SexLab Romance SE Dialogue Revision 1.0

Description

This mod revises the dialogue in SexLab Romance SE. It is an .esl-flagged .esp.

Philosophy and Changes Made

DISCLAIMER: The following section contains my personal opinions and is not meant to be taken as objective criticism.

SexLab Romance is fantastic because it's simple and provides opportunities for roleplaying scenarios. I am not a fan of how the dialogues are written. So, I revised them with the following principles in mind:

• Simplification - The original lines are often too long-winded. I tried to make them more succinct.
• Immersiveness (patent pending) - Most of the writing makes me feel like no one in or outside of Skyrim would actually say these things. Some of that is inevitable since we're adding sex to a game that doesn't feature it, but I tried to make the the lines less over-the-top so that it's at least plausible that a character could say them (maybe). I consulted the Unofficial Elder Scrolls Pages for lore considerations, especially for comments relating to Dibella and Mara. If nothing else, the dialogues will read marginally less like a bad porno script. I also tried to make the tone more neutral to fit in with the base game better and to open up roleplaying options. Use your imagination, be creative, etc.
• Refinement - I tried to respect the original intent of a line when I could think of an way to salvage it. Besides changing and trimming out words, I channeled my inner grammar Nazi to try and make the English as clean and correct as possible. No more dialogues that are split across lines with ellipses.

I only edited the "Dialog Topic" section and that is all that's contained in this file. No feature creep or going beyond the scope here. As such, this mod is a seperate plugin and not a replacer for the original.

Installation

1. Ensure you have a working installation of SexLab Romance SE.
2. Download and install using your mod manager of choice.

Future Plans

• None - development has ceased for the foreseeable future. Anyone is free to use my work as long as I am credited.

Tools Used

• SSEEdit
• 7-Zip