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[EN/FR] A God's Curse / Chapter 11 : Anassa


Qalefir

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Ok, I tag EN/FR in the title, but there is no dialogue or text in this one. I test something different, open to interpretation. I hope you will like it. (Open to feedback too, especially for this one).

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Previous chapter Chapter 10 : Midnight appointment

Next chapter Chapter 12 : Step Back

 

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A rather dreamlike chapter, with Alicia reliving some of the steps of her childhood, and then facing off the manager David, all of that in a rather unexplained fashion. Unless she died though (but when you capture someone it means you have other things in mind), I think it's a dream as she hasn't the green eyes the angels are supposed to. Also, there's no dialogues nor sound. And the others angels (all alike) nor David do not fight back.

 

Yet it seems she met someone with the power to disrupt the angels, so that's ambiguous, and could be an unexpectedly short defeat scene (though in that case, dropping off the dialogues and onomatopoeia would be a mistake IMO). But that wouldn't explain why she hasn't angel-eyes, so I rather think it's a dream. So scenario-wise,  we've got a chapter open for interpretation, while as interesting as always graphically (the work on the expressions changes when she meets David is good ^^). :smiley:

 

Malicia : « That's it, he's on the ground ! Kick-him in the pee-pee now ! :classic_exclamation: »

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@Tirloque About the onomatopoeia (funny word in english btw), I already consider to pute some in the previous chapter, but I don't like the result, too... goofy ? Too cartoon. So, I don't think I will put some in the futur (but who knows).

 

Thanks for the feedback as always.

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