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Bruce Chapter 3: Offensive


Jotunn25

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Right after our wonderful club night, I began planning to invite Christina for dinner.

I drove around town and outskirts after work to find the perfect restaurant for a first dinner.

My preparations where only interrupted once, but it was a welcome interruption.

Christina surprisingly showed up one evening.

We enjoyed a nice evening watching TV.

 

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Christina told that her father felt better every day, but her mom showed some first signs of dementia. She forgot the same things several times in a row. So, Christina maybe would'nt leave Brindleton Bay after all. I felt guilty for feeling happy about the news she maybe would'nt leave. But of course the news about her mom have worried me.

 

The next day, I found the perfect restaurant.

It was located in the neighboring town Windenburg and - funnily enough - next to the club “Purple Rain” where we had our club night.

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So, I invited Christina to a romantic dinner next Friday.

 

We met in front of the dinner and she looked gorgous.

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Wow, you look beautiful, Christina.”

Thank you, you too.”

So, let's ask for our table.”

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Good evening, I reserved a table for two. The name is Baker.”

Good evening Mr. Baker. Thank you for choosing our restaurant. Please follow me to your table.”

 

Some moments later...

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That's a nice restaurant, how have you found it?”

To be honest, I had the plan to take you out for dinner right after our club night. So, I drove around a little bit to find the perfect restaurant.”

How cute, and everything for me?” Sheepish grin

No, I just wanted to have a fine dinner and I thought it would be boring alone.”

Haha, ok, that's your one. So, let's have a look on the menu card.”

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Ma'am, Sir, do you want to order?”

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Yes. I would like to have a blackberry juice and the salmon, please.”

Sure ma'am.”

For me an orange juice and the chicken with corn, please.”

Of course, sir. Anything else?”

Not for the moment, thanks.”

 

So, Christina, you never told me what you do for a living.”

I work as a nurse at the San Myshuno central hospital. But at the moment I am on leave.”

Oh, wow, you are a nurse? That's cool. I work in the IT business.”

Nice, so you can help me with my computer if I have problems, cool.”

Yeah, sure...” Enforced grin

Hahaha, you should see your face. I was just kidding.”

Hahaha, what are you doing with me?”

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I am glad you was just kidding, you don't know how often I hear this when I tell people what I do...”

Haha, yes. And you don't know how often men get wet dreams when I tell them, I am a nurse. So, what did you bring to Brindleton Bay?”

Uh, that's not an easy question, but I want you to know.

I lived in San Mayshuno together with my bride-to-be. We planned to marry next year. But then she told me she felt in love with a colleague and broke up with me.”

Wow, that's heavy...”

Yeah... I locked down completely for some time until I recognized that my live is not over yet. But I could not stay at our house, so I sold it and searched for a new place for a complete new start. So, that brought me to Brindleton Bay.”

I am so sorry for you.”

That's the past. Now I am sitting here in this nice restaurant with a beautiful girl.”

Ouh, thank you, I am also enjoying the evening so far.”

Ma'am, Sir, may I present your menu.”

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Bon Appetit.”

Bon Appetit.”

 

After the dinner...

 

Thank you for this nice evening, Bruce. I really enjoyed it.”

Me too. But this evening does not have to be over yet. Wanna come to my place for a coffee?”

Oh, sure.”

We both knew what “coffee” meant.

 

Spoiler

We started to seduct each other.

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Mmmh, she tastes delicious.

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Oh, yes, that feels so good. Don't stop, Bruce.”

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Mmmh, she is getting so wet.

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Bruce, please fuck me now.”

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So, she is finally ready for me.

 

Should I use a condom?”

No, it's not necessary, please, fuck me.”

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Wow, she is so horny now.

 

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It felt so exciting. It was like our bodies were created to perfectly fit to each other.

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You had enough fun, it's my turn now.”

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I was almost cumming as she rode me. And it felt like she had her first climax then.

 

Her second time was when I came inside her (at least that was my impression).

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We stayed up a little longer and cuddled.

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Then we finally felt asleep.

 

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Ascend the Apprenticeship

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Love the story so far! Just a quick notice (at least in my area) most people don't call men beautiful (NOT SAYING THEY CAN'T BE pls don hurt me lol) but it might flow better if instead of 

Wow, you look beautiful, Christina.”

Thank you, you too.”

you put 

Wow, you look beautiful, Christina.”

Thank you, you look rather handsome yourself.” (or some variation)

Been loving all your stories can't wait to see what happens next!

Jotunn25

Posted

17 hours ago, Ascend the Apprenticeship said:

Love the story so far! Just a quick notice (at least in my area) most people don't call men beautiful (NOT SAYING THEY CAN'T BE pls don hurt me lol) but it might flow better if instead of 

Wow, you look beautiful, Christina.”

Thank you, you too.”

you put 

Wow, you look beautiful, Christina.”

Thank you, you look rather handsome yourself.” (or some variation)

Been loving all your stories can't wait to see what happens next!

Thanks for the feedback.

Such tips are very helpful.

Tirloque

Posted

Then, a bit more tips :

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Hahaha, you should see your face. I was just kidding.”

Hahaha, what are you doing with me?”

I am glad you was just kidding, you don't know how often I hear this when I tell people what I do...”

When you ask someone what he/she was doing with another someone, it often means what he/she was doing with that someone at a precise moment or place. Like a cop asking someone what he was doing with the convict at 9' o clock yesterday. I'm not sure that's what you mean there.
The second (you was instead of you were) is a proofreading mistake.

 

There are more sentences lacking of natural here, yet as there are more dialogues, that's quite normal. You can uses sites like linguee or reverso context to try your sentences in context, and see if they are really used the way you meant them.

 

As for the story itself, it's still an as pleasant read as ever, and I once again like the care about realistic details (such as one of the parents getting first signs of Alzheimer for example). And the sex sequence was a nice moment of intimacy between two lovers. Though, considering chapter 4 though I now think it doesn't makes sense for Christina to refuse the condom for a first time  if she wasn't sure if it was a one night stand or not... But that's a detail. Good chapter overall. ?

 

 

Malicia : « I very knew they were going to honey-honey. :classic_sleepy:

 

              The waitresses of that restaurant have green, violet and pink hair, though. If I went there, I'd be very worried about the food, uh. million_dollar_baby.gif »

 

Jotunn25

Posted

5 hours ago, Tirloque said:

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Thank you again.

I am using deepl, it's from the same company as linguee, but the second stage of linguee let's say. It is AI based and offers the best translation I have found so far. Way more better than what Microsoft or Google are offering.

You can even click on every single word of the translation and check out the alternatives it offers.

Don't know reverso context, will check it out.

 

"What are you doing with me?" meant that he was totally dumbfounded by her. Like saying "You got me there" but in a more intim/personal way. Do you understand what I mean?

 

And you are right with the thoughts about the condom, it makes no sense. But yeah, just a detail, I will get over it. ?

 

This restaurant is modern and hip, that's why they have rainbow hair colors, haha. ?

Tirloque

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5 hours ago, Jotunn25 said:

Thank you again.

I am using deepl, it's from the same company as linguee, but the second stage of linguee let's say. It is AI based and offers the best translation I have found so far. Way more better than what Microsoft or Google are offering.

You can even click on every single word of the translation and check out the alternatives it offers.

Don't know reverso context, will check it out.

It's the equivalent of DeepL but for Reverso ; only it suggest rather than directly translates.

 

5 hours ago, Jotunn25 said:

"What are you doing with me?" meant that he was totally dumbfounded by her. Like saying "You got me there" but in a more intim/personal way. Do you understand what I mean?

I do. And I think "you got met here" would've been perfect instead. ^^

 

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