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[EN/FR] A God's Curse / Chapter 14 FINAL : Last date


Qalefir

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This is the last one. But maybe a sequel will be made one day, I have some idea. But for now, I hope you enjoy this last chapter and thank your for reading.

I will update every chapter to link previous and next chapter.

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Summary

 

Chapter 1 : First date

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Previous chapter Chapter 13 : Farewell

 

EN.jpg.250a091aa255be5a9141d8e0c59fa8be.jpg English verison

 

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FR.jpg.41b305e0c32f8a38fc40500f45685157.jpg French version

 

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Tirloque

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Woohoo, so they took each other out, and the angels (well Katherine at least) used the situation to take control ; leaving the (two ?) gods in a dormant state. Nice staging of the entry, with a nice cliffhanger effect of that black screen mid chapter. Compliments as well for the graphical identity of the whole story ; and for the expressions, quite convincing for a Sim's work. Didn't get why Gabby's eyes turned back to green again though, after having been blue, scenario-wise. Yet, the english writing was 99% alright, meaning a lot of progress since your first episodes, quite some time ago ; and you did a good job with the pace and set-up of the twists. And you did leave the end open enough to possibly resume the story, in the future.

 

Thanks for the share, RDA. Good job ! :smiley:

 

Malicia : « That pervy guy walking around in panties was still around. Maybe he gonna rescue Alicia, once he's finished looking at everyone's pee-pee, uh. :classic_sleep:

 

                Or maybe he won't, 'cause he'll be afraid of her kicking him into the belly. So she'll have to wait for some prince to save her. :classic_lightbulb: »

Qalefir

Posted

9 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Didn't get why Gabby's eyes turned back to green again

They are blue since the last chapter, but maybe there is green tint in her eyes. I'm glad you notice my english because that was one of the reason I wanted to do this.

And yeah, it took me almost 1 year to finish. ^^

 

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