Well, I guess we can say you successfully established her as the epitome of an evil bitch and potential arch-villain. Well, and as completely unhinged, she probably makes Sheogorath envious in that regard. 😛

7 minutes ago, Talesien said:

Well, I guess we can say you successfully established her as the epitome of an evil bitch and potential arch-villain. Well, and as completely unhinged, she probably makes Sheogorath envious in that regard. 😛

Yes I often hope the mod maker of the Elisabeth follower never wanders into LL blogs. I feel they would be righteously pissed at me.

Interesting chapter even if we have already seen some things in the previous chapters.
So this will focus on Elizabeth only?

5 hours ago, dryuya said:

 

 

Yes I often hope the mod maker of the Elisabeth follower never wanders into LL blogs. I feel they would be righteously pissed at me.

I don’t think you feared anything.
Blog writers don’t care how you turn their followers into characters in LL, whether they’re nice, satanic, bad or just like your blog.
More with the number of mods followers used in blogs.

As long as we don’t use their mods to copy their assets and make a copy/paste or another version to put on Nexus, they don’t care.

5 hours ago, hana120 said:

 

 

5 hours ago, hana120 said:

Interesting chapter even if we have already seen some things in the previous chapters.
So this will focus on Elizabeth only?

 

 

 This is just me cleaning up what was done before. I wasn't happy with earlier chapters. Once I get back to 5  and 6 think it will be business as usual. 

If some have already read can skip until chapter 7. I'm mostly overhauling the bad stuff for my sake. Since this is new blog couldn't just bust out chap 7 as first entry either. Want to clean up first. 

That said... There was a whole extra scene in this one that I thought was pretty decent... blockquote widget

8 hours ago, hana120 said:

Interesting chapter even if we have already seen some things in the previous chapters.
So this will focus on Elizabeth only?

 

 

typo? 😁

I'm sure you meant: So this will focus on Velrosi Dretha 😇

3 hours ago, dryuya said:

 

 

 This is just me cleaning up what was done before. I wasn't happy with earlier chapters. Once I get back to 5  and 6 think it will be business as usual. 

 

If some have already read can skip until chapter 7. I'm mostly overhauling the bad stuff for my sake. Since this is new blog couldn't just bust out chap 7 as first entry either. Want to clean up first. 

 

That said... There was a whole extra scene in this one that I thought was pretty decent... blockquote widget

And I found another typo and, being me, I corrected it straight away 😃

You should be more than satisfied with your work and you can be sure that you have already made many people happy with it. 👍

14 hours ago, chooseChaos said:

typo? 😁

 

I'm sure you meant: So this will focus on Velrosi Dretha 😇

 

And I found another typo and, being me, I corrected it straight away 😃

 

You should be more than satisfied with your work and you can be sure that you have already made many people happy with it. 👍

I don't feel mine was a typo? "Just me cleaning up" or "Me cleaning up" they both sound valid to me (especially for casual LL blog chat)? Am I missing something? 

I would only make a Velrosi centered chapter (or rather...sure one day I will make one) if it has made with a good looking victim for her. As a character I think she's neat enough but not one of the ones I'd actually call high level "good looking". For the role of a dungeon master though being not the most attractive works fine I think. The original mod for Velrosi is more attractive than what I did to her with the dreads and very thick body...so I actually uglied her up a little bit to fit what I thought the character type should look like.

I was getting satisfied as I learned more and more about how comic stuff works. But my very first version of this prologue if I look at it now it just wasn't of much quality. And given that I want every chapter to look good and connect properly to a cohesive story line I just felt it really needed a do over. The "do over" may bother a few if they were reading and just wanting things to move along but it bothered me more not to do it...so its like a hiatus for the next real chapter but one w/ better quality overhauled chapters.

2 hours ago, dryuya said:

 

 

I don't feel mine was a typo? "Just me cleaning up" or "Me cleaning up" they both sound valid to me (especially for casual LL blog chat)? Am I missing something? 

 

I would only make a Velrosi centered chapter (or rather...sure one day I will make one) if it has made with a good looking victim for her. As a character I think she's neat enough but not one of the ones I'd actually call high level "good looking". For the role of a dungeon master though being not the most attractive works fine I think. The original mod for Velrosi is more attractive than what I did to her with the dreads and very thick body...so I actually uglied her up a little bit to fit what I thought the character type should look like.

 

I was getting satisfied as I learned more and more about how comic stuff works. But my very first version of this prologue if I look at it now it just wasn't of much quality. And given that I want every chapter to look good and connect properly to a cohesive story line I just felt it really needed a do over. The "do over" may bother a few if they were reading and just wanting things to move along but it bothered me more not to do it...so its like a hiatus for the next real chapter but one w/ better quality overhauled chapters.

Two quick questions.
1) In the chapter where Elizabeth saw him talking to all the Daedric princes (with the statues). She seems to make fun of them and send them even Molag Bal. And in the end we see an entity appear above her.
Is it because she has her own god, her own goddess?
2) In the chapter where Ludi finds Alduin in prison.
Alduin is helping him. Would he have something in mind? Would he benefit from it? 
Because normally, Alduin is not the kind of person, god to help someone.
This is the World Devourer and the one who enslaved the Mens before.

3 hours ago, dryuya said:

 

 

I don't feel mine was a typo? "Just me cleaning up" or "Me cleaning up" they both sound valid to me (especially for casual LL blog chat)? Am I missing something? 

 

I would only make a Velrosi centered chapter (or rather...sure one day I will make one) if it has made with a good looking victim for her. As a character I think she's neat enough but not one of the ones I'd actually call high level "good looking". For the role of a dungeon master though being not the most attractive works fine I think. The original mod for Velrosi is more attractive than what I did to her with the dreads and very thick body...so I actually uglied her up a little bit to fit what I thought the character type should look like.

 

I was getting satisfied as I learned more and more about how comic stuff works. But my very first version of this prologue if I look at it now it just wasn't of much quality. And given that I want every chapter to look good and connect properly to a cohesive story line I just felt it really needed a do over. The "do over" may bother a few if they were reading and just wanting things to move along but it bothered me more not to do it...so its like a hiatus for the next real chapter but one w/ better quality overhauled chapters.

That was just my chaotic way of fooling around. 😇

To clarify, I just wanted to say that I think your work here is great.
And yes, it's even better now. 👍

19 hours ago, hana120 said:

Two quick questions.
1) In the chapter where Elizabeth saw him talking to all the Daedric princes (with the statues). She seems to make fun of them and send them even Molag Bal. And in the end we see an entity appear above her.
Is it because she has her own god, her own goddess?
2) In the chapter where Ludi finds Alduin in prison.
Alduin is helping him. Would he have something in mind? Would he benefit from it? 
Because normally, Alduin is not the kind of person, god to help someone.
This is the World Devourer and the one who enslaved the Mens before.

Well cannot/should not say spoilers in the comments (even if someone says somethings that hits the nail on the head I won't confirm or deny). But Elisabeths daedric realm "deity" I think might be an easy guess. Very subtle clue was actually dropped in image of it back in old chaps but just never got around to saying before I decided on this do over. 

Alduin stuff is likewise all a spoiler. 

Actually... If anyone just reads this now and has only ever seen these improved chaps... Hope they just avoid comments

19 hours ago, chooseChaos said:

That was just my chaotic way of fooling around. 😇

To clarify, I just wanted to say that I think your work here is great.
And yes, it's even better now. 👍

Ty