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[C.O.D] 5 "Trusting Darkness"


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Lara Rosewood

And how did you managed to get captured this time Ella?

Karliah The Nightingale

Yes, I would also like to hear what tale you plan on telling this time

Ella The Thief

I was on my way back from Markarth to the Rift when they grabbed me. It happend while I slept, bastards used me as their personal fuck toy for days, its a good thing your "friend" showed up when she did or I'd still be sucking cock as we speak

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Karliah The Nightingale

Bastards, all of them. Did your friend kill them all?

Lara Rosewood

She did. Ella how come you never escaped? Your always bragging about how well you can slip outta handcuffs, you can lockpick a yoke for Nocturnals sake. Why did you not escape?

Ella The Thief

Did you not hear the part where they used me as a fuck toy 24/7? My hands were too busy stroking orc cock or jerking orc cock to pick my restraints

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Lara Rosewood

Hmm... my "friend" said you seemed to be enjoying getting fucked by the Orcs?

Karliah The Nightingale

Oh you've gotta be kidding me, not again ELLA!

Ella The Thief

What? It was free rough sex, I was in-control the whole time, stupid orcs cant even make a good lock. I could have gotten out the minute they put them on.

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Karliah The Nightingale

Your a fool!

Lara Rosewood

Yeah think? Ella I was worried sick!

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Ella The Thief

Told you I had the whole thing under control, matter of fact I was about to stab that asshole in the dick when your Daedra showed up. How'd you even get her to serve you anyway, never seen one like that before?

Karliah The Nightingale

Yes, thats a good question, how did you?

Lara Rosewood

I've got a magical tough, you've just never seen it before

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Ella The Thief

I've felt your magical touch many times thank you, you've never made me want to serve you like that. Okay you know what I mean Lara

Lara Rosewood

Shes a friend, well now she is anyway.

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Ella The Thief

Your friends with a Daedra now? Lara have you been hitting the Skooma?

Karliah The Nightingale

<Raises eyebrow>

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Lara Rosewood

Okay first of ew! I do not take Skooma, second this ones a little different to the common Dremora and scamps you've seen around. No this one is a Higher class for sure

Aria Bal

I think you mean has a Higher Class of Ass!

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Ella The Thief

Hah! Okay, where do I get my sexy blue Daedra?

Lara Rosewood

You don't, this one came... at a cost

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Ella The Thief

No fair! I want one!

Aria Bal

Hah, dont we all

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Karliah The Nightingale

So, now Ella has been rescued was there anything on your mind Lara? The Guide should once more be getting back into shape when I get this little trouble maker back

Ella The Thief

Hey! I'm not trouble

Lara Rosewood

No, that was it Karliah.

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Karliah The Nightingale

Come on Boss, lets get you home

Ella The Thief

Well, if its okay with Lara I wanted to stay here and recover.

Lara Rosewood

Your both welcome to stay the night here, I mean its a Guide Safe-house but its also my home

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Karliah The Nightingale

Thank you, but I must be going, farewell Ella

Ella The Thief

You too Karliah

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Ella The Thief

So, where am I sleeping?

Lara Rosewood

You can rest in my bed if you like?

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Ella The Thief

Can your Daedra come and tuck me in?

Lara Rosewood

No Ella, now go. I have to speak to this Daedra alone

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Ella The Thief

Oh fine! But remember I'm the Guild Master, I've brought in twice as much gold as you.

Lara Rosewood

Funny, real funny Ella go before I spank you!ijE52a7B_o.jpg

Aria Bal

I like this one, shes funny

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Ella The Thief

Thanks... I think?

Lara Rosewood

Oh do not encourage her

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Ella The Thief

Oh no you dont, I like this Daedra more then I like you right now 

Lara Rosewood

Fucks sake... Ella go, Karliah good day

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Aria Bal

I like your friends

Lara Rosewood

Thanks, Ella can be a handful but she means good in the end. You did me a solid for saving her

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Aria Bal

So now what? I proved I can be trusted, you proved you would hold up your part of the deal by granting me clothes and a better cell. But, as you know I've already left this place before and came back, kept my word

Lara Rosewood

You did, I trust you far better then I thought I would. So, I grant you Freedom

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Aria Bal

Thank you, but... freedom is not why I helped you

Lara Rosewood

Really, then why did you do it?

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Aria Bal

For me of course

Lara Rosewood

Really? Not for a certain red skinned babe we know?

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Aria Bal

Correct, I lost my place at my Master's side when you defeated me all the weeks ago. As a Daedra of Molag Bal's Relm of Coldharbour, I must serve a Master, but without one I am... useless, I have no reason to exist.

Lara Rosewood

So, your saying you need to be bound to one of us?

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Aria Bal

Sort of, I'm saying I need someone to be my new Master. And I've already chosen her

Lara Rosewood

Well, as glad as I am to hear it, I'm afraid like Ella I'm a sub in the bedroom so I'm not so good at the whole Master role.

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Aria Bal

Funny, but I've not chosen you, or Tali.

Lara Rosewood

Phoenix? You wish to what, serve her then?

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Aria Bal

Correct, she choose to be kind to me when many others have not, she is good. I wish to serve good instead of evil

Lara Rosewood

I'm not sure how she will feel about that, or how Tali will

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Aria Bal

Leave that to me, it will be a new experience for us both

Lara Rosewood

Right then

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Aria Bal

Thank you, for giving me a chance, you could have banished me, killed me, or worse. You freed me and I have just the way to thank you back

Lara Rosewood

How so?

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Aria Bal

The funny one, Ella I could... help keep her out of your hair for a while?

Lara Rosewood

Ugh... okay, how so?

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Aria Bal

So, I hear you like to be treated like filthy slave, is it true?

Ella The Slave

F yes I do<Thumps up>

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Aria Bal

Lara said as much. but I gotta say girl, you've got some real fun toys here, you ready to play?

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Aria Bal

I'm gonna show you some new fun way to play this game

Ella The Slave

Really?

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Aria Bal

Fuck yeah I am, trust me this is gonna go to the next level

Ella The Slave

Mistress Bal, please punish me

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Aria Bal

Firstly I'm not your Mistress Ella, I'm a fellow sub showing you how to enjoy this in other ways

Ella The Slave

Really? Hmm, kinky

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Aria Bal

Damn straight it is

Ella The Slave

Heh

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Aria Bal

Heh indeed

Ella The Slave

So what are you gonna do to me?

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Aria Bal

Bend over

Ella The Slave

Sure thing

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Aria Bal

You like that huh?

Ella The Slave

Yes... yes yes

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Aria Bal

Such a pretty ass you have, lets make it red

Ella The Slave

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Aria Bal

Hmm, your pussy smelly lovely but I'm down here for your ass

Ella The Slave

Hmm?

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Aria Bal

You ever had your ass eaten Ella?

Ella The Slave

No, wait... what are you--

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Aria Bal

Relax, just teasing you, teasing is a sure fun way to drive your sub wild. My Master would... nevermind, shall we?

Ella The Slave

Oh?

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Aria Bal

This vibrator in your pussy, is it on high?

Ella The Slave

YES, so stop playing around with it!

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Aria Bal

Yum yum yum

Ella The Slave

Ahhh!

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Aria Bal

Yummy asshole

Ella The Slave

Aria... that felt GREAT!

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Aria Bal

Be a good girl and I'll do it again

Ella The Slave

Ye.. yes I'll be good, promise

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Solaf

What can I get ya today?

Talila

The usual please

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Solaf

Alright, but it will take some time to gather all these things

Talila

Thats alright, my blade is with Hod, I have time to kill

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Solaf

Alright I'll get right to it

Talila

Thanks

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Talila

Oh! And do you have a copy of... uh, shit what was it again?

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Talila

Oh, Tales from Iron, Volume 2?

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Solaf

Cant say I do, but I'll check

Talila

Thanks

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Throthgar

What a sweet apple pie butt you've got there

Talila

What did you say?

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Throthgar

I said--

Talila

I know what you said, Gods... I am so tired of men staring at my as and breasts, grow up!

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Throthgar

Geez, are you gonna complain all day woman?

Talila

Oh screw you! Whoever you are?

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Throthgar

I am Throthgar, Dragonborn Hero

Talila

Yeah right Pal, just because you've got Dragonbone does not make you the Dragonborn

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Throthgar

Its true, damn fool. I am Throthgar Son of Bothvar, decedent of Edgarm Brother in Law of Einar, Second Cousin of Folkmar, The Slayer of Guldar

Talila

By Stednar, do you ever shut up?

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Throthgar

Hey baby, have you been arrested lately, because its gotta be a crime to look that good

Talila

Oh screw you!

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Throthgar

The word of the day is legs, lets go to your house and spreed the word

Talila

Fuck off and grow some balls!

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Throthgar

Great legs, what time do they open?

Talila

<Grunts>

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Lod

Hmm, wonder if that travel found my dog yet?

Talila

Hey Lod, my sword done yet?

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Lod

Oh! Miss Tali, yes I just finished sharpening it

Talila

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Lod

Oh, I also upgraded your hilt, and the grip needed replacing, I'm amazed you could hold it?

Talila

How, much?

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Lod

Hah... easy friend, just a joke. Only 70 gold for the repairs and replacements

Talila

Alright, here

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Lod

Say, you've never named your weapon have you?

Talila

No, I never thought to, broke so many weapons over the years

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Lod

Well, this one is special, tough and strong, light too. You should name it

Talila

Hmm, I'll think about it

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Lod

Good day Tali

Talila

You too Lod

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Talila

Ah its good to be back home

Phoenix

Tali!

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Talila

Oh the day I've had I'll tell yeah, I hate going into town of late

Phoenix

Why?

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Talila

Its... nothing, just stupid fools being well stupid

Phoenix

Oh, okay

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Talila

Say you read books a lot of books, do you know any cool weapons like mine in them? I'm looking to name my weapon

Phoenix

Hmm, I'd have to think on it but I'm sure we can come up with a cool name for your weapon Tali

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Talila

Great, oh and I managed to get that book you wanted, Tales of Iron was it?

Phoenix

Oh?

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Talila

When the delivery arrives you can have it then

Phoenix

Thanks Tali, I really am grateful

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Talila

Don't worry after the last few weeks its nice for everything to be back to normal

Phoenix

Yes normal, um... I need to tell you something?

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Talila

What is it? Has something happend?

Phoenix

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Talila

Right

Phoenix

Promise not to freak out?

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Talila

THE FUCK!

Phoenix

Tali, before you--

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Talila

I'll kill you!

Phoenix / Lara

Wow wow easy

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Aria Bal

Shes pretty angry guys

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Talila

Get out of my way, I'm gonna kill her!

Phoenix

Tali just hear us out

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Talila

The Daedra has corrupted you!

Phoenix

No she has not, shes not what we thought she was

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Talila

She tried to kill us!

Phoenix

I know, but shes sorry and wants to make things right

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Aria Bal

Shes still pretty mad

Lara Rosewood

Aria shut up, or I'll let her kill you

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Talila

Your protecting her? I thought you were my friend!

Phoenix

Tali stop, just hear us out please, its all we ask

Lara Rosewood

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Talila

Your fools, both of you. That thing will kill us all

Phoenix

Shes not a thing!

Lara Rosewood

Calm yourself, please no one needs to get hurt now

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Talila

Fine! But I refuse to be in the same building as a Daedra

Phoenix

Thats fine, she lives downstairs anyway

Lara Rosewood

Hmm, fair point

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Talila

FINE!

Phoenix

See, everyone is getting alone now

Lara Rosewood

Yes, the Deadra, I mean Aria can stay in the basement

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Talila

She lays one finger on Phoenix and you'll regret this Lara!

Phoenix

She wont

Lara Rosewood

She better not

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Talila

I'm going out

Phoenix

But Tali, you just got back

Lara Rosewood

Let her go

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Aria Bal

I think she took that pretty well

Phoenix

Tali?

Lara Rosewood

She needs some time to.... gather her thoughts imdpqDqh_o.jpg PjnaIp0o_o.jpg

Aria Bal

Big one happy family right?

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Lara Rosewood

Damn it

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Aria Bal

So, um... yeah that happened

Lara Rosewood

I'll go with Tali, try and calm her down before she tries to take on a horde of orc berserk, you need to be there for Phoenix Dae, I mean Aria. She trusts you

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Aria Bal

I'll... try my best

Lara Rosewood

Do not try, just do it!

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Aria Bal

Hey... um, Phoenix

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Aria Bal

How are you feeling?

Phoenix

Just leave me be Aria

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Aria Bal

Well... I say look in the bright.... Oh damn it, this is all my fault.

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Aria Bal

Look, I uh, I'm not good at this shit, stuff I mean. I've failed as a Warrior, I've failed as a Slave, I've failed my Sister and now I've failed you. I've torn apart your family, just like I did to my own

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Aria Bal

I'm sorry, can you forgive me?

Phoenix

Oh Aria, none of this was your fault. I'm just... I dont even know maybe I made a mistake

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Aria Bal

I am sorry for what I caused, if you want to send me away I shall leave and never come back

Phoenix

What, no no I don't want that. Your my friend, my first real friend in a long time. I cant lose my Sister and my only friend in one day

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Aria Bal

I dont have any friends either

Phoenix

I know you said that earlier, but you have me, and Lara I guess, Ella maybe too

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Aria Bal

Look I am going to make this right, I've failed too many times in the past to give up now I've got something good in my life. You have shown me a kindness I never knew I would feel ever. I owe you a debt that can never be repaid

Phoenix

Thanks, for saying those nice things but how can you make it right?

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Aria Bal

I'll show you

Phoenix

How though?

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Aria Bal

I look like a threat, I am a threat but I don't want to be

Phoenix

I know

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Aria Bal

I'm changing myself for you, I've never done this before

Phoenix

Done what, Aria what are you talking about?

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Aria Bal

Close your eyes and count to 10, then open them

Phoenix

Um, okay

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Aria Bal

So... um do you like?

Phoenix

Wow

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Aria Bal

This is what I think you would like me to look like

Phoenix

How did you even do that?

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Aria Bal

I can change my body, become other people even. I'm an Infiltrator or I was a long time ago. Now I am just Aria, your humble servant

Phoenix

Aria we talked about this

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Aria Bal

Think of it as I'm the Alfred to your Batman

Phoenix

My what?

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Aria Bal

Look, I don't get to choose who owns me. But, I'm glad its you

Phoenix

I dont own you, I''m your friend not your Master

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Aria Bal

Maybe I want you to be though

Phoenix

Huh?

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Aria Bal

I know where eyes went when I turned around

Phoenix

My eyes, they are in my skull silly

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Aria Bal

But they were fixed on my ass for a good 10 seconds, then back to my eyes. You like what you see and you want it I know the look

Phoenix

I.. um, like you as a friend

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Aria Bal

I know, and I'm trying my hardest to resist the urge to... nevermind

Phoenix

To what?

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Aria Bal

Kiss you

Phoenix

Kiss me, what would you want to do that?

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Aria Bal

Because I like you, I mean really like you more then anything I have ever liked. You... your, so perfect and even if you wish for us to be friends only for now I am happy. You make me happy

Phoenix

I do?

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Aria Bal

I am yours to do as you see fit. Hurt me, kiss me, love me I do not care. I only wish to be with you Phoenix, I have never felt this way about anyone before, even Saren

Phoenix

Are you saying, your... falling for me? Jb8a1T5E_o.jpg

Aria Bal

Not falling, fallen

Lara Rosewood

How are things going... oh, good I see shes not a total wreck, good job Aria

Phoenix

Huh, a wreck?

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Lara Rosewood

Nevermind, I tracked Tali to the ruins south of here but shes.. gone, even I cant find her

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Aria Bal

Never fear, Aria is here

Phoenix

No, Aria if Tali does not wish to be found then let her think, rest.

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Lara Rosewood

You know your Sister better then us

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Aria Bal

That is true

Phoenix

Tali will come back, when shes good and ready

Lara Rosewood

Oh, and I did find Ella drunk

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Aria Bal

Ella?

Phoenix

Lara's friend, you know the one with the nose piercing, she--

Lara Rosewood

You know who I mean Aria, shes passed out in my bed so dont get the wrong idea

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Aria Bal

What that the two of you are good friends who have sex from time to time and you both attend a Bondage Class every other Mondas in Riftne, oh and that you both care deeply for one another but refuse to act on your emotions because you've both had bad break ups in the past.

Phoenix

Huh?

Lara Rosewood

Okay, little creepy and its every Turdas not Mondas

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Aria Bal

I can... pick up on things. The Way Ella is with you, the way you both have similar marks on your body, she acts more... naughty around you because she knows you'll tell the head Master / Mistress and you both thrive in the thrill of knowing that you have each other's back no matter what are the odds. Your a family

Phoenix

Um... wow, Lara?

Lara Rosewood

Maybe I should worried?

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Aria Bal

I myself love Bondage, attended that place myself when I would come to... um

Phoenix

Whats Bondage?

Lara Rosewood

Nevermind, Aria come to what?

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Aria Bal

Kill my targets

Phoenix

You killed people?

Lara Rosewood

What kind of targets?

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Aria Bal

Anyone our Lord wanted to be killed, Priests of Dibella, Daedric Champions, heck even old men. I... am not proud  of it but it was a life time ago. I am not the Daedra anymore

Phoenix

Aria thats horrible

Lara Rosewood

So.. your seeking what, Redemption?

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Aria Bal

She knows what I want, its all I want.

Phoenix

She wants to be with me Lara, what do you think it means?

Lara Rosewood

She likes you, and you like her maybe not 100% the same way but its rare for a Daedra to be civil even friendly. Aria has...

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Aria Bal

Aria wishes to only be loved. A feeling she has never felt before

Phoenix

Aww

Lara Rosewood

And thats why, shes lonely

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Aria Bal

My Life in Coldharbour was not kind, I lived in a cage smaller then my body would fit, I was tortured for fun by my Master and the worst part I liked it, I spent so long living like that it became normal. I just want to be happy and you make me happy

Phoenix

Lara?

Lara Rosewood

Shes pouring her heart out kid, say something 4rZrlsHR_o.jpg

Phoenix

Aria we are friends, I like you, your sweet but I'm not... ready for anything

Lara Rosewood

Aka shes not ready for a relationship because shes had a bad one on the past too

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Aria Bal

No, your afraid of how it will impact your life, with Tali. Your worried being with me would destroy her or even worse make her hate you

Phoenix

Could you please not do that on me

Lara Rosewood

Or me ever

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Aria Bal

I will try my best

Phoenix

It will take some work, but I think I can teach you to be loved Aria

Lara Rosewood

Aww, your first date, how nice

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Ella The Thief

Did it work, think they bought it?

Lara Rosewood

Oh she bought it alright.

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Ella The Thief

You know you could join me for that class, its fun and a good work out

Lara Rosewood

I'd loved to, but I have lot on my plate now

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Ella The Thief

Surely you can spare 45 minutes?

Lara Rosewood

For you, fine... where is it again?

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Ella The Thief

I'll show you, meet me in the Bee and Barb next Turdas.

Lara Rosewood

Alright, guess its a.. um date

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Ella The Thief

Your still sweet me me?

Lara Rosewood

No, I'm not

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Ella The Thief

Only one way to find out

Lara Rosewood

Fine...

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Ella The Thief

The Safe-Word is Applesauce

Lara Rosewood

Funny Ella, come on Riften in a 3 day ride from here. We have work to do

 

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?Very Nice entry! I almost forgot about Throthgar and his Banana Kickboxing... I mean Kickbox Banana. ;):thumbsup:

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The Throtgar guy and his generic seduction lines was hilarious. XD The entry itself was rather good, however, some parts (the BSDM with Ella), though enticing, felt a bit out of place since Aria didn't have yet the kind of place/role she has now in Phoenix family. Also, if felt like the dialogues were mostly written after the screenshooting, and so the characters aren't always opening their mouths when speaking, and the narration feels a bit still at some moments. However, Aria's comments about the situation ("She's still pretty mad") are most of the time spot on in terms of humor/narration, same for the small exchange between Lara/Ella/Karliah, so overall the alchemy works. Just like the jpegs btw, no complaints with your current imgbox jpegs. Smiley_jap_HFR.gif

 

PS : isn't Talia a daedra as well. She doesn't feels as "undefined" than Phoenix, so to speak. =p

 

Malicia : « That Karliah gal looks very intelligent, and very pretty. As for Aria, Phe and Tali, they gonna get along very fine, yes. :classic_sleepy: »

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