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Side story. Isabel.


Crw

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Greetings, dear traveler?
 

I lost some of my Sis-comic's progress in my own unseasonedness. Well, it's not critical, but it makes me sad a bit.

Soooo, I decided to tell you about this strange girl that you already saw.

This is by the way many times faster than doing comics. But I do not really like it. 

Have a good mood and a wonderful week. ^_^

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I advise you to turn the music on before reading =* 

 


 

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From the first time we have failed. And it could not be otherwise. We did not know what we were up against. But we came back and became stronger.

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We were young... naive... stupid... We thought that we could change everything and get out of any situation. We did not even know then. Well ... I did not know.

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I did not tell them where this amulet came from, and they did not ask. They were just happy, then we have a means to defeat him, even if temporarily.

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And besides, what would I tell them? "Oh, you know, I read in one daedric book that there is such a daedric artifact as the Azura Star, but it's even better and Clavicus can lend us it."


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Good thing they did not ask questions.


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The plan was simple - they are fighting with him, and I'm doing a ritual. A mysterious artifact will do the rest.


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With each blow of their swords, He will lose his power. And I will seal it in this amulet.
The plan was simple...


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Bertron and Sinus will handle it. They survived it for the first time, they can also in the second. And we have no more options.
And now, we stood in front of these gates, once again. Unbroken, fearless ... probably foolish.

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I remember that Bertron turned around and shouted something to me, it was not necessary, I remembered what to do, we all remembered and knew.

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But we did not get any calmer from this.

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And I ran, ran to do what I do best - to conjure.

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I knew I had to pay for everything. Especially for such gifts, especially from Daedra.

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I thought it was worth it ... I thought that ... I thought a lot of things.

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The last thing I heard - their devastating leap in his direction. The clank of metal, the shrill cry.
But to me it all did not matter.

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I was no longer there.



 

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I did not understand where I got, how long I lay unconscious, but the contrast of feelings quickly brought me back to reality.
It was damp and cold, as in Skyrim's most terrible and darkest dungeons, but the heat of the candles at a distance seemed to burn my skin with the flames of hell.

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Through the darkness of the room two familiar silhouettes could be seen, but not trusting my eyes, I still wondered "who's there?".

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He mumbled something like "not a lot of Daedra accompanied by a dog and left the dusk.

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I wanted to start asking questions, but he foresaw, as if reading my thoughts, pulled me.
"Apparently I forgot to warn you, my gift to you, it is like a soul gem, only it needs to be locked, and locked from the inside."

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"But it turned out to be quite interesting, the uncontrollable power of a lascivious madman sealed in a small amulet, and you, in the middle of this chaos, oh, how I love that."
And in compensation for your future inconveniences, I'll ask you a riddle, the answer to which will be my advice to you
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"To survive in a pack of wolves - you need to become a wolf, but what would survive here?"

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Back then I did not understand what he meant.
I just started to go ahead. I do not know how much time has passed since that time. How many creatures met... How many I killed to survive...

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But every new battle, every killed creature ... It awakened in me something ... Made me move forward. It was interesting.
But later interest was replaced by desire, desire with thirst, thirst with irreversible hunger.

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I myself searched for them. I found and killed. With every beast killed, born of the power of this insane place - my own power grew.
With every enemy I killed, I became less and less human.

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Becoming one who can survive in such a place.

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Time passed.
Months? Years? I do not know. But this place has exhausted itself. My thirst for power and strength led me through the hordes of enemies.

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I killed them all. I took everything that belongs to them. I conquered this place. And its power is now mine.

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But this is not enough. I want to go outside. I want freedom. And I'll get out of here!

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Whatever it takes.

 

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As already said on the Discord, I really do like her.

I think she's your best looking character. Nice to get some insight in her origin and past. Nice job! 

 

Where did the speech bubbles go? ?

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37 minutes ago, Alter Native said:

As already said on the Discord, I really do like her.

I think she's your best looking character. Nice to get some insight in her origin and past. Nice job! 

 

Where did the speech bubbles go? ?

Thanks a lot Alter Native ^_^ I'm very pleased with her myself ?

They will come back stronger :D . Well, you can say that this is an experiment ^_^

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My impressions are mixed : at one end we've got that incredibly epic confrontation between individuals of great power, and a worthy opponent ; with great ambiance (the music adds to that feeling), great red colors, and good shots. And at another end, as soon as more than one character is speaking, it feels a pity there's no speech bubbles. I don't see why you wouldn't use your usual comic style for side stories in fact ; that would only make them feel greater. 

 

Anyway, nice backstory  ! I like how you finally explain the original function of the amulet, the "Clavicus" appearance, and the epic bossfight ambiance of the entry ! :D

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I did not tell them where this amulet came from, and they did not ask.

Malicia : « It's Rose's honey-honey amulet, uh. But it's probably better you wait to be alone with them to use it, 'cause it leaves men very tired and exhausted, you see ? :classic_angel: »

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24 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

My impressions are mixed : at one end we've got that incredibly epic confrontation between individuals of great power, and a worthy opponent ; with great ambiance (the music adds to that feeling), great red colors, and good shots. And at another end, as soon as more than one character is speaking, it feels a pity there's no speech bubbles. I don't see why you wouldn't use your usual comic style for side stories in fact ; that would only make them feel greater. 

 

Anyway, nice backstory  ! I like how you finally explain the original function of the amulet, the "Clavicus" appearance, and the epic bossfight ambiance of the entry ! :D


Thank you for such a detailed analysis and detailed feedback ^ _ ^  I'm very glad that you liked this ambiance :classic_wub:
As for speech bubbles I myself like it more when they are in a place :D . It looks nicer, I agree. The problem is that with their presence it is very difficult to express the thought of a character. And the more difficult the thought, the more space the bubble takes =(  
Well, failure is another kind of success. I'll think up something about this. Thank you very much ^_^


 

 

24 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « It's Rose's honey-honey amulet, uh. But it's probably better you wait to be alone with them to use it, 'cause it leaves men very tired and exhausted, you see ? :classic_angel: »

Isabel: « Oh, sweetheart, you have not yet seen what I did with Rosa in the next chapter. Hint - she liked it, yes. ?‍❤️‍? »

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1 hour ago, Crw said:

Thank you for such a detailed analysis and detailed feedback ^ _ ^  I'm very glad that you liked this ambiance :classic_wub:
As for speech bubbles I myself like it more when they are in a place :D . It looks nicer, I agree. The problem is that with their presence it is very difficult to express the thought of a character. And the more difficult the thought, the more space the bubble takes =(  
Well, failure is another kind of success. I'll think up something about this. Thank you very much ^_^

I couldn't have said better, mistakes are occasions to learn. Though it wasn't a failure.

About a character's thoughts, if it's the narrator you can still add narrator-like boxes, which are more suitable for extended writing. axrWsMKf_o.gif

1 hour ago, Crw said:

Isabel: « Oh, sweetheart (...) Hint - she liked it, yes. ?‍❤️‍? »

Malicia : « Smiley_ryoandr_HFR.gif! »

 

 

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1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

About a character's thoughts, if it's the narrator you can still add narrator-like boxes, which are more suitable for extended writing. axrWsMKf_o.gif

Yes, but then they occupy a significant part of the picture)
But this is not a problem, but rather a space for experiments. In anyway - thanks ^ _ ^

 

 

1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « Smiley_ryoandr_HFR.gif! »

I never understood the meaning of such muzzles :D I hope(think) it means yes.

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9 hours ago, Crw said:

Yes, but then they occupy a significant part of the picture)
But this is not a problem, but rather a space for experiments. In anyway - thanks ^ _ ^

True, but they have the advantage of not needing to be close to the speaker' mouth, so it overlaps a less important part of the image. I think the alternative is presenting them as subtitles, while keeping bubbles for the dialogues. Our lady of hats did so recently, in her common work with Resdayn.  axrWsMKf_o.gif

9 hours ago, Crw said:

I never understood the meaning of such muzzles :D I think it means yes.

It means that Malicia is shocked, which 'caused her to read Isabella's comment with widened eyes. ^^

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Isabel is very lovely and your screenshots are great. But, dialogue bubbles and comic style stories are your trade mark and you are doing excellent job. Miss to see your "old way" of the story posting.

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6 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

Isabel is very lovely and your screenshots are great. But, dialogue bubbles and comic style stories are your trade mark and you are doing excellent job. Miss to see your "old way" of the story posting.

Thank you wery much. Eva ^_^
I was totally convinced.  Now only old style, bubbles, frames and so on ^_^
Thank you ^_^

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