You even broke out some poetry? The things that must have been smoked in the making of this entry boggles the mind.

3 minutes ago, yorpers said:

You even broke out some poetry? The things that must have been smoked in the making of this entry boggles the mind.

I smoke only the finest Tobacco the poor man can afford 

And the Poem is copy pasted from Elder scrolls usep ? As If i would kill the last few brain cells I got for this Chapter

Interesting and appropriately dark backstory. Sheo sure is an unusual Daedra it appears. Adding Ruppert into the (fairy) tales of his.
Raises some new question of course, like: Does this make Lydia the last/latest of said descendants? And of course how much of the real Ruppert is in the current erh ... version. :p

9 minutes ago, Gukahn said:

As If i would kill the last few brain cells I got for this Chapter

Nope, that honor is reserved for the nicotine from those finest tobaccos. Pretty potent nerve poison, after all. :p

Just now, Talesien said:

Interesting and appropriately dark backstory. Sheo sure is an unusual Daedra it appears. Adding Ruppert into the (fairy) tales of his.
Raises some new question of course, like: Does this make Lydia the last/latest of said descendants? And of course how much of the real Ruppert is in the current erh ... version. ?

At least this 2 Questions I can promise to answer in the future very soon^^

And Sheo just really, really loves his Daughter, if a Deadric Prince can even feel that emotion ? Think the only ones who aren't at least a little bit attached to their Offspring are Milf and maybe Molag or Vile. But with Vile I'm not sure yet.. Mods be praised I got a few Items i can utilize to bring a few of them to Tamriel if needed ? So we will see about that if it ever comes to that

6 minutes ago, Talesien said:

Nope, that honor is reserved for the nicotine from those finest tobaccos. Pretty potent nerve poison, after all. ?

exactly ?

That was indeed quite serious. Right now I suspect, that current Ruppert has amnesia, at least to some extent. That he doesn't really remember who he was and what has happend to him. Because Drama. I also wonder if Enyo would realize who he (R.) is IF Pris manages to bring him  back to the "real world". That would be quite a re-union.

In any case, Thumbs-up from me. Looking forward to the next entry.?

8 hours ago, HM1919 said:

I also wonder if Enyo would realize who he (R.) is IF Pris manages to bring him  back to the "real world". That would be quite a re-union.

That's the Question I'm asking myself.  ? Probably after a few Minutes to realize: It's her Teddy. It's alive and his name is Rupert. But we will see in a few Chapters or so If and how everything goes. Only thing I know is.. I have 3 other Characters that will need a little origin story someday. At least I consider Enyos the darkest x.x so I have the hardest out of the way and it's not like everyone of them had a Hard Life either.  

8 hours ago, HM1919 said:

In any case, Thumbs-up from me. Looking forward to the next entry.?

Thanks ? 

This episode is dark, and great

The wishes are intresting  especialy secund one

This story getting better and better

1 minute ago, Nonseen said:

especialy secund one

I will be having so much Fun with those 2 Wishes ?

2 minutes ago, Nonseen said:

This story getting better and better

Thank you very much ?

Appreciated the tone for this one. Felt like a fairy tale gone wrong, the intervention of the succubus mother making it take a much darker tone all of a sudden. The screens are vivid, colored, and for some quite nicely composed (young Enyo's room scene in particular). Story-wise, I somehow felt like the flashback sequence felt less wacky and more story-driven than the current time intro. Interesting chapter overall.

« The blonde gal is like the evil witch of the tales, she looks pretty and shiny, but in fact she's very meany inside.  »

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

The screens are vivid, colored, and for some quite nicely composed (young Enyo's room scene in particular). Story-wise, I somehow felt like the flashback sequence felt less wacky and more story-driven than the current time intro. Interesting chapter overall.

Thank you ?

Enyo is one of the really complex Characters in my Mindset at least. So I thought it was important to give her Story the serious approach it deserves.

I like being Wacky with my Story but sometimes, it's important to me to make a Serious Moment, well serious dunno how to describe it better.

I'm glad it came out the right way  

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

The blonde gal is like the evil witch of the tales, she looks pretty and shiny, but in fact she's very meany inside. 

Yep.. Sometimes i Think she is way too mean but then I remember that I'm actually trying to write "Gods" when I use Daedric Lords and Entity's of similar Status. I think not even the worst of the Princes would consider themselves evil like we would describe a Human doing the same Things they do. ?

Somehow even think she might be the worst Character I will ever be able to write ? hopefully I am right, can't think of something worse then a Mother like that