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Bruce Prologue

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I am Bruce Baker. Two months ago, my life was perfect. I had a beautiful girlfriend and a good job in the IT branch. My girlfriend and I were engaged planning our marriage next year.

Then my girlfriend decided that she likes a colleague more than me (told something about that he is her “soulmate”, bullshit). At least she told me before they got more “engaged”, I am some kind of thankful for that.

But, my world and my heart broke on that day.

She soon left our house and I was locking up myself and did not go out for a while.

Of course, I also lost my job during this phase.

Some weeks later, after I laid in bed the whole day playing video games, I recognized that this cannot be the end. I am 35, still young some would say, in good health (at least physically speaking at that certain point), wealthy (well, at least I could effort to not have a job for quite some time), and had a big house (unfortunately full of memories).

My first decision was to go outside again, having a walk, chatting with someone again.

My second decision was, that I cannot live in our old house anymore, too much, too hurting memory.

 

After some searching, I found an undeveloped land in the small town of Brindleton Bay, bought it and had a house built to my own specifications.

I drove to Brindleton Bay from time to time to help the builders creating my house.

They have done a perfect job, and now my new house is finished and ready to move in.

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Room Tour (the basement still is a secret :-)):

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Nice and realistic feel over that introduction. Only a handful of screens so far, but I like the details of your models. And a male character feels refreshing in the overly female LL's fictional scene. As for the writing, it's fluid and easy to read, but you're kinda not used to tenses usage/concordance. I'll wait to see clear examples to point out what could be correct. Anyway, pleasant read. 🙂

 

Malicia : « Tirloque says gals stories aren't refreshing 'cause they're very silly almost every time.

 

               But when the girl is very intelligent, very pretty, and very strong ; then her story is very refreshing too.  :classic_sleepy: »

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4 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Nice and realistic feel over that introduction. Only a handful of screens so far, but I like the details of your models. And a male character feels refreshing in the overly female LL's fictional scene. As for the writing, it's fluid and easy to read, but you're kinda not used to tenses usage/concordance. I'll wait to see clear examples to point out what could be correct. Anyway, pleasant read. 🙂

 

Malicia : « Tirloque says gals stories aren't refreshing 'cause they're very silly almost every time.

 

               But when the girl is very intelligent, very pretty, and very strong ; then her story is very refreshing too.  :classic_sleepy: »

Thanks again for your feedback.

I think I know what you mean with tenses usage/concordance.

It's not always easy to decide what past tense to use.

 

I hope my three stories offer some freshness. Sandra and Becci are both still very young and need to find their place in the world. So, I won't say they are strong at the moment. But hopefully my writing will let them become strong. 🙂

Bruce already had something to learn in his life. Now he is starting another period of his life that will hold new challanges for him and hopefully make him even stronger.

 

My overall target is definitely to tell a meaningful story that also has some adult content.

I don't want to show you some adult content that also has a little bit of background story.

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