Great work! lots of exposition in the beginning, with a very nice ending in the second half.

Also it's interesting to see you using characters that I also use for my blood and pleasure story.

Even though they look the same they feel very different in personality in your story.

1 hour ago, Alter Native said:

Great work! lots of exposition in the beginning, with a very nice ending in the second half.

Also it's interesting to see you using characters that I also use for my blood and pleasure story.

Even though they look the same they feel very different in personality in your story.

Thank you! ?

At least I remember that you've used Siobhan too, but as a (very) minor character. I'm not sure why I took especially her as a very important character in my series, but for me she had a very strong emanation. It was funny for me, seeing here used by you in a contrariwise way =D 

Usually I trying to use characters from nexus who aren't very popular, but of course, that doesn't work all the time. Especially with the asian-characters which aren't very common. Unless I'm looking on Japanese sites of course ^_^"

Wish i could be part of that tribe. Eh.

1 hour ago, Kin Tsuchi said:

Thank you! ?

 

At least I remember that you've used Siobhan too, but as a (very) minor character. I'm not sure why I took especially her as a very important character in my series, but for me she had a very strong emanation. It was funny for me, seeing here used by you in a contrariwise way =D 

 

Usually I trying to use characters from nexus who aren't very popular, but of course, that doesn't work all the time. Especially with the asian-characters which aren't very common. Unless I'm looking on Japanese sites of course ^_^"

Yeah I feel you. Most characters on the nexus are not really suitable for story purposes, as you typically need "normal", "average" girls in stories, which limits the choice quite a bit.

I'm using Vivace and Siobhan in my story, but I changed both of them a bit and, as you said, Siobhan is more a side character.

But I really like the follower, she's very unique without being overdesigned. 

21 hours ago, Deso561PL said:

Wish i could be part of that tribe. Eh.

Question is, what role you would have there? ^_^ 

20 hours ago, Alter Native said:

Yeah I feel you. Most characters on the nexus are not really suitable for story purposes, as you typically need "normal", "average" girls in stories, which limits the choice quite a bit.

I'm using Vivace and Siobhan in my story, but I changed both of them a bit and, as you said, Siobhan is more a side character.

But I really like the follower, she's very unique without being overdesigned. 

Without bodyslide nearly every companion from the nexus would be just unusable. I don't need ultra-butts or gigantic breasts that would make walking impossible. Apart from that, it makes most poses unusable without NiOverride Pose Adjustments... 

Damn that's great and amazingly sensual! 
I am once again amazed at the depth of elaboration of the "little community" you have created there, and the amount and detail and subtleties in their relationship. It's just amazing. ^_^ 

38 minutes ago, Kin Tsuchi said:

Question is, what role you what have there? ^_^ 

2 hours ago, Kin Tsuchi said:

Question is, what role you what have there? ^_^ 

 

Without bodyslide nearly every companion from the nexus would be just unusable. I don't need ultra-butts or gigantic breasts that would make walking impossible. Apart from that, it makes most poses unusable without NiOverride Pose Adjustments... 

Breeder for wolves?

On 12/31/2020 at 2:20 PM, Deso561PL said:

 

Breeder for wolves?

Well, in that case you would be one of the poor Kunoichis who got abducted by the Urufu.

Depending on the mistress, the life there can either be good or..  not so good =P

Another quite nice chapter, with quite some character and world development. Still quite cared upon graphically (Setsuko's injuries, fluid edits), with the uniqueness of your setting still inviting to the discovery. The distant sounds/and dialogues also add to the immersion, with some noteworthy sparks of humor (Tommomi's replicas are hilarious ^^). That being said, I found Junna more docile than I expected, but I do understand she has a lot of dilemmas to face off. Implying more stakes in the plot. Good work !

PS : I think you might've forgotten the bbcode for some images in the fourth spoiler.

Malicia : « The tiny signs under the names are very pretty.

                Aside of that, they should really go to the tavern and kiss a guy on the mouth, because they're becoming very crazy left all by themselves.  »

On 12/31/2020 at 11:33 AM, Kin Tsuchi said:

Question is, what role you would have there? ^_^ 

Malicia :

On 12/30/2020 at 2:30 PM, Alter Native said:

Also it's interesting to see you using characters that I also use for my blood and pleasure story.

Even though they look the same they feel very different in personality in your story.

Malicia : « That gal is very crazy, and very meany. Amelie isn't like that, no, plus she's not a mother too.  »

23 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Another quite nice chapter, with quite some character and world development. Still quite cared upon graphically (Setsuko's injuries, fluid edits), with the uniqueness of your setting still inviting to the discovery. The distant sounds/and dialogues also add to the immersion, with some noteworthy sparks of humor (Tommomi's replicas are hilarious ^^). That being said, I found Junna more docile than I expected, but I do understand she has a lot of dilemmas to face off. Implying more stakes in the plot. Good work !

 

Thank your for your kind words, always very appreciated ?

We're still only seing the tip of the iceberg and I guess that it will take some time until the events start rolling. As always, it needs time =D in the next chapter I'll focus more on Shige and Erina again, and... it will be a bit darker than this chapter.

23 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

PS : I think you might've forgotten the bbcode for some images in the fourth spoiler.

 

Just checked the codes, everything seems alright for me. Well, sort of. Even if I see every picture, the scaling is crazy o.O sometimes the pictures are bigger, sometimes smaller. If I'm refreshing them, they randomize the scaling again. I'm honestly not sure what I can do about it. 

1 hour ago, Kin Tsuchi said:

Well, in that case you would be one of the poor Kunoichis who got abducted by the Urufu.

Depending on the mistress, the life their can either be good or..  not so good =P

Doubt my night elf may fit there. *sighs*

16 minutes ago, Deso561PL said:

 

Doubt my night elf may fit there. *sighs*

Pretty sure the Urufu would abduct nightelfs as well xD

Or at least.. try to abduct them. They are so well hidden in the forest at night =/

1 hour ago, Kin Tsuchi said:

Pretty sure the Urufu would abduct nightelfs as well xD

Or at least.. try to abduct them. They are so well hidden in the forest at night =/

My night elf wouldn't mind. She likes have sex with animals.