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Shea's Story-Act 2- Chapter 5- New Horizons (Finished)


BoLtStEr2002

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This is now the finished version, I accidentally uploaded it early.

 

In Raven Castle...

 

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Shea: I was expecting a few more people.

 

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Gabriel: Well the queen cleared house. Not many are left.

 

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Shea: Your majesty I-

 

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???: So this is the one, she's very pretty

 

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???: I'd gladly spend some time alone with her.

 

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Gabriel: Well Aaron, you won't ever get that chance.

 

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Aaron: Calm Gabriel. Keep that temper simmering. I'm not going to do anything, sorry if I offended you Shea. It was meant as a compliment.

 

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Queen Orianna: Doesn't matter Aaron, she should be used to it by now.

 

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Sofia: Well, I think the apology was due, your majesty.

 

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Queen Orianna: Keep that attitude up and I'll have your tongue ripped out.

 

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Shea: Well I appreciate the apology, no matter what any of you say.

 

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Aaron: Well I'm happy she's outspoken. It takes a certain degree of self confidence to do that.

 

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Queen Orianna: Arrogance more like.

 

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Aaron: That isn't always a bad thing you know.

 

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Shea: How about both of you stop acting like bickering children.

 

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Aaron: That's a brave statement, but I have to agree.

 

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Shea: So, err segue. Ready for the main course?

 

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Queen Orianna: Isn't everyone?

 

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Sofia: You're right, I am.

 

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Gabriel: I am too.

 

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Shea: I don't partake, I don't like the idea of being seen as a cannibal by mortals.

 

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Sofia: Nothing ever leaves this castle, but if you don't want to we can't force you. I just don't have the willpower to abstain from blood for so long.

 

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Gabriel: Me neither, so enjoy the show I guess.

 

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An hour or so later, after much blood and food...

 

Aaron: Well I think that's enough for me tonight...I can't...

 

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Queen Orianna: Yes, definitely enough. Any more and I doubt tonight will be fun in any way.

 

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Sofia: Well I think it's time I rested as well, this feast, I've had to have a lot and (hic) some rest might do something.

 

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Queen Orianna: Well, tomorrow I hope to see you awake, because if you aren't I'll drag you down to the council room.

 

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Queen Orianna: Sir Gabriel, we need to talk. Because I want to know why half the guests invited didn't turn up and why half of them were killed!

 

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Gabriel: Err. Yes your majesty.

 

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Shea: Well since I don't have to stay, I think I'll retire to my room then.

 

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Sofia: Will you take me there? I don't think I'll get to my room without help.

 

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Shea: You can stay in my room if you like, I'll have a blanket or two brought over.

 

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Sofia: Yeah that sounds like a good idea. When I'm in this state

 

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Sofia: But I don't (hic) think sleep is what's going to happen tonight.

 

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Shea: Oh really?

 

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Sofia: Oh yes.

 

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A few minutes later...

 

Shea: Well you're a little...more...open today.

 

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Sofia: Well, you're quite alluring. With your red hair and my white hair. But what colour do they make?

 

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Shea: Pink?

 

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Sofia: Yeah...and I have an idea what other part of you is pink and waiting for me.

 

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Sofia: I'm sure you do to.

 

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Shea: Hey! I normally do the overly aggressive flirting.

 

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Sofia: Well I'm feeling confident tonight.

 

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Shea: Fine you want something with a bit of aggression or passion. (Kisses)

 

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Sofia: I didn't...well...expect that.

 

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Shea: That was the point. (Kisses)

 

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Shea: Now come on, shouldn't we take this to the bed?

 

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Sofia: I was desperate enough to take you where we stood, do you think I want to walk a few feet?

 

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Shea: Not even to the furs by the fireplace?

 

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Sofia: Maybe...when...I can't hold you as close as I am any longer.

 

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Shea: Oh please stop talking...when you're drunk you start not making sense, just- (kisses)

 

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A few minutes later...

 

Sofia: You're already warm enough without the fire you know.

 

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Shea: I'm not really sure how bu- Oww! No biting.

 

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Sofia: Your mind is telling you one thing but your body...well that's telling another thing.

 

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Shea: Well if my body is telling you something, act on it.

 

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Sofia: Oh don't say that, I can't guarantee what I do when I've had too much to drink.

 

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Shea: Then don't guarantee, I haven't drank anything and I need some fun to...(kissed on the neck)...tonight.

 

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Shea: Oh, that's the spot.

 

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Sofia: Patience my horny vampire, can't have pleasure with no work.

 

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Shea: Oh you can't say that now.

 

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Sofia: I can and I will.

 

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Sofia: Besides we have all night to touch, to play and to deviate from purity.

 

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Shea: Maybe I should get you drunk on blood more, you become...quite the romantic.

 

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Shea: But I'm tired of waiting, and I'm sure you must be as well.

 

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Sofia: Oh you know me too well.

 

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Both: (Kiss)

 

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Sofia: Far better than I remember, you must've practised. Fuck it, I need more.

 

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Shea: Then I think you'll have it, because you taste much sweeter.

 

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Shea: You know the bed is still an option?

 

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Sofia: I think I'll get a pillow, we'll have to get closer if we want to be warm.

 

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Shea: We're vampires, that doesn't matter.

 

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Sofia: Anyway, we've got a lot to do tonight, so lets get on with it and get the most fun out of it.

 

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Shea: Yeah you're right about that.

 

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Shea: Well she's still asleep I must've given her a good night, good job too. It'd be a shame to return to that intimacy and have it...well boring I guess.

 

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A few minutes later...

 

Shea: Well I think I'm ready for today, I'm curious as to how Gabriel has faired, especially after Orianna called him out.

 

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Shea: Well that's if any of them are even awake.

 

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Shea: I doubt they'll be awake, maybe I'll find out what it's like to be a ruler. Wait...

 

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????: Yarrgghh!

 

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Shea: Oh don't try that!

 

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Shea: Leaves a lot of you open for attack, to be honest your 'armour' doesn't help with that either.

 

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Shea: That's where I mean and-

 

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Shea: Oww!

 

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Shea: (Okay Shea, don't get cocky now)

 

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Shea: Fuck that hurts.

 

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????: Yeah without that armour I'm light, and I can do things like that.

 

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????: Now come on, just drift off to sleep, that's right.

 

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Shea: I don't feel, I...have a ch...choice.

 

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Spoiler

Shea: Uhh, where am I?

 

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Sofia: Home, well my home, more accurately. I apologise for my sister, Crenada's...interruption.

 

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Crenada: Well you asked me to do it!

 

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Crenada: But fine, sure it was all my fault.

 

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Sofia: Doesn't matter though, I'll just have to give the premium tour of Mortum Castle.

 

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Sofia: So come on then, don't just lay there.

 

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Shea: Fine, yeah I'm coming.

 

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A few minutes later...

 

Shea: You know this place looks familiar.

 

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Sofia: you think it was a coincidence that you woke up here?

 

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Crenada: Yeah it took me a while to get that temporal thing working Sofia.

 

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Crenada: You know you are going to have to repay me for that at some point.

 

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Shea: So you did that then? May I ask why you didn't just come here and greet me?

 

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Shea: Or was that some sort of failsafe so I couldn't tell anyone what'd happened?

 

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Shea: Not that it matters now though.

 

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An hour or so later...

 

Shea: I'm still confused as to why you brought me here, Crenada.

 

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Crenada: because they say you were one of the greatest fighters, I want to see if I could at least match you.

 

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Shea: You do realise how long its been since I've used a sparring sword and a katana right?

 

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Crenada: Well you better re-learn fast then.

 

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Crenada: You might enjoy this...challenge.

 

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Shea: Fine, lets get this done.

 

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Crenada: Well the position looks good.

 

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Crenada: But you do have to have it right to survive.

 

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Shea: I assure you, this is perfect.

 

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Shea: ( Now lets see what I can still do.)

 

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Shea: (Take the blade and strike at the stomach, I think)

 

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Crenada: Good lacking some fluidity, sure, but it works.

 

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Shea: Dead, very dead.

 

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Shea: Well a cut in the centre of the chest would hurt pretty bad as well.

 

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Shea: Okay, I think that's mutual death.

 

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Shea: But I'm sure I could get out of this.

 

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Shea: A short but meaningful training session, Crenada.

 

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Crenada: Well, when we both grew up fighting, training tends to be short.

 

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Shea: Well we agree on that much. But I think I could do with a snack.

 

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Crenada: But before we go...Always keep your guard up!

 

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Shea: Aahhh!

 

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Yeah sorry for uploading an unfinished version I didn't mean too. But thanks for reading!

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One word before I forget : I've noticed you've been using PNG since act II (and when I say I noticed it means I have to reload the entries several times to view them :classic_angel:). That's a bad idea, 'cause it makes your images take 2x to 8x longer to load, so it stresses servers and testes the patience of readers. You should use high quality JPEGs instead, they're more appropriate.

I've made a tutorial about it in the storytellers club, alongside guides made by other experimented authors, I advise you to check the JPEG & PNG part. :classic_wink:

 

'cause if one have the patience to go through the loading time, your entry was a pleasant read, with swift dialogues, beautiful screens and even some creative shots in the combat department. ?

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