I really liked the chapter

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1 hour ago, chooseChaos said:

 

I really liked the chapter

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Question: Does someone have no faith in Noctunal's travel services ... Yeah, sure, heroes don't take emergency exits on their epic hero's journey, but the interlude was definitely good.

Is the 'Scuic' at the mention of Sir Amiel's name a sign of the highest mouse respect or is it more ironic, in the sense of once a hero and now here & not in mouse heaven or at least in Sovngarde (although he is neither mouse nor Nord ... )?

Impressive location @Oblivion. 😇

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(Mocking tongues could later accuse a certain Daedra that his work was probably built on sand ... hehehe). 😁

 

 

I would say a scuic of surprise. 
He is surprised like his mistress.

Agarmir could have returned to Nirn thanks to Nocturnal.
He’s kind of the protected Nocturnal’s.

She’s already helped him many times.
Although it is not for kindness but for profit.
She wants to make him her champion, and the greatest champion of all time.
But as she said, Agarmir is stubborn and stubborn.
And it often tends to exasperate a little Nocturnal.😆

I like that the characters are all distinctive looking in these. Too often story blogs it seems stick to one character type or maybe several but not too distinguishable from each other. But you have a good variety going on. 

1 hour ago, dryuya said:

I like that the characters are all distinctive looking in these. Too often story blogs it seems stick to one character type or maybe several but not too distinguishable from each other. But you have a good variety going on. 

Yeah, it makes the story better.
Otherwise it’s too bland, too boring.