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Lunar- Chapter 2- Mysterious visitors


BoLtStEr2002

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Near Dawnstar...

 

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Aayle: So is this where you think she is?

 

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Shira: Think? I know she's here.

 

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Shira: I'm willing to bet that's her there.

 

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Aayle: She doesn't look old enough to kill all those people in Dawnstar.

 

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Aayle: Well it's a good job they don't know what she looks like. We could probably masquerade her as a traveller for a while.

 

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Shira: You're considering sparing her?!

 

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Aayle: What was that shorty? I don't recall asking for your opinion or bitchiness.

 

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Shira: Fuck you.

 

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Aayle: I might let you do that later if you behave decide to behave. But really, she probably doesn't even remember a thing about last night.

 

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Shira: Oh and you'll let her get away with it too I assume?

 

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Aayle: Is that your bitchiness coming through again?

 

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Shira: Yeah, I was seeing how long you could put up with it really.

 

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Aayle: Oh of course you were. Now why don't you do something useful and make sure nobody followed us here?

 

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Shira: Are you trying to get rid of me that quickly?

 

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Aayle: Perhaps, anyway get going. I'll sort this girl out.

 

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Aayle:  Now lets get you into something warmer than your birthday suit, huh?

 

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Aayle: Well I hope you're gonna get up soon. I don't feel like staying here all night waiting for you to get up.

 

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An hour or so later...

 

Aayle: Any second now...

 

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Luna: Huh? What?

 

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Aayle: So little sleeping beauty has finally woke up? Do you remember what happened to you?

 

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Luna: What? No, I remember something. It was painful and it was under some overhang. Then I wake up here.

 

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Luna: Sorry, but what else do you want me to say?

 

Aayle: I don't know, just what you remember, like I said.

 

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Luna: Can you just tell me what's happening?

 

Aayle: I will, when you're not naked.

 

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Luna: Wait I'm what? I'm sorry I didn't realise-

 

Aayle: Don't worry, there's probably something for you to where in that chest over there.

 

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Luna: That's better. Now, are you going to answer any questions for me?

 

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Aayle: Sure. I'm Aayle and my friend Shira should be here any minute now.

 

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Luna: Nice to meet you then.

 

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Aayle: And speaking of Shira, here she is.

 

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Shira: She's awake?

 

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Shira: So what's her name then?

 

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Luna: I'm Luna.

 

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Aayle: That's an interesting name.

 

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Shira: Disturbingly fitting as well.

 

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Luna: Sorry, but what do you mean?

 

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Luna: I take it's a long story.

 

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Shira: Are we gonna tell her then?

 

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Aayle: No Shira. Not yet at least. She has barely gotten up.

 

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Aayle: Why don't we find somewhere to stay?  Here isn't exactly the best place to be and then we can explain what happened.

 

Later that evening...

 

Shira: I hope you know where we're going.

 

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Luna: What? I was just following you.

 

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Aayle: She meant me darling. And yes, I know where we're going.

 

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Luna: I think I remember this place.

 

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Aayle: Yeah the Hall of the Vigilant.

 

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Shira: Yeah and they'll probably kill you on sight Blue.

 

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Luna: Sorry but who are the Vigilant?

 

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Shira: C'mon to the door, Blue ain't gonna come near, we'll get comfortable and hopefully we won't be bothered. I have a few things that I need to explain to you.

 

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Thanks for reading. I know I've been gone a while and that this chapter wasn't extremely top quality or very interesting, but I'm finally sliding back into this again. So hopefully I'll have more chapters up soon enough.

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Tirloque

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Well it was a bit shorter than expected... but that also lowered the loading time, so there's a good side. I think you could do some screens where there are two characters speaking, that would lower the images amount per event (just like in a movie, there isn't always one close-up per line of dialogue). Anyway, dialogues were relatively crispy, and the veil is slowly lowering itself. So a pleasant read anyway. K5RIBNNq_o.gif

BoLtStEr2002

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8 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Well it was a bit shorter than expected... but that also lowered the loading time, so there's a good side. I think you could do some screens where there are two characters speaking, that would lower the images amount per event (just like in a movie, there isn't always one close-up per line of dialogue). Anyway, dialogues were relatively crispy, and the veil is slowly lowering itself. So a pleasant read anyway. K5RIBNNq_o.gif

This was more of something to put out. I was planning it for longer but I couldn't find the save with Luna on it so I'm gonna have to find that at some point.

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