Creating a massive quest/gathering a team

[Guest]

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I've written a scenery for the first part of this quest mod. There are not a lot of sexual content for now but at least as soon as someone create simple animations that part of the quest could be done. I don't know how long it will take to create that mod, so that's why any help is welcome starting with voice records. However, if someone liked what I've written and want to give a hand with creation than that's just far more then welcome))) (mainly because I'm not well-experienced with the creation kit)

 

Don't know how "massive" it will go. Depends on how much help I will receive. But at least lets do that part. Also as I could see most of the skyrim adult mods were made for female GG, so that is not an exception for now.

 

I'm open-minded so if you have any suggestions to what I've written - tell me. If you didn't like something - tell me. I easily accept criticism. I've also tried to make it easy to read (I've marked out following paths of your actions) but if you don't understand something than tell me and I will explain.

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Perhaps the opening dialogue section could be a little smoother for example: "Hello ma'am pleased to meet you! Welcome to  Alfonso's casino where the risk is well worth the reward *wink*, oh sorry where's my manners you must be in need of something? Perhaps an en suite room? fresh baths, a warm empty bed?, a warmer full bed?

Also maybe more of a build up to Alfonso getting you into his office such as possibly causing mischief and then being offered multiple ways to repay for what damages you've done. (potential mischief opportunities: Maids, cheating at the casino games, Lock-picking other guests rooms and invading their privacy, stealing)

The hat your thinking of is called a ushanka

There are also a few incoherences grammatically  I would recommend re-reading it and making it a little easier to read.

That's all for now   
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[MorganRiggs]

I would be very interested in joining up for this team. As for my experience, I do have some modding and quest scripting experience for Fallout New Vegas, where I made my own mod including a quest. I can do some 3D editing and Voice acting too if that is needed. If you would like samples, I got a studio microphone with some other equipment in my office, usually I am using to for recording music.

[theblacksmith]

Before anything else: that script needs a proper proofreading at the very least, though I'd recommend a complete overhaul. It's a passable effort for someone who's still learning English, but that's the nicest thing I can say without sounding like an asshole.

[Ethayven]

if you need a guy voice, i could contribute. I am equipped with a blue yeti with pop filter so audio quality should be pretty good if you want me.

[DaveTheAngryJew]

So I have a few things to say about this:

 

1) theblacksmith is definitely right.  I think your idea is solid but your script needs serious work.

 

2) You're in luck, because I'm willing to help with that, as an amateur playwright and self-proclaimed grammar Nazi (and I'm a Jew too.  Weird, right?)

 

3) I've been a modder for several years now, but I'm pretty new when it comes to mod creation, (i.e. my experience with the C.K. was less than productive) but this looks like an solid gateway drug so I'd love to get on board to help with script writing, story boarding, and the creative end.  I'm willing to attempt some of the technical work too if we can get a more experienced modder to help us out.  P.M. me if you're interested in my help and we'll go from there.  And hopefully, if the gods of LL be merciful, we can find someone with technical modding experience willing to jump in with us now/when the G.E.C.K. graces us with it's existence so we can make this a thing. 

[Guest]

So I have a few things to say about this:

 

1) theblacksmith is definitely right. I think your idea is solid but your script needs serious work.

 

2) You're in luck, because I'm willing to help with that, as an amateur playwright and self-proclaimed grammar Nazi (and I'm a Jew too. Weird, right?)

 

3) I've been a modder for several years now, but I'm pretty new when it comes to mod creation, (i.e. my experience with the C.K. was less than productive) but this looks like an solid gateway drug so I'd love to get on board to help with script writing, story boarding, and the creative end. I'm willing to attempt some of the technical work too if we can get a more experienced modder to help us out. P.M. me if you're interested in my help and we'll go from there. And hopefully, if the gods of LL be merciful, we can find someone with technical modding experience willing to jump in with us now/when the G.E.C.K. graces us with it's existence so we can make this a thing.

Yeah, I knew there were some grammar mistakes as that's my first time I'm doing that kind of writing in English. In addition, you being a "grammar nazi" could be a great help. As theblacksmith said at the start we can rewrite script.

So I guess we can go from here then.