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Go Llamas! - Chapter 2

 

That was a close call. Malcolm and Wolfgang had spent the day at the Goth house and have just managed to sneak out before Alexander Goth found them balls deep inside his mother. His mother, Bella, retires to her room to freshen up after spending the day keeping her boys entertained.

 

And after weeks of being nothing more than a means of sadistic pleasure for her son's bullies, she takes a brief trip drown memory lane to how it all started.

 

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Good stuff again. But one observation. When I read the first chapter, each of the comic pages ran down the page in a single column. I don't know if that was my browser or your formatting, but I see it's different now, a two pages spread open presentation.
I think this is better, but I think you can mess with the borders a bit to get a little better clarity. You seem to have a consistent three panels , or three rows of panels per page so that consistency is helpful, but at the start of this post I had to pause for a moment and think about where I'm reading left to right and when I'm supposed to move down.
So it might be pertinent to add a more distinct spacing to the top/bottom of the image frames. The triangle patterns do that a little bit, but I think they're too subtle.
That's my only complaint though, looking forward to more.

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