A very coherent way of story telling, easy to get into and to follow up. I like it. Very good atmosphere!

Well, as usual in Sims based works the facial expressions are sometimes somewhat inaccurate, and that episode was rather short. That being said, graphically and scenario-wise it's of the same quality than the previous one, so awaiting to see where this'll go. ?

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Well, as usual in Sims based works the facial expressions are sometimes somewhat inaccurate, and that episode was rather short. That being said, graphically and scenario-wise it's of the same quality than the previous one, so awaiting to see where this'll go. ?

Thank you a lot for your feedback.
I chose this length because I'm trying to be consistent (i try to post every week if possible).
For the facial expression and the staging, i try to push the game to its limits. i know its not perfect, but its very interresting at the same time i think.

What are you using to put this all together? Photoshop?

And, 10 pages do go by quick, but you seem to be putting them out regularly so that's probably fine. However, have you considered 20 pages?

43 minutes ago, SeymourM said:

What are you using to put this all together? Photoshop?

And, 10 pages do go by quick, but you seem to be putting them out regularly so that's probably fine. However, have you considered 20 pages?

First, thank your for your comments and your interest.

Yes i use photoshop. I began this to learn how to photoshop basically. The only thing i dont like and i will probably change are the buble i use, they are the inbuilt buble, and they are not great imo.

I do 10 pages (12 for the last one) because of lot of thing :

- The way i write : for me, 1 chapter = 1 event/set up and 1 page = 1 action. A dialogue last 1 page, never more (except i have no choice). I do this to make the reading and the story dynamic.

- I don't want to discourage people from reading and discovering the other chapters if they liked it.

- I am rigorous, and i like to have the same amount of page everytime. in the same idea, i put a lot of work in every page, how to set up the page, what screen i choose (i do a LOT of screen, there is sometime 20 screen for the same scene with small difference).

- Like I already said to someone else, i want to post regurarly.

Im not close to do more pages sometime, i will do if its needed for a specific chapter where 10 pages is not enough ^^

Have you checked out Comic Life 3?

At the start, i already check for that kind of app, but i didnt want to buy something and i already have a license of photoshop, so let's use it ^^

And at least, i have a lot of freedom to do whatever i want, and its easy when you set up things correctly.

keep it up, love this