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Star Wars: Renna I


BoLtStEr2002

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Somewhere in the coldest regions of Bantooine

 

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Renna: (So this is where you've been hiding, Ki?)

 

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Renna: (I never expected the cold really. But anything to get to our 'good' mentor).

 

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 Ki: Master, I don't know what to do. Something is wrong and I know it.

???: Trust your intuition. Go, if 'you' feel something is wrong there usually is.

 

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Ki: Yes master. But how will I beat the darkness? Master?

 

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Renna: (Naive. I shouldn't have expected her to change. Always seeking guidance in her betters. It's sad really).

 

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Ki: Who are you? Wait Renna? I can feel the darkness in you.

 

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Ki: It's more than darkness. Hate, fear and anger. Have you come to kill me?

 

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Renna: Maybe not. If you join me, we could make our own justice...and you'd be spared.

 

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Renna: C'mon Ki? I know you, even you didn't agree with some of the Jedi beliefs.

 

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Ki: And what would you have me do? Join you?! Tear apart everything I know?

 

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Renna: You know it's more complicated than that!

 

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Renna: Abandoning the Jedi doesn't make you Sith.

 

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Ki: No, but it has turned you into one. The very thing you swore to destroy. I'll never side with you or your kind

 

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Renna: Then I'm sorry for what I'm going to have to do.

 

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Renna: I'll give you another chance. Just take it, please.

 

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Renna: I suppose your silence is refusal then? I'm sorry Ki.

 

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Ki: I'm only sorry for you, Renna.

 

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Ki: But I can't let you take anymore lives!

 

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Renna: Dammit!

 

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Renna: Aargh!

 

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Ki: Give up! It's never too late to turn back!

 

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Renna: You lie! You'd kill me the moment I gave up!

 

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Ki: No whichever dark lord has twisted your mind has lied to you!

 

Renna: And the Jedi haven't?!

 

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Ki: Renna, please...just come back to the light. Right your wrongs, just swallow your pride!

 

Renna: Never.

 

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Renna: (Dammit I can't hold this lock!) 

 

Ki: You always did try to counter the defensive form with the same thing. It never worked. I suppose the darkness hasn't changed everything about you.

 

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Ki: Yargh!

 

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Renna: Woah!

 

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Renna: Fine, wanna play like that? Lets play. I've been meaning to get rid of this cloak for a while anyway.

 

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Renna: Now I get to try out my favourite trick.

 

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Ki: You won't win, no matter what tricks you bring out!

 

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Renna: Oh really?

 

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Renna: Perhaps you haven't experienced this yet!

 

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Renna: You can't hold against this forever now, can you?!

 

Ki: Stop Renna! Please!

 

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Ki: Aarghh!

 

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Renna: Woah!

 

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Ki: I'm sorry Renna, you're too far gone now.

 

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Renna: Perhaps, but at least I'm still better than you. Not like what you used to say.

 

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Renna: Yargh!

 

Ki: Aahh!

 

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Ki: Please no!

 

Renna: It's too late for begging now.

 

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Renna: Any last requests?

 

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Ki: Can I at least kneel?

 

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Renna: You may.

 

Ki: Thank you, Renna.

 

Renna: I always forget how well made your lightsaber was. Not like my first one. It still feels like it did years ago.

 

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Ki: Just turn back. I know you're too far gone to spare me, but there's always an opportunity to turn back.

 

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Renna: Not for me there isn't. You wouldn't understand it Ki. I'll try to make this quick.

 

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Renna: I'm sorry.

 

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Renna: ...

 

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Renna: I'll be there soon.

 

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Renna: Yes my lord.

 

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Lord Algus: About time my apprentice.

 

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Renna: I'm sorry master, the ship is bigger than it looks.

 

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Lord Algus: Come here. You feel guilt don't you?

 

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Renna: ...

 

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Lord Algus: I was watching. You were pathetic. Fulfilling last wishes? Really? She could've killed you with a simple trick and you fell for it!

 

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Renna: I don't think you understand master! She was somebody I grew up with and you sent me to kill her!

 

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Lord Algus: Perhaps my master was right about an apprentice. Far too much trouble.

 

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Renna: Get rid of me then!

 

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Lord Algus: You know I can't do that.

 

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Lord Algus: You know far too much.

 

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Renna: You can't even make good on threats anymore. So don't lecture me about giving people a final right.

 

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Lord Algus: Fine, but since you've done that you've shown a weakness. Something that will be exploited. You have to do what many before us have done. Use fear.

 

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Lord Algus: And what's scarier than a masked and seemingly inhuman opponent?

 

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Lord Algus: Play with their minds. Make them think the worst thing possible. They can't see through the mask and they will imagine the worst. I'll send you an assignment tomorrow. Make sure you don't make anymore mistakes.

 

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Renna: Yes master...

 

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Renna: {Sigh}

 

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As a concept this was new and unique. I hope you enjoyed the read and any feedback is appreciated. This is going to be a challenge for me, not only do I have to find environments and armours, but since I have little space on my drive where Skyrim is located I'm finding it difficult to create space for it and I don't want to switch Skyrim to my other drive in case it ruins my game and the mods I have. Anyway, thanks for reading and I'll stop explaining my problems to all of you.

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I have been waiting for this chapter ^_^ nice work :) 
Reminds me my old SWKoTOR and SWTOR playthrough. :nostalgic tear:
I once thought about creating a chapter on a similar subject. I am glad that you have succeeded in this, 'cause unfortunately assets amd resources in Sky is limited on that theme
=( 
Didn't you think to add some visual effects from the pitch of swords? To make it more like SW?

 

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Spoiler

 

 

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5 minutes ago, Crw said:

Reminds me my old SWKoTOR and SWTOR playthrough. :nostalgic tear:

Actually that was the kind of feeling I was going for  : )

 

6 minutes ago, Crw said:

Didn't you think to add some visual effects from the pitch of swords? To make it more like SW?

I'm bad at graphic design and things. If you showed me what you mean I might be able to, but if it's what I think you mean I didn't do it so it didn't look tacky

 

4 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

Darth Sanguine looks good :D 

Lmao xD

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29 minutes ago, BoLtStEr2002 said:

If you showed me what you mean I might be able to, but if it's what I think you mean I didn't do it so it didn't look tacky

Well, something like this. I'm bad at this too.

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bolt-jedi.jpg

But as far as I know, you tried to use paint.net once and it’s more than enough for that. ^_^
UPD: Well, this is not the best example, but something like that. This is certainly better:
 

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Star-Wars-Episode-8.jpg

 
updx2: anyway, just a suggestion ^_^ You did a good job :)

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5 minutes ago, Crw said:

Well, something like this. I'm bad at this too.

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bolt-jedi.jpg

But as far as I know, you tried to use paint.net once and it’s more than enough for that. ^_^
UPD: Well, this is not the best example, but something like that. This is certainly better:
 

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Star-Wars-Episode-8.jpg

 

Oh okay, sorry the wording was a little strange to me, sorry, I can try that sure! Might also swap the textures on the lightsaber mod too to get better looking blades.

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5 minutes ago, BoLtStEr2002 said:

Oh okay, sorry the wording was a little strange to me, sorry

Oops, sorry for this. I just don't know how to describe a process when one light saber hits another, and they doing like *bzzz* :D

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OMG OMG OMG BEST CHAPTER EVER!!!!

 

WHAT MODS DID YOU USE?

 

OMG THE SPACE SHIP AND THE OUTFITS I MUST KNOW

 

I take it that the Master at the end is a Pure Sith?

 

OMG I WANT TO DO A STAR WARS CHAPTER NOW, OMG I MUST

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Also Renna had full Sith eyes, meaning she us full embraced into the Dark-Side and had no way of returning.

 

Her eyes would turn back to normal were she not using the Dark-Side

 

Sorry I'm a nerd!

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20 minutes ago, Agent Tex said:

Also Renna had full Sith eyes, meaning she us full embraced into the Dark-Side and had no way of returning.

 

Her eyes would turn back to normal were she not using the Dark-Side

 

Sorry I'm a nerd!

I'm glad you picked up on that!

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33 minutes ago, Agent Tex said:

OMG OMG OMG BEST CHAPTER EVER!!!!

 

WHAT MODS DID YOU USE?

 

OMG THE SPACE SHIP AND THE OUTFITS I MUST KNOW

 

I take it that the Master at the end is a Pure Sith?

That's frantic. I use a lot of mods. For the eyes I used the elegant beauty eyes remastered. Came out like a week ago I think.
Ki's outfit is from the Apaachi divine elegance store
Renna's outfit is Ryder's dragonfly robe
Algus is Kynreeve on the nexus
For lightsabers I use Unique magicka sabers (as this includes character sabers)
The ship is Terra Nova on modtype 
 

 

36 minutes ago, Agent Tex said:

OMG I WANT TO DO A STAR WARS CHAPTER NOW, OMG I MUST

What have I done?!   

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1 hour ago, BoLtStEr2002 said:

That's frantic. I use a lot of mods. For the eyes I used the elegant beauty eyes remastered. Came out like a week ago I think.
Ki's outfit is from the Apaachi divine elegance store
Renna's outfit is Ryder's dragonfly robe
Algus is Kynreeve on the nexus
For lightsabers I use Unique magicka sabers (as this includes character sabers)
The ship is Terra Nova on modtype 
 

DOWNLOADING....

1 hour ago, BoLtStEr2002 said:

What have I done?!   

I've always wanted to do a Star Wars themed chapter / story but found thta some of the mods lacked it.

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This was awesome, You did a great job separating anything remotely Skyrim from it.

It totally could have been Star Wars!! Even the armors!! Well done!!

Oh and the fight scenes, awesome choreography and camera positioning ?

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6 hours ago, Zitanna said:

This was realllllly good! Looking forward to more.

Thank you!

 

44 minutes ago, WANOBI12 said:

This was awesome, You did a great job separating anything remotely Skyrim from it.

It totally could have been Star Wars!! Even the armors!! Well done!!

Oh and the fight scenes, awesome choreography and camera positioning ?

Woah. Thanks!

 

7 hours ago, Agent Tex said:

DOWNLOADING....

I've always wanted to do a Star Wars themed chapter / story but found thta some of the mods lacked it.

Be careful with it, it's deceptively difficult, finding locations out in the wild is hard where there is a) No one and b) No sign of anything human. 

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Hmmm, so you had a story down your sleeve. And a Star Wars one, what's more ! It felt great reading it, nothing breaking the immersion too much, a fight well rendered (though Ki could've defended the lightning with her saber I think ?), a dramatic atmosphere and just what was needed of modded scenery. Good job, Bolster ! :D

 

Malicia : « That Renna girl just cut her friends' neck with a neon light ! That's very meany, yes ! :classic_angry: »

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7 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Hmmm, so you had a story down your sleeve. And a Star Wars one, what's more !

I had it planned for a while but was hesitant to upload it and then I said fuck it.

 

7 hours ago, Tirloque said:

 a fight well rendered (though Ki could've defended the lightning with her saber I think ?)

I think I could've shown that a bit better then. She did for a tiny bit of time.

 

7 hours ago, Tirloque said:

a dramatic atmosphere and just what was needed of modded scenery. Good job, Bolster ! :D

 

Malicia : « That Renna girl just cut her friends' neck with a neon light ! That's very meany, yes ! :classic_angry: »

Thanks! Now I just need to somehow get the next episode done ?

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18 hours ago, Agent Tex said:

OMG OMG OMG BEST CHAPTER EVER!!!!

 

WHAT MODS DID YOU USE?

 

OMG THE SPACE SHIP AND THE OUTFITS I MUST KNOW

 

I take it that the Master at the end is a Pure Sith?

 

OMG I WANT TO DO A STAR WARS CHAPTER NOW, OMG I MUST

 

18 hours ago, Agent Tex said:

Also Renna had full Sith eyes, meaning she us full embraced into the Dark-Side and had no way of returning.

 

Her eyes would turn back to normal were she not using the Dark-Side

 

Sorry I'm a nerd!

 

LOL Tex XDDD

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