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It's strange that I'm only seeing this story today, even though it's been around for a while. So far, I like the structure of the story and I'm curious to see how it develops. I like the great characters, especially Xera with her two-toned skin. 🙂  

1 hour ago, zilvradrow said:

It's strange that I'm only seeing this story today, even though it's been around for a while. So far, I like the structure of the story and I'm curious to see how it develops. I like the great characters, especially Xera with her two-toned skin. 🙂  

 

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Zilphia: "Oh, come on, Lord Sanguine. Just when things are getting interesting and beautiful... Well, I know you no other way. I feel for you, Aza."

 

 

I'm glad you're enjoying it. Xera is of the first original character to appear in this blog who wasn't even at least name dropped in my old blog series, and I'm really happy with how she turned out, both her appearance and personality, and I'm looking forward to bringing her back in future chapters.

And Aza appreciates your sympathy Zilphia.

Unfortunately, I have to admit that some words are difficult for me to understand until I grasp their broader meaning, as English is not my main language. But otherwise, I like it.

He should also tell her to bring the mobile shower unit. He has such a thing, right? Right?
I'm most interested to find out how those two story arcs finally converge, though I'm getting the impression that might take a couple more episodes. ^^

8 hours ago, Talesien said:

He should also tell her to bring the mobile shower unit. He has such a thing, right? Right?
I'm most interested to find out how those two story arcs finally converge, though I'm getting the impression that might take a couple more episodes. ^^

Yeah. Wherever she is,  bathing and personal hygiene obviously aren't priorities...

As far as convergence goes on these arcs, I'll say this:  Aza, Alma, and this... mysterious white haired girl, were the 3 principal characters in my previous blog and while their stories will converge here and there, coming together at some pivotal points, right now I'm mostly using Aza and Sanguine as a through point to introduce the primary protagonists and kick off each of their stories and show how these characters have shared a connection of sorts for quite some time. 

The catalyst for Alma's story was one of the earliest inciting incidents in my previous blog and I thought it would be fun to explore her partnership with Maven in greater detail so I decided to use that story as a backdrop and kind of do shorter arcs between acts to introduce or look more at other characters. Between Acts 2 and 3 for instance we'll be following Claire (from part 2) for a few episodes for an arc called Cold Blooded. 

So what we're doing right now is really telling a full Alma story while we do setup on other stories. My hope is to kinda keep the stories between these characters going in chronological order because the timeline of events is important to the overall story.

And I will stop going on and on before I bore you to death. LOL