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Shea's Story-Act 3-1


BoLtStEr2002

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Somewhere near Winterhold...

 

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Shea: I hope Winterhold is close, I may be cold blooded, but that certainly doesn't help with the weather.

 

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Shea: Can't be too much further now right?

 

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Shea: I wish you were here now, you had a much better sense of direction than I ever did.

 

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Shea: But that's why I'm here. To end the one who made sure that wish couldn't come true.

 

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Shea: God, I guess your poetry has only just rubbed off on me now.

 

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Shea: Wow! Winterhold has changed since I was last here. I remember it being more...how do you say? Intact?

 

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Shea: That doesn't matter though, as long as I can still get some info from an innkeep.

 

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Shea: Well, this place seems quaint.

 

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Shea: It must get a lot of visitors from everywhere.

 

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Shea: Shouldn't be that hard to find anything about someone right?

 

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Shea: Hey, sir. You wouldn't happen to have seen a man pass through here. Tall, blonde hair, probably hasn't shaved for a while?

 

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Innkeep: Sorry miss, but there ain't been anyone like that pass through that I know of.

 

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Shea: Thanks I guess.

 

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Shea: But are you sure, he said he'd be here.

 

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Innkeep: As sure as snow here, miss.

 

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Shea: Damn! Sorry, thanks for your help.

 

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Shea: I guess I'm going to have to do this the hard way then.

 

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Shea: I haven't tracked anything properly for years.

 

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Shea: But surely some snake shouldn't be that hard to find. Just find the tracks and follow them.

 

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Shea: Simple enough.

 

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Shea: Well at least this place comes warmer in the day.

 

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Shea: Hey who knows maybe the notice board might have something.

 

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Shea: Cradle wanted, pots and pans unused. Who writes these?!

 

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Shea: But nothing about a new person, I though the people of Skyrim were supposed to be weary of outsiders.

 

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A few hours later...

 

Shea: Ahh here seems to be something.

 

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Shea: Well this rain won't help with tracks and things. 

 

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Shea: I just hope it passes over, but since when does it rain in Winterhold, it snows here right?

 

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Shea: Hey is that Mortum Castle?

 

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Shea: Still fairly nice, I guess Sofia is still doing alright. 

 

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Shea: Aha! Blood marks. Smell like Gabriel too.

 

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Shea: And of course it's up there and off the beaten track.

 

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Shea: I suppose he has already thought of a way to kill me too.

 

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Shea: Still more?

 

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Shea: Whoever he's using as a thrall clearly is quite enduring.

 

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Shea: Nevermind, poor guy.

 

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Shea: Huge lacerations...everywhere.

 

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Shea: I don't really remember Gabriel being so savage.

 

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Shea: And that is definitely his scent.

 

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Shea: It still goes on a bit that's good.

 

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Shea: Well that's not what I'm looking for.

 

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Shea: Damn, I suppose he would throw around his scent to throw me off. 

 

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A few minutes later...

 

Shea: This place looks a little more promising.

 

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Shea: But this involves a dead dragon, not a incompetent vampire.

 

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Shea: Poor bastards though, burns aren't a good way to go.

 

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Shea: But this isn't the right place.

 

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Shea: And if I don't find a place to hide from the night blizzards I'm going to be dead by morning.

 

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An hour later...

 

Shea: I always forget how quickly night turns here.

 

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Shea: But this place isn't good, there's no cover here.

 

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Orianna: No it isn't a good place.

 

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Shea: Orianna?! What?!

 

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Orianna: Still remember me then? Good, because I'm the one who is going to end you. And have my final vengeance.

 

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Shea: I can assure you, you won't get your vengeance.

 

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Orianna: Oh really, I beg to differ.

 

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Shea: Come on then finish what you started.

 

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Orianna: Oh I will, you can't win, not here.

 

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Shea: Your move.

 

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Orianna: Yarghh!

 

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Shea: Ooo! Fast and fiery, I like it!

 

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Orianna: Damn you! You are going to die here, the prophecies don't lie!

 

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Shea: And you're naive enough to believe them.

 

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Orianna: AHH!

 

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Orianna: You have to lose here. You can't win!

 

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Shea: I can and I will!

 

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Orianna: Then take this!

 

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Shea: No! I know what you've done!

 

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Shea: You've ruined everything for me!

 

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Orianna: Really? That I thought you'd know better.

 

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Orianna: <Smack>

 

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Shea: Woahh!

 

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Orianna: And don't leave your leg open!

 

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Shea: Damn you!

 

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Shea: Come on then. Finish what you started.

 

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Orianna: As you wish deceiver.

 

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Shea: I...

 

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Thanks for reading

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Nice job, I like Orianna's character design with one of her eyes blind. The combat was also very enjoyable. You could have maybe shown the two more together on screen instead of individual close up sword shots, so that the reader better understands the position of the character and the overhaul combat scene. 

Sometimes it's a bit difficult to understand who is winning and who is in the defense. 

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2 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Nice job, I like Orianna's character design with one of her eyes blind. The combat was also very enjoyable. You could have maybe shown the two more together on screen instead of individual close up sword shots, so that the reader better understands the position of the character and the overhaul combat scene. 

Sometimes it's a bit difficult to understand who is winning and who is in the defense. 

Okay I'll think about that next time I need a fight scene!

1 hour ago, Agent Tex said:

Nice work, the fight scene was very well done.

Thanks!

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Nice "search & destroy" chapter. The fight was pleasant, and so was the atmosphere, except for the blizzard being seen as dangerous (why would a vampire fear hypothermia ?) and possibly about Orianna showing alone while one would expect a queen to be followed by plenty of minions (even if they might only observe a set up duel). That put aside, like the previous one, the story line seems to be more continuous, so it was a pleasant read. K5RIBNNq_o.gif

On 9/19/2018 at 11:42 AM, wilson99 said:

looks good i hope she beats her ?

Well it seems to me there's a sword stabbing Shea in the before-last image. :classic_angel:

Malicia : « Shea got stabbed ? But it's the heroine of the story ! :classic_exclamation: Someone call the ambulance, quick ! B-VLV300L-SOLAR-GEYSERS.gif »

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2 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Nice "search & destroy" chapter. The fight was pleasant, and so was the atmosphere, except for the blizzard being seen as dangerous (why would a vampire fear hypothermia ?)

Vampires fearing hypothermia, shush Shea was taught she wouldn't survive by a survivalist who didn't know she was a vampire. Thus Shea doesn't know she can survive it.

2 hours ago, Tirloque said:

 Orianna showing alone while one would expect a queen to be followed by plenty of minions (even if they might only observe a set up duel). That put aside, like the previous one, the story line seems to be more continuous, so it was a pleasant read. K5RIBNNq_o.gif

 

Vampires like to do things their-selves I guess (Definitely not because it's easier for me)

2 hours ago, Tirloque said:

That put aside, like the previous one, the story line seems to be more continuous, so it was a pleasant read. K5RIBNNq_o.gif

Well it seems to me there's a sword stabbing Shea in the before-last image. :classic_angel:

Thanks, I'm glad something is improving.

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