That was a great read, been waiting for this for quite some time, very nicely done! Love the romance between Delvin and Vex, now I am a little jealous of that old bastard, maybe more than a little, haha?

And it seems that there will be more of Vex's backstory coming up and hopefully it will include how he turned from a pretty boy to this hot irresistible woman. Also intrigued what role will the new recruit of the guild play and how it will affect our lovely Vex, a love triangle?, maybe?

Will be eagerly looking forward to the next episode, certainly one of best fan-fictions I have read on this site!!

That was about as wholesome as it was naughty. Well done.? I do suspect that "vanilla" Delvin would absolutely approve of this story. At least so far. With the mysterious Dragon-Slayer on the horizon all kinds of drama might be brewing. Guess we will have to wait and see. Also: Brynjolf really does have a way with words: That line about Vex looking like she had ridden a horse all night long... was very appropriate.

Looking very much so forward to the next entry.

Wow! Very well put together I'm impressed... Well done.  Hulk HAPPY!!!

6 hours ago, leoyashahx said:

That was a great read, been waiting for this for quite some time, very nicely done! Love the romance between Delvin and Vex, now I am a little jealous of that old bastard, maybe more than a little, haha?

 

And it seems that there will be more of Vex's backstory coming up and hopefully it will include how he turned from a pretty boy to this hot irresistible woman. Also intrigued what role will the new recruit of the guild play and how it will affect our lovely Vex, a love triangle?, maybe?

 

Will be eagerly looking forward to the next episode, certainly one of best fan-fictions I have read on this site!!

This is one of the reasons why I decided to create this piece. I've always had a soft spot for Delvin. And I really regretted that his relationship with Vex didn't work out. I hope that old fox is happy now. ?

Was really excited to see this updated. Loved the first three chapters and this was no exception! ?

Great job on telling an interesting story and getting me invested in your characters. It does happen on LL but I feel like stories that aren't just like twenty screens of sex are few and far between. Your sex scenes feel perfectly natural, and they're balanced by story and character development. (And humor! I couldn't stop laughing when they were talking about the "presumed" Dragon Born trying to sell all his worthless shit and use everyone's equipment! ?)

Your screens are vibrant, colorful, and so detailed! And I'm a big fan of your layout! And... ok, I'll stop.

Bottom line, I'm loving your story and eagerly awaiting more! ❤️

Nice! Love the invisibility sex scene and banter!

On 8/31/2022 at 4:06 PM, LexiAJ82 said:

Was really excited to see this updated. Loved the first three chapters and this was no exception! ?

 

Great job on telling an interesting story and getting me invested in your characters. It does happen on LL but I feel like stories that aren't just like twenty screens of sex are few and far between. Your sex scenes feel perfectly natural, and they're balanced by story and character development. (And humor! I couldn't stop laughing when they were talking about the "presumed" Dragon Born trying to sell all his worthless shit and use everyone's equipment! ?)

 

Your screens are vibrant, colorful, and so detailed! And I'm a big fan of your layout! And... ok, I'll stop.

 

Bottom line, I'm loving your story and eagerly awaiting more! ❤️

I read your comment with a smile. I put a lot of effort and work into this work. And sometimes I caught myself thinking that no one would notice or appreciate my hard work. I appreciate that. I am very grateful for your kind words. ?

Just discovered this man and wanted to say, wow, really nice works on these! I couldn't stop reading, the story is very interesting, and also the characters, edits and graphics in all the scenes are plain amazing.

Really really good job! I hope for more in the future, and thanks for doing something with this high quality to show it to us

This is probably the best story on this site, please continue with part five. The lore you are developing for Vex is fascinating and has me hooked.

On 12/30/2022 at 9:41 AM, Madison09 said:

This is probably the best story on this site, please continue with part five. The lore you are developing for Vex is fascinating and has me hooked.

I'm working on the fifth part, be patient ?