So a story with comic style dialogues ? Interesting, though the most singular part is that it feels very contemporary, with the dialogues being written like in nowadays casual fashion, and the whole phones/social networks edits adding even more to the immersion. Not to mention the convincing expressions, posing, and believable scenario. So far so good !

Yet, I'd like to highlight one point : you've posted 6 entries into the main page (more than 25%) released nearly all at once. Each slot you take implies the work of another author is pushed away from the spotlight ; some of those being content that took time to create as well. So, if you want to be part of this community without the other authors resenting you, I would advice not publishing your entries at more than one or two every handful of days.

For instance, you could :

— Click on "edit entry" at the bottom of "Chapter 2"

— At the lower par of the page, under the "publish" gree toggle, you've got a menu with a date : enter 07-02-2021, and untick the "publish now tickbox", then click save.
— This will effectively schedule the entry to be published in three days from now, automatically.

I would consider this for chapter 3 as well ; and 3 or 4 days later for the chapters 4 and 5 leaving two of your entries on the main page right now, with four more coming in a few days.

Thanks for your attention,

Regards,

Tirloque

Thanks for the advice. I wasn't sure how to effectively migrate these stories over. I've got 31 total chapters that I'm moving over here because of the image limitations on the forums, but I definitely don't want to take away from anyone else. 

22 hours ago, thewatcher1 said:

Thanks for the advice. I wasn't sure how to effectively migrate these stories over. I've got 31 total chapters that I'm moving over here because of the image limitations on the forums, but I definitely don't want to take away from anyone else. 

That's why I detailed the use of the publish date feature of the blogs, most users don't know it can be use either to postdate, or to schedule in the future.

Speaking for the storytellers community, thanks for hearing this out. Have a good stay on LL, Thewatcher.