Lol

I guess they need fund their war somehow 

Even as nord, joining is not easy  

Funny, love this mind break stuff. Probably it never gets old.

The heroine is a cutie.

Thank you, good entry ^_^

28 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

Lol

 

I guess they need fund their war somehow 

 

 

That's how Slaverun solved the problem of financing the war ^_^ 

Pretty effective, it seems.

4 minutes ago, Crw said:

That's how Slaverun solved the problem of financing the war ^_^ 

Pretty effective, it seems.

Well that is an another level  

42 minutes ago, Resdayn said:

Lol

 

I guess they need fund their war somehow 

 

Even as nord, joining is not easy  

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That's why the stormcloak recruit woman. 

1 minute ago, Aq150 said:

That's why the stormcloak recruit woman. 

Hmm makes sense  

I thought at first its the lack of soldier pool and Ulfric wanted use all potential recruit, but it seems no  , he had different plan in mind.

18 minutes ago, Crw said:

Funny, love this mind break stuff. Probably it never gets old.

The heroine is a cutie.

Thank you, good entry ^_^

That's how Slaverun solved the problem of financing the war ^_^ 

Pretty effective, it seems.

 

I am glad you are like it, I am trying to make more mind break story.

A story quite pleasant to follow. Only thing being the female characters seem too passive/easy to manipulate somehow, but at the other end the comic style helps reading. Don't be afraid to use larger images though, they're a bit small compared to current standards.

12 hours ago, Resdayn said:

I guess they need fund their war somehow 

 

Even as nord, joining is not easy

All those women dreaming to get Ulfric and getting subdued by the rest of the stormcloacks... My associate would want to sue them for deceptive advertising.

Just now, Tirloque said:

All those women dreaming to get Ulfric and getting subdued by the rest of the stormcloacks... My associate would want to sue them for deceptive advertising.

Isn't that the wet dream of Malicia? 

3 hours ago, Tirloque said:

A story quite pleasant to follow. Only thing being the female characters seem too passive/easy to manipulate somehow...

 

Exactly my thoughts.

THIS COMMENT ISN'T ADDRESSED TO YOU @Aq150 but in general:

I believe that every man's dream is to have submissive, sluttish and always sex hungry gf or wife. (I was lucky my dream came true)  Aside of our sex addiction I must say that in general we, males are more hornier then women, masturbate more then them and we are more sex hungry then them. How else you would explain rapists and raping, sex shops full of males and having affairs outside the marriage. I'm tired of watching all the same over and over: women as whores who just serve as fuck toys. . I haven't seen single post on LL (since I joined) about "real" nature of man: lusftul, perverted and sex hungry. Anyway, nice entry with a good story.

4 hours ago, Tirloque said:

A story quite pleasant to follow. Only thing being the female characters seem too passive/easy to manipulate somehow, but at the other end the comic style helps reading. Don't be afraid to use larger images though, they're a bit small compared to current standards.

All those women dreaming to get Ulfric and getting subdued by the rest of the stormcloacks... My associate would want to sue them for deceptive advertising.

 

 

Thank you for reading I will use a bigger Image next times.

1 hour ago, Elf Prince said:

Exactly my thoughts.

THIS COMMENT ISN'T ADDRESSED TO YOU @Aq150 but in general:

I believe that every man's dream is to have submissive, sluttish and always sex hungry gf or wife. (I was lucky my dream came true)  Aside of our sex addiction I must say that in general we, males are more hornier then women, masturbate more then them and we are more sex hungry then them. How else you would explain rapists and raping, sex shops full of males and having affairs outside the marriage. I'm tired of watching all the same over and over: women as whores who just serve as fuck toys. . I haven't seen single post on LL (since I joined) about "real" nature of man: lusftul, perverted and sex hungry. Anyway, nice entry with a good story.

Thank you for your excellent suggestions. I never though about having affairs.

4 hours ago, Elf Prince said:

Exactly my thoughts.

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I believe that every man's dream is to have submissive, sluttish and always sex hungry gf or wife. (...) I'm tired of watching all the same over and over: women as whores who just serve as fuck toys. . I haven't seen single post on LL (since I joined) about "real" nature of man: lusftul, perverted and sex hungry.

Can't agree more on the first point : sure it's a common fantasy for men to have submissive ever lusty women at their disposal. From my point of view the problem is that it turns the featured women into sex objects : no will of their own, no independent action, no feelings, no way of seeing, wanting or disliking things. In one word, no personality.

Which is why, in my own stories, I try to give my female heroins a personality of their own. And I think that the "prettiest, strongest, and most beautiful woman of her time" wont say the contrary.

That's what I'd like to see in story entries, Aq150. A main character with a name, a personality, and some brain for her to use. That's also why I'm not too fond of brainless sex entries, Prince. Aq150's story isn't bad, but I'm sure it would only get better if he (she ?) achieved that. That's the difference between scenarized porn and a adult story. The first one's story feels like a simple pretext ; the second will feel believable, with a plot and characters interesting by themselves.

About showing the real nature of man however, I believe Prince doesn't have all the blogs in mind when he says that. Noobshi's Vincent and almost all of Alter Native's males are described in that very way. 

7 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Isn't that the wet dream of Malicia? 

Don't think so. Her dreams are more about a one on one relation with a beautiful Prince carrying her in his arms with impeccable hair style, shining teeth an everything.

She had difficult experiences of sex with more than one partner so she won't fantasize about anything like it.

3 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Don't think so. Her dreams are more about a one on one relation with a beautiful Prince carrying her in his arms with impeccable hair style, shining teeth an everything.

She had difficult experiences of sex with more than one partner so she won't fantasize about anything like it.

 

Good luck with that Malicia  .

20 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Can't agree more on the first point : sure it's a common fantasy for men to have submissive ever lusty women at their disposal. From my point of view the problem is that it turns the featured women into sex objects : no will of their own, no independent action, no feelings, no way of seeing, wanting or disliking things. In one word, no personality.

Sanguine loves them thought , thats her sphere  

2 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Can't agree more on the first point : sure it's a common fantasy for men to have submissive ever lusty women at their disposal. From my point of view the problem is that it turns the featured women into sex objects : no will of their own, no independent action, no feelings, no way of seeing, wanting or disliking things. In one word, no personality.

 

Which is why, in my own stories, I try to give my female heroins a personality of their own. And I think that the "prettiest, strongest, and most beautiful woman of her time" wont say the contrary.

 

That's what I'd like to see in story entries, Aq150. A main character with a name, a personality, and some brain for her to use. That's also why I'm not too fond of brainless sex entries, Prince. Aq150's story isn't bad, but I'm sure it would only get better if he (she ?) achieved that. That's the difference between scenarized porn and a adult story. The first one's story feels like a simple pretext ; the second will feel believable, with a plot and characters interesting by themselves.

 

About showing the real nature of man however, I believe Prince doesn't have all the blogs in mind when he says that. Noobshi's Vincent and almost all of Alter Native's males are described in that very way. 

That's what my Prince wanted to say, but he couldn't for he needed my help and I wasn't near to help him.

This post must be rewarded with

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Nice ending  

2 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Can't agree more on the first point : sure it's a common fantasy for men to have submissive ever lusty women at their disposal. From my point of view the problem is that it turns the featured women into sex objects : no will of their own, no independent action, no feelings, no way of seeing, wanting or disliking things. In one word, no personality.

 

Which is why, in my own stories, I try to give my female heroins a personality of their own. And I think that the "prettiest, strongest, and most beautiful woman of her time" wont say the contrary.

 

That's what I'd like to see in story entries, Aq150. A main character with a name, a personality, and some brain for her to use. That's also why I'm not too fond of brainless sex entries, Prince. Aq150's story isn't bad, but I'm sure it would only get better if he (she ?) achieved that. That's the difference between scenarized porn and a adult story. The first one's story feels like a simple pretext ; the second will feel believable, with a plot and characters interesting by themselves.

 

About showing the real nature of man however, I believe Prince doesn't have all the blogs in mind when he says that. Noobshi's Vincent and almost all of Alter Native's males are described in that very way. 

Thank you for your advice. My character doesn't have name is becasuse she is my substitute in game.

Also I thought every male just love a submission girl. Never think about the personality.

2 hours ago, EvalovesEP said:

That's what my Prince wanted to say, but he couldn't for he needed my help and I wasn't near to help him.

This post must be rewarded with

and

Thank you Eva ! I must say writing it helped me conceptualize the thought I had in mind since a long time. Drawing the line between what can be fulfilling or degrading for a female character when it comes to sexual matters.

4 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Good luck with that Malicia  .

 

Sanguine loves them thought , thats her sphere  

His sphere. But that's not entirely accurate, I think Sanguine do loves to have fun with mortals even more than just having sex. Domination isn't his sphere. That's why he spent a whole night of drunken rampage with the player character instead of just taking the opportunity to abuse her/his drunken state directly. Too submissive mortals/immortals just aren't as fun it seems.

2 hours ago, Aq150 said:

Thank you for your advice. My character doesn't have name is becasuse she is my substitute in game.

Also I thought every male just love a submission girl. Never think about the personality.

Some males do, but not all of them.

But then again, if she's your substitute, then give her your own personality at least. Just think at what you would do in each situation she's in, that's the very base of role-play.

But you could also transform her into a character fully independent from you. And trust me, those can be way more fun than the ones just representing you. Precisely because they would act differently.

I saw you added a few more images btw. I like the two last ones way more than the others because of the very same thing we're discussing. There's more soul in them if you prefer.