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Pilgrimage (Mass Effect story) part 2

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Encon4

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Shana woke up after several Hours since the kidnapp, she looked around and found herself in a closed empty room with no windows, she still tied so there's nothing she could do. But a few minutes later one Turian guard opened the door and grabbed her firmly, saying:"Lets go the Boss wants to see you!"
Shana walked along with the guard and saw her surroundings and the place doesn't look like the Citadel, is quite dirty, then she asked the Guard where she is, The guard said:" You are in Omega Station, in the Blue Suns secondary HQ, if you are wandering that too!"


Shana Heard about the Blue Suns, nasty mercenaries that do dirty jobs for money, but make her wonder why she has been picked...
Few minutes later, they arrived to a room where a Batarian Commander lives, the Guard forcelly put Shana on her knees in front of the commander: "So this is the Rich Quarian girl that my boys caught, but I don't believe that you are inherently rich, I bet you just stole that money, but either way, you're still valuable, your family might pay us for your release..."
Suddenly, Shana started to feel the shakes, she didn't know if she was nervous with the situation of is the pill finally doing his effect, until she started shaking violently, and started sweat a lot, fell flat on the floor, puking inside the mask where she had trouble breathing.


The Blue Suns were caught by suprise her sudden sickness, the Turian guard forcelly removed her mask when he sensed that she was suffocating.
Cmd Batarian: "Damn you guys, was the syringe contaminated?? you know that if she dies, she will lose a lot of value! But still... Take her away, lock her up and strip her suit since it has tecnology that might fetch a good price in the black market quickly, the same with her omnitool. Don't kill her by shooting, her body must be intact to exchange to the Flotilla for more value, let the sickness do the job."


The Guards Grabbed her and dragged to the same room she was locked, they untied her to strip her naked and left her on the cold floor to die.
Shana still shaking, felt the whole body burning and sweating, she started to have diarreha, puking more, terrible headaches, everything in her body felt unbearable, until she couldn't take it and pass out.


Several Hours has passed and she finally woke up, her body doesn't shake much probably the lack of strength to do so, she felt hot and the head still aching, she looked at her nude body and saw that she lost some weight, also her lower body is covered in feces from diarreha, she felt so dehidrated and hungry, she went in four legs with great effort to the door, and knocked it while tried to scream, but she felt so weak and her throat is dry, she barelly could talk.


The Turian guard outside heard the knock and opened the door, saying:"still alive?? what do you want?"
Shana:"Please....Water...I....Water..." Turian Guard:" Sorry, but we know that you're going to die, it's a waste giving water, specially in this Station!"
Shana: Please... I do... What... you want...just...some...water..." Turian Guard: "well... if you put it that way... there's something you can do" he started unzip his pants "I really need to take a piss, but a can't abandon my post  for like 2 more hours, so you will drink it while I get relieved."


Shana felt disgusted by his request, but she was desperate to hidrate herself, she nodded, and opened wide her mouth waiting for it.
The turian inserted his penis in her mouth and started relieving, while she started drinking like it tasted life, she don't want to waste a single drop. While it wasn't enough to hidrate her she felt that she can survive for a while longer, but she was hungry, she hasn't eat anything for almost 4 days, she dared for another request.


Shana: "I need something... to eat, I haven't eaten... in several days" Turian: well.. since you drinked my piss with satisfaction, I'll give you the especial Meal. The nutritional paste."
The Turian inserted his penis in her mouth again but this time he started rubbing in and out, something that Shana never done before, but she was so weak that she let him grab her head and moving her like a doll. He started deep-throating in a vigorous way, while she felt shoking, until He cummed a load worth of 2 months waiting to be released.


Turian: "there's your meal, hope you're happy as I am! Wait until the others hear about this... They will laugh and probably they will come here giving the same treatment." Shana started regretting for asking for help but knew that she didn't have other choice, now she might have to drink others guards piss and cum, and the sickness makes the situation even worse that she's forced to be willing to take everything she need to keep the body hidrated and fed.


2 Hours has passed and she started to get hungry and thirsty again, it seems that the effect of the pill consumes a lot of energy and water from the body, no wonder she lost weight so fast, but a group of guards appeared, both humans and turians, they heard from their companion how he treated her and they wanted to give the same thing.
Human guard: "come here and drink up my "beer", ha ha." Shana without question opened her mouth waiting for his piss, while a Turian grabbed her butt: "you have a dirty ass, nothing like a golden shower to fix it, he he!"


The guards waited their turn to take a piss, in the end Shana must have drinked almost a liter of piss, then the guards started masturbating and ejaculating into a bowl mixed with human and Turian cum, and gave for her to drink, She grabbed the bowl, hoping that she won't die because of nondextro DNA from the humans and started to drink it slowly to the last drop while one of the Guard started taping the moment to share on the Omega Network, with the title "filfhy nude Quarian bitch loves to drink Cum".


Even after the humiliation, she felt that her body was fully hidrated and fed, the next day she is recovering and getting better, the headache is less intense, the body temperature lowered a bit, she doesn't shake much, she doesn't feel like puking although the treatment she received yesterday made her wish to puke, but she knows that she might have to do it again until shes fully recovered, but she suprised that she's doing fine without the enviromental suit.


Days has passed with the same routine, resting and getting humiliated to get what the body needs, Until the Batarian Cmd, went to her room see if she died, but to his suprise she's alive and with better health.
Suspecting that how a Quarian that is so weak against diseases, survived with poor conditions and all,  he questioned her: "Who are you really, because you can't be a quarian, there's no way you could survive that!" Shana Said: "I'm Shana'rael vas Ideema, a genuine Quarian!"


The CmD found it hard to believe, he started to think that she is a Quarian clone, modified to resist diseases, that she got nothing related with the Flotilla, but he saw an opportunity to make money with her.
Cmd Batarian: "Well... since you survived I think you have some value after all... I'm gonna relocate you to the other section of the Station." the Batarian called the guards and gave them instructions.


The guard grabbed her and carried her on his lap while the other went to get transport, Shana while fully recovered her muscles are atrofiated, she couldn't stand on her own. After getting a cab, the guards put her on the backseat and travelled to the most populated area of Omega, through the window, she saw all kinds of people, the place is so filthy and shady for her.
They reached into a place controlled by the Blue Suns, that looks like an narrow alley with a guarded container. The Guard carried her again, she covered her face because she is naked while they were crossing the street full of people, they went towards the container guarded around five Blue Suns Guards.


When they opened the container, Shana saw that there is an old mattress dirty with stains of unkowned fluids, empty bowls and a butcket for necessities. In the dark corner, there's a naked Asari facing the corner while curled, crying quietly, she looks very young, like she hasn't reach her first century yet and she had signs on her arm like stings of syringes. The guard Placed Shana on the mattress, saying that from now on, she will whore herself for the Blue Suns income.


Shana didn't know what he meant while a human client already entered to use her, she tried to protest, but being weak she couldn't do anything to stop him, as he garbbed her butt and forcelly put her in four leg, and started penetrate her vagina. She started bleeding for her first penetration, Shana started crying from pain, but perhaps more for feeling defiled by a complete stranger, she hoped that her first time would be special.


While Shana is being fucked, a batarian client appeared and went for the Asari that was crying, when she was grabbed she cried loud calling for her mother to help her, the Batarian dragged her to the mattress where Shana was lying with the human. Both the girls were being fucked next to each other, both clients have finished by ejaculated inside the females, as they have finished and payed to the Blue Sun Pimp 15 credits each, more clients appeared.


It been like this all day, being fucked by several random aliens in a dirty container, Shana thinks that she fucked at least 30 clients, she felt distressed and sore, it's hard to believe that she found herself in prostitution.
In the end of the day, the guards gave them some water and scraps of food, but not enough to keep them properly fed, it seems that she will have to drink cum again every chance she can get while whoring, just to satisfy her hunger. Shana stared at the Asari that she is curled looking down to the bowl, she asked for her name, but to her suprise, the Asari said: "My name is Cumbucket... I don't remember my real name... I don't know how much time ive been here... locked all day and night... getting screwed over and over again, by mean men.
Shana asked how she got there, and she said: "I ran away from my mother... over some... Stupid discussion, I think... at that time I was 38 years old... or it was 36?... I got here... I don't know why and how.... I just want my mommy..."


The Asari looks mentally broken, it seems that they drug her, to keep her like that. But Shana started to miss her home and the Tutor, the only family she had since she was a child after her parents were killed by the Geth, and she started to crying and regretting everything about the Pilgrimage.
At night time, they shared the mattress that is stained with fresh fluids, but the floor is cold, all stinky and even more dirty to lying on it. They hugged to each other since they don't have a blanket to keep themselves warm but also to confort themselves with friendly contact that has been absent, specially for the Asari, they felt asleep together, tired from crying and fucking all day.


It seems that's going to be Shana's life from now on, everyday fucking with aliens for the Blue Suns income, in a very degradated enviromment, She wished that the sickness should haved killed her, if she knew that her life would be like this, but now she doesn't get sick at all, like her body is immune to anything.
But she's hoping that some miracle will happen and will take her out of there, but only the time will tell.

 

 

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I want opinions, should I keep the way the story is going? Like the dirtiness, humilation, degradation and so on.

Should I make it less extreme?... or even more extreme?

 

I don't know, I got a lot of crazy ideas and I don't want to upset some people.

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On 3/4/2019 at 9:48 PM, Encon4 said:

I want opinions, should I keep the way the story is going? Like the dirtiness, humilation, degradation and so on.

Should I make it less extreme?... or even more extreme?

 

I don't know, I got a lot of crazy ideas and I don't want to upset some people.

LL is made to share fantasies, and so suit yourself sharing what'd you'd want. That being said :

  • You're already concluding on a rather depressing feel, and the more extreme it gets the less likely it is to please a majority or readers.
  • More than extreme or not, what really matters IMO is the story's quality. Adult content is only one of the components of a good mature story, but not its base. To take an example, Game of Thrones/The throne of Iron is an excellent fiction which features mature and sexual content, but it is outstanding because of the qualities of the story itself, sex being only one of its elements.

 

So I'd say focus yourself on the story's quality : improve the narrative phases, the ambiance, the scenario & plot, ultimately, even if the sex scenes (extreme or not) are less frequent, that'll only make them more meaningful. ?

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14 hours ago, Tirloque said:

LL is made to share fantasies, and so suit yourself sharing what'd you'd want. That being said :

  • You're already concluding on a rather depressing feel, and the more extreme it gets the less likely it is to please a majority or readers.
  • More than extreme or not, what really matters IMO is the story's quality. Adult content is only one of the components of a good mature story, but not its base. To take an example, Game of Thrones/The throne of Iron is an excellent fiction which features mature and sexual content, but it is outstanding because of the qualities of the story itself, sex being only one of its elements.

 

So I'd say focus yourself on the story's quality : improve the narrative phases, the ambiance, the scenario & plot, ultimately, even if the sex scenes (extreme or not) are less frequent, that'll only make them more meaningful. ?

thanks for the constructive critic, its a helpful feedback, and you right,

it's becoming a bit extreme and I planned to keep it like, that but I wasn't sure if was good for the story and the main character itself, first I tried to create situations for the Main Character to endure and become stronger, but somehow it drifted a bit away from my intention.

 

the next part that I plan will stay like that at the beginning but it will get better, for I have some ideas to equilibrate more.

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