectations to convince me in changing anything red low though. Slavery (Dominition/Submision) - First of all I don't mean slavery in an abusive way, were humiliation and pain are the only things between owner and owned. In my oppinion the owner has the responsibility over the owned; he has the right to use but the duty to take care. Of course this doesn't mean that he isn't allowed to or shouldn't punish the slave if he critically dissapoints his master. But not every order that isn't executed literaly is worth a public humiliation with brutal troture. Incest - The relationship between Lira and Narin will be a major part of the game, so the desicion for you to either let things happen or prevent it will have an impact on the endings. Rape - It won't be a game where you get raped over and over again. But there will be rape if you lose a battle. So if you want to avoid rape, you should be able to do it. Guro - I think a bit blood on a body can make a picture more intense, but it's not good to make it the point of a picture. Things like this (poor Riven) are nothing that I'd draw, regardless the gender of the charakter. During my search for referencematerial I found lots of these pictures, many of them just a bit bloody with small wounds, but some were quite cruel, dismembered and multilated bodies covered by blood. I everytime felt quilty just for finding them. But the fight on the Cult won't be won without some force. So bloody: yes. Guro: no. Cum / Bukkake - A thing I personaly like, so there will be both ingame. Though bukkake will be quite rare to make it something special, there will be a moneyshot on / inside the female after each sex scene. Golden shower / #2 - The golden shower is both a request and a tribute to a specific member of LL, so at some point this will be integrated to the game. But #2 won't be touched. Literally. Futa / Dickgirl - Though this would enhance many entcounters and erotic scenes (including an orgy), it's not certain that this will be included to the game. Lira as a hermaphrodite definitely won't be included, not even as a (bad) end, but Thessa could turn out to be one. On top of that some ritual acts in the Cult that include futa (alá Bible Black).
windpl Posted April 26, 2013 Posted April 26, 2013 Good luck mate, I work on few games and several mods myself but I grow: Too bored or Too Hyperactive or Not aroused enough or Aroused to much or I lack of ideas or I'm overburdened by ideas lol, and I can't finish anything. So good luck
Thulas Posted April 26, 2013 Author Posted April 26, 2013 Well, I somehow knew that this would be the first thing someone would throw at me, but still thanks, I quess . There are a few ways how I gonna bring myself to working at it, the pressure of an evil community is one of them, that's why I created a topic for this in the early stages of development. The thrill of writing, drawing and being a bit creative gives a good moraleboost, too. And the problem of being too aroused is solved easily by a picture of our Bundeskanzlerin Angela Merkel trying to smile. She could kill every last peace of arousal that way. And since my day'd be ruined that way I also just could keep on working on this project;)
AwfulArchdemon Posted May 7, 2013 Posted May 7, 2013 Are you actually drawing this all yourself? Animating from scratch? I've seen the RPG Maker, but it looked too cheesy to use (outdated graphics. I'm all about graphics), and it looked like nudity was out of the question. Maybe I was wrong. And hey, good luck drawing those hands! ps. Light blue looks better than the darker blue. Way easier to read. Thanks.
Thulas Posted May 7, 2013 Author Posted May 7, 2013 ps. Light blue looks better than the darker blue. Way easier to read. Thanks. No problem, dude outdated graphics When the game is more advanced I will try to update the tilesets and the characters, but for now, this must be enough: Looks a bit artifical, better change that as soon as possible. Are you actually drawing this all yourself? Animating from scratch? Yes and no. I had a more simple solution in mind, atleast for now. To keep it a bit easier the sexual scenes will occur as varying pictures together with text. If I remember correctly Village of Nightmare did it quite similar, probably I should take a look at it again. Unfortunatly for me the game is already at the point where I planned to create the first sexual entcounter, but since there are no pictures yet, I have to interimly use others to be able continuing the prolog.
GodSmack Posted May 8, 2013 Posted May 8, 2013 Oh i havent played a good hentai rpg for awhile, i wish you luck as i am also working on a game, (not hentai tho lol)
Thulas Posted May 10, 2013 Author Posted May 10, 2013 I'm working hard to please my own perfectionism and to create a good game for LL, but there allways keeps the reallife popping up and preventing me to work. Well, even if it doesn't progresses as I wished it would. But of course I am not willed to let it down eather
CHAOS30 Posted May 10, 2013 Posted May 10, 2013 Good luck and I hope for a good game but I think RTL is sometimes better then Angi
sonaz Posted May 10, 2013 Posted May 10, 2013 I would love to give it a try and even provide any bug reports to you when I find them. Thanks for working on this, looks really interesting.
Thulas Posted May 11, 2013 Author Posted May 11, 2013 I'll try to fix the bug and rewrite a certain scene and upload the file tomorrow, so be prepared to send me a detailed report then. But please keep your expectations low, it's still only the alpha version of the prolog. Many things are missing, aren't corrected yet or may be a bit dull.
sonaz Posted May 12, 2013 Posted May 12, 2013 I'll try to fix the bug and rewrite a certain scene and upload the file tomorrow, so be prepared to send me a detailed report then. But please keep your expectations low, it's still only the alpha version of the prolog. Many things are missing, aren't corrected yet or may be a bit dull. Hey Thulas, Looks interesting. I can't wait to see more. I can correct any grammar/spelling mistakes if you have some sort of script. If you don't, I can go through each of the dialogue sequences and provide feedback to you here, let me know what you prefer.
dmen77 Posted May 13, 2013 Posted May 13, 2013 I will agree that it is a good start and setup of the characters. I would also like to help with grammatical and spelling errors.
Thulas Posted May 13, 2013 Author Posted May 13, 2013 Hey Thulas, Looks interesting. I can't wait to see more. I can correct any grammar/spelling mistakes if you have some sort of script. If you don't, I can go through each of the dialogue sequences and provide feedback to you here, let me know what you prefer. The scripts that I am going to use are already finished ones, there shouldn't be any mistakes in them. Atleast for now I don't need more, but not sure how it will be in the future. So for now, checking the dialogues and feedback are enough. I will agree that it is a good start and setup of the characters. I would also like to help with grammatical and spelling errors. I think Lira turned out to be a bit too bossy; she should be more like a mother than a leader, but I quess I'll fix that attitude when they are in the mecernary-guild (which will be in the next update, since Tevon is half way created now). Feel free to take a deeper look on grammar and spelling and note every mistake. That's a mention in the credits worth for me I need up to 40 grave inscriptions like "He missed his wife, but she hit his hearth. Literaly." or maybe some actual funny ones. The famous last word thread probably will have some, but I apreciate any good ones you post here or send me via pm.
AwfulArchdemon Posted May 13, 2013 Posted May 13, 2013 Hey Thulas, Looks interesting. I can't wait to see more. I can correct any grammar/spelling mistakes if you have some sort of script. If you don't, I can go through each of the dialogue sequences and provide feedback to you here, let me know what you prefer. The scripts that I am going to use are already finished ones, there shouldn't be any mistakes in them. Atleast for now I don't need more, but not sure how it will be in the future. So for now, checking the dialogues and feedback are enough. I will agree that it is a good start and setup of the characters. I would also like to help with grammatical and spelling errors. I think Lira turned out to be a bit too bossy; she should be more like a mother than a leader, but I quess I'll fix that attitude when they are in the mecernary-guild (which will be in the next update, since Tevon is half way created now). Feel free to take a deeper look on grammar and spelling and note every mistake. That's a mention in the credits worth for me I need up to 40 grave inscriptions like "He missed his wife, but she hit his hearth. Literaly." or maybe some actual funny ones. The famous last word thread probably will have some, but I apreciate any good ones you post here or send me via pm. Atleast=At least quess=guess apreciate=appreciate Literaly=Literally lol You'll be speaking perfect English before you even finish this game!
Thulas Posted May 14, 2013 Author Posted May 14, 2013 This makes me feel like I am the child again and you all are my English teachers Oh, and I have something for you, too: This is what the style will look like. But you now will think: "Whaaat, but Thulas, this looks like shit, I've seen better! And where the hell is her face? Or her ladyparts?" Well, fuck you too, ungrateful unknown member. As you see my style still isn't the best, so I have to find the right way between quality and time consuming work. Every character with a bust will have three layers: 1.: Basic layer (like this one) that defines the characters bodyform and pose 2.: Clothing layer with eventually added nudeparts 3.: Face layer for different expressions All in all this should lead to a better game experience.
dmen77 Posted May 14, 2013 Posted May 14, 2013 Well, it doesn't look bad. The way it looks to be set up, you only need to do a palette swap and have a completely different character. Minimum effort for maximum efficiency, good job.
AwfulArchdemon Posted May 15, 2013 Posted May 15, 2013 Quick tip: might want to put the name of your game in your tags lol. It would sure make Cult of Karleen easier to Google. Everyone's looking forward to this game, so it may blow up into a big-ass project, with a full team of helpers! If you kick enough ass, you could even upload it to dlsite! (no pressure)
Thulas Posted May 15, 2013 Author Posted May 15, 2013 Quick tip: might want to put the name of your game in your tags lol. It would sure make Cult of Karleen easier to Google. Everyone's looking forward to this game, so it may blow up into a big-ass project, with a full team of helpers! If you kick enough ass, you could even upload it to dlsite! (no pressure) I'm not really sure if I want that. Of course I could kick ass (bring me my sandwich already, you scum!) and a few more helpers (thanks to dmen77 btw.) wouldn't hurt, but this was intended as a LL exclusive ff2p (free faps to play). Time may change things though. Oh, and done, btw., I added the tag.
cobme Posted May 18, 2013 Posted May 18, 2013 Hey Thulas ! I am here to give feedback like the guildmaster instructed me ! The game looks great so far, I really like the dialogue and I'm already in love with Lira... I can't wait to so more , so best of luck, and I'll be here to support!
AwfulArchdemon Posted May 20, 2013 Posted May 20, 2013 Spell Checker here! Lira and her younger brother Narin are wandering mercenaries since their parrents died during a raid of bandits on their village. To get some coins for shelter and food they do simple tasks for people they meet on their travels who need a trained swordsarm. Well, atleast one of them does the work while the other one keeps getting both of them into trouble. But Lira doesn't mind to help her little brother because she promised her mother to do so. And mostly because it's fun for her to see the stupid situations he gets himself stuck even with his "superiority". Narin has the rare gift of magical powers and he is pretty good for his young age, which made Lira quite jeallous. But atleast she has her skills with the naginata and the right of the older sibling. They still are family after all, not rivals, so all in all they get along well. Their journey leads them to a small town called Tevon, a place where many wandering mercenaries come along. Actually many enough that there could a mercernary-guild be established. There also is a temple of Karleen, the godess of mankind, which is quite common, because many beleave in Karleen in a way, and there are many ways to beleave in her. Many do, but Lira and Narin don't. "Better put your trust into a good iron or spell rather than in a statue". That's what their father said, and this is what both of them do. Religion or not, what they need is more gold to buy new equiptment, to rest in thelocal inn and simply to enjoy life, so they decide to stay a while, do some jobs and have some fun. And then Narin does what he can do best. While his sister was taking one drink after another and getting offended by bad pickup lines he goes windowshopping. He meets two lovley girls and tries to impress them. As they start loosing interest in him he uses his secret weapon: he summons a flamespirit and lets it dance in the air. A great show for two girls that never saw a mage yet. Unfortunatly for him he gets the attention of the local cult of Karleen, too. But this cult is not like most other cults of Karleen: they are less a group of religeous people than a bunch ofmighthungry zealots who want to get full control over the town. And the power within this new and unknown mage would fit perfectly to their plans. It doesn't mather to them if he'll help them willingly or if they have to rip the magic out of his veins; they simply want to get it. Of course Narin refuses their "offer" to join the cult, and this is where the problems begin. The influence of the cult in the town is quite big already, so Lira and Narin soon can't even sleep in the inn without beeing threatened by it. A new and safe place to stay is needed and friends are rare, everyone could be an enemy now. Running won't help, the cult would follow them. Fight is the only option. Wipe out the cult, eliminating all its influence on Tevon, what ever bloody or dirty things they'd need to do. But both are sure that they will get their peace again. And a huge load of coins. = parrents=parents swordsarm=? swordsman? strongarm? atleast=at least stuck even=stuck, even jeallous=jealous beleave=believe thelocal=the local religeous=religious ofmighthungry=of might-hungry to=into mather=matter AwfulArchdemon Edit: Woohoo! I graduated to Senior Member today! Where's my robe and cap? It's my 1 year anniversary! (throws confetti and blows a horn...da...da da DAAAAA!!!)
Thulas Posted May 21, 2013 Author Posted May 21, 2013 Thanks, AwefulArchdemon. The story will be edited soon, because I changed some things during the creation, so you are allowed to do this again. Over and over again.
AwfulArchdemon Posted May 21, 2013 Posted May 21, 2013 Thanks, AwefulArchdemon. The story will be edited soon, because I changed some things during the creation, so you are allowed to do this again. Over and over again. HEY! Don't spell MY name wrong! Come on...thought we were friends (sniff)... But yeah, I got you in spell check easy, but if I can be easily taught how to animate, then we could always add that stuff to your game as "cinematic scenes", which are my icing on the cake. It's why Dragon Age (and Mass Effect) is my favorite game!I have Photoshop, and I have experimented with the Sims (modding), and I'll most certainly learn anything that's taught to me quickly, so let's kick it up a notch! BAM!!!!
Thulas Posted May 21, 2013 Author Posted May 21, 2013 Sorry for the misspelling, it's an old mistake I make since school; I know that there is no E in "awful", still I keep adding it there accidently. There is an option to add movies in the game, but I need know which file type it needs. But teaching you how to animate is not possible for me. And before I think about any animation I want to finish the character sheets with different clothes and facial expressions first. You probably already noticed that some scenes are are written as "cinematic scenes" where you can't do much but watching and pressing the dialog away. But this isn't what you had in mind, I quess.
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