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Sloan's Story part 54 - Lifting the Darkness


jfraser

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The door closed behind Sloan without ceremony.

 

There was no echo -- just the sound of stone settling into stone, as if the passage itself had decided she could not go back. The air inside the sanctuary was cooler than the forest above, thick with the smell of oil, iron, and old smoke. It wasn’t damp, exactly, but it felt used. Worn smooth by years of bodies passing through, breathing the same air, bleeding onto the same stones.

She didn’t move, at first. She stood just inside the threshold and observed.

 

The cavern beyond unfolded to her vision in patient layers -- edges resolving where others would see only swallowed shape, movement separating itself cleanly from shadow. Stone textures emerged, seams and scuffs made visible by nothing more than the faintest difference in tone. The concept of dark was not the absence of sight for her. It was simply a quieter way of seeing.

She remained still, letting her eyes soften, pretending adjustment, while around her, people believed themselves unseen.

 

Someone leaned against a pillar to her left, weight distributed for balance rather than rest. Someone else lingered high on a ledge cut into the stone, posture loose but angle precise enough to give a clear view of her entry. Two more figures stood behind braziers just far enough back to let the light fail around their faces.

 

Hidden, so they thought. Sloan let her shoulders slacken a fraction, played the part.

 

“Well,” a woman said from the deeper shadows, her voice calm and unforced. “She didn’t light a torch.” Kira stepped forward into the low glow in the center of the room, not concealing herself, not ornamenting the moment. She didn’t need to – command clung to her like a second skin, not loud, not brittle, but undeniable. She motioned Sloan forward as braziers around the room flared to life, lifting some of the veil of darkness.

 

As Sloan walked deeper into the sanctuary, more of it revealed itself – tables arranged for work rather than gathering; weapons placed where hands would naturally fall, not where they would look impressive; maps weighted at the corners, ink dark and recently refreshed.

 

People emerged more clearly into view.

 

A woman sat near the largest table, chair tilted back, one boot braced against a crate. Her face was sharp, clever, openly curious. She watched Sloan with the relaxed focus of someone assessing a problem they expected to enjoy solving.

 

Across the cavern, a Nord stood near a support pillar, broad-shouldered and deliberately still. His hands weren’t near his weapon, but Sloan could see the tension in his forearms, the micro-adjustments in stance that betrayed readiness.

 

Others pretended indifference less convincingly. A Redguard woman smiled too easily; an Argonian angled his body away while keeping one eye trained on her; a mage stood near the far wall, her attention divided between Sloan and something unseen.

 

Kira stopped near the center of the space and turned.

 

“This is Sloan,” she said. “She came looking for work.”

 

Someone snorted softly.

 

The woman at the table leaned forward, elbows braced, smile sharpening. “Your name’s already being whispered. That usually doesn’t happen unless someone’s made a mess.”

 

Here it was – the thread tightening. Sloan felt the attention sharpen -- not hostile, not yet, but alerted. The shape of suspicion changed when a name entered it, especially one that carried history.

“I didn’t make the mess. But I didn’t step around it either.”

 

That earned her a quiet, thoughtful sound from the Argonian, off to the side. He regarded her now more directly, eyes reflective even in the low light. “You carry echoes,” he said. “Not your own.”

Sloan resisted the instinct to look away. “So does everyone standing in this room. Some of you just learned to listen for them sooner.”

 

Across the cavern, the Nord’s mouth twisted. “That’s an artful way of dodging the point,” he said even as the Redguard woman laughed softly, friendly on the surface, and added, “You’ll fit in just fine, then.”

 

Sloan caught the precision of that laughter, the way it was calibrated to diffuse rather than connect. False warmth. She offered a small, polite smile in return.

 

Kira finally raised a hand, and the subtle friction in the room eased -- not gone, just paused. “She is not Melissa’s daughter. I re-confirmed the death of Trendil Shae – it cannot be doubted.”

The name fell into the space like a stone dropped into water.

 

Sloan kept her face neutral. Inside, something clenched -- not fear, but inevitability; she was suddenly very glad she had decided against the ruse of pretending to be Trendil.

 

“But resemblance invites speculation,” Kira continued. “And speculation has weight.”

 

The mage near the wall regarded Sloan with new interest. “Lineage is a dangerous thing to assume. But patterns have a way of repeating.”

 

Sloan paused then gave them a calculated truth. “I do not know my lineage. Whatever it is, I am not a pattern – I am a consequence.”

 

Silence answered that. Not approval. Not rejection. Assessment.

 

Kira turned slightly, angling her body so Sloan was no longer alone at the center, but not entirely shielded either. “You’ll stay. For now. You’ll be given space. And tasks. We’ll see what you do with both.”

 

“And if she brings problems with her?” the woman at the table asked.

 

Kira’s gaze was steady. “Then we see whether she becomes one -- or solves them.”

 

That was as close to reassurance as anyone here offered.

 

As the conversation drifted, people began to disengage in pieces, not all at once. Movement fractured, routes reestablished. A slow, deliberate return to routines that now included Sloan as an unresolved variable.

 

She noticed all of it.

 

Not just the movement, but where people thought the dark concealed them. The assassin who slipped onto the ledge above without sound, certain the angle hid him completely. The Argonian who retreated into a shadowed aisle between storage racks. The thin smile the Redguard woman dropped the moment she turned away.

 

Sloan let none of her observations show, of course.  She kept her gaze forward, her posture measured, her reactions appropriately delayed. She allowed the braziers to guide her, stepping where they would expect her to step, slowing where the light thinned. Better they think she navigated by what they could see.

 

Kira walked her deeper into the sanctuary, explaining little and assuming much. Sloan absorbed what she could -- the layout, the exits, the places where sound carried strangely. The places where it didn’t.

 

“You’re being watched,” Kira said, not unkindly.

 

“I know. I would expect no less.”

 

The Matron nodded; the answer satisfied her more than the truth would have.

 

As they stopped near a curtained alcove meant to pass as sleeping quarters, Sloan felt it fully then -- the weight of presence pressing from all sides, from darkness that was not dark to her at all.

This place dealt in things unseen; she simply happened to see them. But she cautioned herself not to become reliant on it - she would not make the mistake of believing that advantage made her safe. One of Gilna’s first lessons had been to avoid relying on just sight; eyes could be fooled all too easily.

 

The thought made Sloan realize her once-mentor had not been present nor, for that matter, had she seen Jorg. She could believe the former had managed to stay hidden even with Sloan’s strange gift, but in no timeline would the same be true of the latter.

 

It felt like a coincidence, and coincidences made Sloan itch, but there was nothing she could do to try to solve the mysteries, if they even really were such. She shook off the silent foreboding and concentrated on what she could control; learning her way around the maze that made up the home of the Dark Brotherhood. And also the hideout’s layout.

 

 

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HM1919

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Excellent work! 👍☺️ Kira & Co. came across as actually dangerous, instead of looking like little more than a bunch of costumed clowns - you know, the way they are in vanilla Skyrim. I think I was able to identify the inspiration for most of them - except the second redguard. She seems to be a new one. Unless, of course, good, old Nazir got his hands on one of those sex-change-potions. We'll see.

Also: I wonder how long it will be, until Kira figures out that Trendil's still alive. If she manages to connect the dots, it could turn out to be a rather rude surprise for our dear  assassin-in-chief. Not to mention a major bonk to her pride/ego. 🤔

 

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jfraser

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57 minutes ago, HM1919 said:

Excellent work! 👍☺️ Kira & Co. came across as actually dangerous, instead of looking like little more than a bunch of costumed clowns - you know, the way they are in vanilla Skyrim. I think I was able to identify the inspiration for most of them - except the second redguard. She seems to be a new one. Unless, of course, good, old Nazir got his hands on one of those sex-change-potions. We'll see.

Also: I wonder how long it will be, until Kira figures out that Trendil's still alive. If she manages to connect the dots, it could turn out to be a rather rude surprise for our dear  assassin-in-chief. Not to mention a major bonk to her pride/ego. 🤔

 

 

Those would be some pretty impossible dots to connect, I would think, unless she has a very vivid imagination and can play connect the dots in four dimensions. XD

HM1919

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43 minutes ago, jfraser said:

 

Those would be some pretty impossible dots to connect, I would think, unless she has a very vivid imagination and can play connect the dots in four dimensions. XD

If you say so. I was just thinking that

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a.) Marcus' fighting style ought to be pretty unique. And anyone who's seen "him" fight would remember how impressive of a spectacle that was. i.e. Sooner or later there will be witnesses that Kira's informants might come across.

b.) I fully expect Kira to keep an eye on what's going on with the Stormcloaks, since it would be foolish of her not to. And Marcus stands out like a sore thumb, no doubt.

c.) Sloan and Trendil have met (Labyrinthion, Skyrim 1.0). So she might be able to identify Marcus-Trendil's handiwork. Or at least come the conclusion that something looks/sounds "familiar".

d.) Some of "old" Kira's emplyees (Marie and Sebastian) definitely know about the existance of the sex-change-potions. And who's to say that they don't have any connection to Kira's new outfit. Or if not, then that such a connection couldn't get established. So, there's at least a possibility that Kira's little birdies might hear about those things.

 

All that being said: I happily admit that it wouldn't be easy to figure this out, but I wouldn't call it impossible either. Unless, of course, Kira has decided that the info she has is 100% trustworthy, and that there's therefore no need even consider the possibility of Trendil's still being alive.🤔

 

p.s. Added spoiler on the remote off-chance that I'm not entirely wrong with my speculations. 😁

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jfraser

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1 hour ago, HM1919 said:

If you say so. I was just thinking that

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a.) Marcus' fighting style ought to be pretty unique. And anyone who's seen "him" fight would remember how impressive of a spectacle that was. i.e. Sooner or later there will be witnesses that Kira's informants might come across.

b.) I fully expect Kira to keep an eye on what's going on with the Stormcloaks, since it would be foolish of her not to. And Marcus stands out like a sore thumb, no doubt.

c.) Sloan and Trendil have met (Labyrinthion, Skyrim 1.0). So she might be able to identify Marcus-Trendil's handiwork. Or at least come the conclusion that something looks/sounds "familiar".

d.) Some of "old" Kira's emplyees (Marie and Sebastian) definitely know about the existance of the sex-change-potions. And who's to say that they don't have any connection to Kira's new outfit. Or if not, then that such a connection couldn't get established. So, there's at least a possibility that Kira's little birdies might hear about those things.

 

All that being said: I happily admit that it wouldn't be easy to figure this out, but I wouldn't call it impossible either. Unless, of course, Kira has decided that the info she has is 100% trustworthy, and that there's therefore no need even consider the possibility of Trendil's still being alive.🤔

 

p.s. Added spoiler on the remote off-chance that I'm not entirely wrong with my speculations. 😁

 

I can see where Sloan might come to that conclusion -- she already has doubts. But a unique sword style would ring no bells in this version of skyrim since the sword school was never opened and the Trendil this skyrim knows was a master assassin trained in dagger work. :)

HM1919

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20 minutes ago, jfraser said:

 

I can see where Sloan might come to that conclusion -- she already has doubts. But a unique sword style would ring no bells in this version of skyrim since the sword school was never opened and the Trendil this skyrim knows was a master assassin trained in dagger work. :)

Right. I admit I didn't consider the different fighting-styles of Trendil 1.0 and 2.0 - so Trendil 1.0 would probably not get connected to Melissa's school, no matter how masterful her swordplay is.

HOWEVER, you better believe that I'm now eyeing that second redguard-woman with great suspicion. How long has she been a member of Kira's crew again? I mean, we already have one Trendil (1.0) who survived her own "death". So, who's to say that v2 of her didn't manage to do the same?🤔😊 

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jfraser

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1 minute ago, HM1919 said:

Right. I admit I didn't consider the different fighting-styles of Trendil 1.0 and 2.0 - so Trendil 1.0 would probably not get connected to Melissa's school, no matter how masterful her swordplay is.

HOWEVER, you better believe that I'm now eyeing that second redguard-woman with great suspicion. How long has she been a member of Kira's crew again? I mean, we already have one Trendil (1.0) who survived her own "death". So, who's to say that v2 of her didn't manage to do the same.🤔😊 

 

yes, Trendil 1.0 would not get connected to this Skyrim's Melissa's school because there was never a school to begin with in this Skyrim XD

 

 

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