It looks great! Her expression is excellent, nice job. I would personally LOVE a story, I'm kinda a sucker for 'em. I'd prefer you do it entirely instead of a choice mainly because I like to see other storytellers work by themselves, but that's just me. Looking forward to more!

The fact I'm wondering on what has been photoshoped or not is a good sign. I would think :

— The collar seems the most obvious photoshoped part of it (is lightning isn't uniform with the rest)

— The green light points and the lightning of those seem added

— Strange blur on the body ?

— Wondering about the tail but... if it is a photoshop, then it's really well done

Great pic overall. Now for a story ?

The fact I'm wondering on what has been photoshoped or not is a good sign. I would think :

— The collar seems the most obvious photoshoped part of it (is lightning isn't uniform with the rest)

— The green light points and the lightning of those seem added

— Strange blur on the body ?

— Wondering about the tail but... if it is a photoshop, then it's really well done

 

Great pic overall. Now for a story ?

Yeah, the body is from XNAlara, the head and tail are from ffxiv and the collar is indeed also PS.

The Green dots of light, i didnt' add all of them, just a few.

A strange blur on the body? It's propably because i'm bad at lighting 

Honestly, i'm bad at photoshop in general i suppose.

And yeeeeeaaaaaah, should work on a story. But i'm hella lazy and uninspired right now.

Looks great