Tirloque Posted January 5, 2020 Posted January 5, 2020 THE CHILD OF DARKNESS by Agent Tex I - THE CHARACTERS Spoiler [ The Main Character ] Spoiler Full Name: Arianna "Aria" Lustfal Bal Age: ??? Race: Advanced Coldharbour Xivilai Karma Level: Neutral - Hero for Hire Aria is a one of a kind Daedra, created by Molag Bal, the Daedric Prince of Domination. She was created to become the best of his new creations of Daedra and was trained in infiltration and she only wished to please her Father more then anything else. However Aria's jealous Brother Saren took notice of the attention she was getting from not just Molag Bal but other Daedra, everyone wanted to be just like Aria and he hated that. Aria soon become a well known Warrior in the Flesh Pitts, fighting fellow Daedra, Vampires and other Prisoners. Saren grew with anger and so he plotted his Sisters downfall. Aria was thrown into fights she had no chance of winning because Saren had rigged the rights, loss and loss she fell back down the ranks and soon landed at Saren's feet. Saren took advantage of Aria and used her for his personal gain, after a while Aria was abandoned by everyone who she cared for, Molag Bal had turned his attention onto his next creation, her "fans" turned hostile towards her and Saren was all she had left. Eventually Aria had fallen so low that she was no better then a Slave and so she was marked as failure and cast out. Saren then took this as his chance to break Aria into his own personal Slave. After many years in Coldharbour Aria was nothing but a Slave to now a powerful Daedric Warrior Saren Bal. After every fight, every victory he would have his way with Aria and she was more then happy to please her Master for that was her soul purpose in life now. Although not every Daedra was so blind to see the truth, one saw Aria as a victim, she knew that see had been played and tricked and that was not the right way to beat a warrior in Coldharbour. Erica Bal, Athena Bal's Sister took one look at Aria and knew she was special and not because she was Molag Bal's personal creation, no Erica knew Aria had a purpose in Coldharbour and it wasn't licking Saren's cock and kissing his ass. So Erica challenged Saren to a one on one fight, the winner got either Aria as a prize or would die a painful death. Erica knew Saren was tough but she was older, wiser and knew how to beat him with little effort. After this Erica took Aria under her wing, trying to repair the damage that had been done to her. Over time Aria regained her skill with blades and magic, Erica was a tough teacher but Aria knew Erica went well by it and with in a few month Aria was back to being the Badass she was. Erica and Aria took to the Flesh Pitts once again, and this time Aria wasn't going down without a real fight. Soon Erica and Aria were a deadly duo, all before them had been killed or broken by them. Molag Bal's gaze returned to Aria and she knew she would never again be forsaken by him or anyone again. While Aria and Erica had the time of their lives, Saren was once again plotting against Aria and Erica now and he would knew just how to make them fall. Saren caught Aria's attention again, he knew she still had feelings for her former Master and he used that against her, soon the two started a "relationship" away from Erica's eyes, all while he did this he gained Arias trust, used her and soon even had her plotting against her own Sister. Only the truth was Erica knew about Aria and Saren, she had told Aria to let him think he was winning her over, letting him think he was the boss of her yet Erica and Aria knew she only had one and that was her Father. Over this time a Grand to the Death Match was coming up, the best of all Daedra would fight for Lord Molag Bal's amusement and the winners would be given whatever they desired by Lord Molag Bal, within reason of course. Erica and Aria plotted against Saren, plotted to win the fight. Saren did the same. -This is very much like a story this part- The Grand Death came up soon enough, hundreds of Daedra and other worthy Fighters were pitted against one another. Saren, Aria and Erica all made it though till the final rounds, many had died to them, others refused to fight them and so they were bound and taken away to be dealt with personally by Molag Bal. Aria and Erica had plotted that Saren and his Partner would face off against them at some point, and they prepared for it. Elimination after elimination and then the last fight in the Pitts was Aria and Erica against Saren and his Partner. This was it, the final fight, a chance for Aria to get her revenge on her evil Brother Saren. Erica took wanted revenge on him for what he had done to Athena many years before she meet Aria. The fight went on for what seemed forever, but Erica managed to kill Saren's Partner, a Female Clone of himself who now laid dead, Aria and Erica had Saren on the ropes. Only it was all going according to his plan, soon after landing a hit onto Arias arm, Saren struck Erica from behind and with another hit on Aria, she too was on the ground now, Erica tried to stand up and finish the fight but Saren laughed as impaled his Greatsword into her, pinning her to the ground as she screamed in pain, Aria was horrified to see her Sister injured, but now it was him and Aria and Saren was without a weapon. Aria swung at him as fast and as many times as she could, all but missing him, he was fast yet he wore heavy armour, Aria knew it was heavy as Saren had made her clean it more then once before. Again she struck at him and pushed her Dagger onto his armour only for it to shatter on impact. Saren's armour was rough, really rough and Aria now knew it, she took one look at Erica and grew with fiery anger, she rolled out of Sarens way just as she lunged at her with his fists, she picked up Erica's Swords and shoved them right though Saren's leg and arm. He left out a massive laugh which only horrified Aria more. This time Saren wasn't playing around, he grabbed Aria with one hand, Erica's blades still stuck inside Saren, and he began to choke her as he smiled but before Aria could pass out she now felt a very sharp pain in her chest, Saren had pulled out Erica's sword from his arm and shoved it right though Aria. She fell the ground with a massive thud, she landed on her knees and felt Erica's Blade go though her more as it hit the ground and was pushed deeper. She watched as Molag Bal claimed his Winner, Saren was his Champion and asked what Saren wanted? Saren of course smiled, and told Molag Bal he wanted to save one of the Sisters, but let the other die and then be taken to Molag Bal's Personal Dungeon, a place even Daedra feared to go. Molag Bal granted Saren his wish but asked how Saren would choose and Saren again smiled. Erica looked up at Saren, he laughed as he walked towards her, her attention turned back to Aria, her own Blade was impaled though Arias chest and her wounds were far worser then her's and Saren knew it too. Aria would likely die before Erica would, Saren bragged to Erica about his reward from Molag Bal and at that point she knew Saren had played them too well, he then began to show his dominance over his defeated Sister with his penis, Erica watched as Aria coughed up blood, she called out to her a few times but Aria didn't respond at all, she knew she didn't have much longer left, she noted that Saren impaled her though her chest and that her lungs and heart were likely ruptured by the Blade. While Erica was too impaled Saren had made it so it was a far slower death by shoving his blade though her lower back, away from most of her vital organs, she would die yes but a very long time after Aria did. Saren had finished with Erica, his stain was deep inside her now, she felt it. He laughed as he walked off towards Aria, she tried to stop him with her hand, but he pushed her away and then continued towards Aria. With his boot place on her back he turned to face Erica again, and slowly he pushed her down to the ground Aria screamed like never before and Erica felt tears of sadness for the first time, Saren began to mark Aria while he stared at Erica, she knew she had to do something and fast or Aria was going to die. [ Her Spouse ] Spoiler Full Name: Phoenix "Phe" Leia Bal Age: ??? Race: ???? Karma Level: Very Good - Saint Phoenix and her "Sister" grew up outcasts from society and were easy targets for all sorts of trouble makers. It was at this point that Phoenix and her "Sister" Tali were kidnapped by a group of Daedra Cultists but they were soon freed when the Vigil of Stendarr attacked the base and a Vigilant named Isran refused his orders and saved them instead. After this he took them under his care and raised them as his own. Isran taught Tali how to fight and Phoenix how to read and since then shes never put a book down without finishing it. At a older and more mature age Phoenix was taught the basics of fighting by Isran and while she hated it, she knew it could one day save her life so she stuck with it. While being trained by Isran she taught Tali how to read and write and Tali was ever so proud of her little "Sister" both knew even though they had woken up in a cave together alone and naked there was no proof to prove they were really related but Tali refused to see it any other way. Phoenix was her only family and her only priority. After going for a lone walk on the outskirts of Whiterune, Phoenix was held up by Bandits who demanded she handed over her coin purse instead of doing as they demanded she ran, only to end up in a cave with no way of escape from the Bandits. -- Secondary characters -- [ The Spouse's Sister ] Spoiler Full Name: Talila "Tali" Bal Age: ??? Race: ??? Karma Level: Good - Champion of Justice [ The Spouse's Sisters's Best friend ] Spoiler Full Name: You don't need to know my name, ok call me Lara and yes that my real name Age: You don't ask a lady her age either Race: Halfbreed < High Elf Mother / Nord Father > Karma Level: Neutral - Profiteer [ The Main's Daughters / Clones... its complicated] Spoiler Full Name: Cortana Ariella Bal Age: ??? Race: Advanced Coldharbour Xivilai Karma Level: Neutral - Person of Refinement Full Name: Angelika "Angel" Vlandra Bal Age: ??? Race: Advanced Coldharbour Xivilai Karma Level: Neutral - Gray Stranger [ The Main Character's Mother ] Spoiler Full Name: Athena Bal Age: ??? Race: Advanced Coldharbour Xivilai Karma Level: Evil - Harbinger of War II - BLOG REVIEW Spoiler III - THE STORIES Sorted by storylines : Spoiler v5.1 - 05-2020
Tirloque Posted January 5, 2020 Author Posted January 5, 2020 Librarian's notes : Spoiler The old thread being owned by a guest account, no-one was able to edit it anymore. The original author showing no will of taking it back, I deleted the old one and recreated it. Aside from a slight reorganization and partial grammar edits, the content itself (for the Characters part) is as Tex originally created it. The links to the review and to the current blog were added by myself. And the feature image was shot by Alter Native. 2 hours ago, Agent Tex said: New thread? New thread indeed. The old one was held by a guest account, which made it impossible to edit, and didn't contain any links towards the current blog. Which is a little embarassing considering the current blog isn't named The Child of Darkness. Go find a blog without author and with a different title without knowing it... I did a few (failed) attempts to merge it with the thread of another user (those were the tests that you saw), but had no choice but to recreate it in the end. By the way, Tex, it's a good thing that you were the first to comment : I'm going to delete my first comment in order for yours to take its place. That way, if one day, you feel like adding more things, you'll have the second post to edit at your leisure. ------- Copy of the messages of the original thread : Spoiler On 6/21/2018 at 7:56 PM, Resdayn said: Nice On 6/21/2018 at 8:09 PM, Guest said: Thanks still editing it. On 6/22/2018 at 3:56 AM, The Gauntman said: A nice breakdown. I needed to see this. On 6/22/2018 at 6:20 AM, Guest said: I'll be adding more soon enough On 8/6/2018 at 5:27 PM, Tirloque said: @Agent Tex : It seems your blog's description was among the only things that did survive your delete button. Yet there's a lot of interesting background there, and no one to link it to the actual blog. If you want to update it once again, I might be able to merge this thread with another one (even an empty one, with only a link to your blog) you would create with your current profile. Other option is to simply copy paste the text, and re-upload the images from this thread to LL's new one. In that case I'l delete the older ones once the newer are up. Either way, if you ever feel like it's the moment to do so, poke me. On 1/24/2019 at 3:25 PM, Agent Tex said: lol I'll update you when On 1/22/2019 at 6:57 PM, Agent Tex said: I FORGOT ABOUT DIS!!!!! On 1/24/2019 at 8:13 AM, Tirloque said: The Child of who ? Never heard... Jokes aside, as we said, if you feel like recuperating it, create a new thread (and empty one), and I'll try to merge it with the old one. On 8/6/2018 at 7:29 PM, Agent Tex said: Ok, sure. On 10/21/2019 at 6:35 PM, Jayomms said: ? On 10/21/2019 at 7:30 PM, Tirloque said: The topic was bumped because I was doing some experiments with the merge function. I have limited moderation rights within this club. I wanted to see if merging it with another also changed the ownership (which would allow me to insert links to current COD blog). But apparently, editing posts and transferring ownership isn't among my rights. So I guess if Tex @Nuka Raider69 wants to recuperate this story thread, we'll have either to call to Alter or possibly CPU to do so. On 10/21/2019 at 10:44 PM, Agent Tex said: On 10/21/2019 at 11:18 PM, Tirloque said: Jokes aside, I think this thread can still be a useful character presentation. So if you have no plans to retake our homeland it, I may ask a moderator to transfer the ownership so I can add a few links to your blog (and possibly to its presentations in the library). EDIT : hey, you took back your original pseudo, Tex !
Tirloque Posted February 16, 2022 Author Posted February 16, 2022 On 12/31/2021 at 4:45 PM, Agent Tex said: Wow that info is so out of date lol It certainly is, yet the aim was only to provide a stable introduction at a time where your blog kinda wasn't. This seems like a long time ago however, and I'm glad to see you've caught up with most of your storylines, and that your blog seems stable and developed alright. ? If you want it updated btw, just let me know ; would it be solely by adding the links to your summary entries. It should also be possible to transfer you the ownership of the thread, if you wish to take over this one, ?
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