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Afterword:

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I know you excepting the "Gukahn! Gukahn!" Stuff, but that's reversed for Oldman ? And only Oldman gets to get that treatment.

So Noo, this is NOT a Substitue Story, nor is it the New Oldman NOR will it ever replace Oldman. Oldman Dovakiin will go on! So I hope everyone finally gets that ..

I love you btw~

 

So why the New Story and why not Rollo? For those who don't read Comments, let me explain.

Rollo got way out of hands with all the "I wanna do that OH and I just watched this and wanna add it!" I had in my stupid Head while writing most of it.

So Rollo is dead, long life the new one who's name is probably already decided. So no worrys here too. You get a Name! And you get a Name! Everyone will get a fucking Name! xD

 

I know this is not the kind of Story I'm known for. It has Naughtys and the Naughty will pile up of course. Like in Oldman, some of the Chapters will probably contain more sex then story. BUT! To make it not as chaotic as Oldman (I LOVE Oldman for it, but it doesn't fit here.)  I will see to it that we get every Information that we need Chapter by Chapter. So what do we know about the Main Character? He got a big Dick ?

So the next Chapter will explain a little bit more about him and the whole Descendant Part. You already guessed it of course, every Human you saw is part Divine/Daedric/Celestial. Celestial in Elder scrolls.. Yeah let me explain that part in the next Chapter, but to give you a little bit Info: Constellations. I refer to the Constellations as Celestial. Does it make sense that a Bunch if Stars reproduce? Nope.. But i don't care :classic_angel: And If i remember right, i played a Questline in Eso once where they had a conscious . Gives me more room to play and to avoid too many paralels to Oldmans Succubus Lore. They won't even be a big Part in the long Run. It's more of an interesting Backstory and to explain a few Abiltys our Main Guy has. No he probably won't be a Son of whoever. Probably more the Grandchild. Thin Blood = less power = More Fun to read about him. Which Grandchild? Take a look at the Title of this Story and you will know for sure which ones.

 

Other Questions I need to answer before they come up? Ah right.. Rape.. Yeah Rape will be a Thing here. Same goes for Battle Scenes. I modded my Game now in a way where I can truly make Battle Scenes, with blood and all (No gore. I hate Gore.) And why the Rape? So Oldman Dovakiin never, ever in the history of Nope will touch somebody without consent. I need something to get rid of those Ideas. But I dunno how, when and in which degree I will implement that.

 

 

So: Oldman = Funny, Random, Chaotic, Sexy, Naughty.. Gukahn?

This Story: more Serious, naughty, sexy.. Fucked up.

 

So after this big Wall of Text. Thanks your reading me here, hope you enjoy this Story. This Story and Oldman will get regular Updates,i won't give an interval this Time. Which Story i have the most Ideas or urge to do will get updated. If both of them are equal, Oldman will has priority tho. ^^

 

Every polite and nice worded kind of criticism is more then Welcome btw.

 

 

 

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I will see to it that we get every Information that we need Chapter by Chapter. So what do we know about the Main Character? He got a big Dick ?

Got the important lore done with first, I respect it.?

 

Seriously, though going to be fun seeing where you take this.

 

Oh and the whole celestial thing in elder scrolls lore is kind of strange. The stars are said to be holes punched into the sky by the aedra leaving nirn. Not like that matters much though, the idea of celestial beings sounds easier to lewd than holes in the sky.?

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8 minutes ago, yorpers said:

Got the important lore done with first, I respect it.?

Of course! ?Believe me or not.. There is kinda "Lore" to that too ?

"He got bitten by a radioactive Porn star!"

No that's not it.. Of course not.. I Wish It would be tho..

 

10 minutes ago, yorpers said:

s sounds easier to lewd than holes in the sky.

You think? I might know a Guy.. And a Women who could stuff those Holes too ?

 

But yeah, I know the rough Lore about them. But still they had a conscious in Eso.. I dunno why anymore because the Quest was boring and i never finished it, but they had ? So I will just roll with it. Maybe explain it as Vestiges of divine powers sacreficed to make Nirn who developed Personality.. And a Dick. But the actual Constellations won't ever show up I decided. ?

 

 

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3 minutes ago, Gukahn said:

"He got bitten by a radioactive Porn star!"

Almost makes me want to transfer fallout4 from my backup drive? but then a settlement might need my help, and fuck doing that for the 5000th time.

 

7 minutes ago, Gukahn said:

You think? I might know a Guy.. And a Women who could stuff those Holes too ?

Only one way to find out.:classic_angel:  

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5 minutes ago, yorpers said:

Almost makes me want to transfer fallout4 from my backup drive? but then a settlement might need my help, and fuck doing that for the 5000th time.

Things I will never buy in Fallout: That Ghouls have a Dick..

Not gonna lye, i really liked F4's atmosphere, the Ruins, most Enemy's. Even some of their NPC's and Companions were great written. But the whole Storyline about your Son, Synths and most the Factions? Especially the Railroad Motherfuckers? I hated to much, i never finished the game. Coming from me, who really loved F3. ? That and I never saw an NPC Replacer that made it worth to lewd the game.

 

8 minutes ago, yorpers said:

Only one way to find out.:classic_angel:  

Pris, ready your Dick. We gonna grab us some Spaceballs ?

 

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7 minutes ago, Gukahn said:

Things I will never buy in Fallout: That Ghouls have a Dick..

Not gonna lye, i really liked F4's atmosphere, the Ruins, most Enemy's. Even some of their NPC's and Companions were great written. But the whole Storyline about your Son, Synths and most the Factions? Especially the Railroad Motherfuckers? I hated to much, i never finished the game. Coming from me, who really loved F3. ? That and I never saw an NPC Replacer that made it worth to lewd the game.

You know, I never finished it either? I couldn't really get into the story either. Felt too much like Irobot or something. Was fallout 3 the one with the atom cultists and the mutant hillbillies? Fuck me, that was a good time if thats the one.

 

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1 minute ago, yorpers said:

You know, I never finished it either? I couldn't really get into the story either. Felt too much like Irobot or something. Was fallout 3 the one with the atom cultists and the mutant hillbillies? Fuck me, that was a good time if thats the one.

 

The cultists came up yes, but not as a Main Part ? Fallout 3 was the one with the Space Ship in one DLC. Where you got to shoot E.T to death with a few out of Time Followers like a Cowboy and an Astronaut ?

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4 minutes ago, Gukahn said:

The cultists came up yes, but not as a Main Part ? Fallout 3 was the one with the Space Ship in one DLC. Where you got to shoot E.T to death with a few out of Time Followers like a Cowboy and an Astronaut ?

oh god the spaceship? I remember going through that now and yeah it is the one with the mutated hillbillies. The point lookout expansion has those. I definitely got to go back and replay that game at some point with more mods.

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8 minutes ago, yorpers said:

oh god the spaceship? I remember going through that now and yeah it is the one with the mutated hillbillies. The point lookout expansion has those. I definitely got to go back and replay that game at some point with more mods.

 

Now that you write it.. I do remember it vague.

More of a New Vegas - Dead Money kinda Guy. I freaking loved New Vegas's DLC's.. Apart from old world blues. That one was shit

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Oh! Something new! That's always good! And it's always interesting to see what else can be done and what stories to tell. Experimenting in the storyteller field is always interesting and rewarding in terms of experience. 
So that's a start, and I wish you luck with new stories ^_^

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2 hours ago, Crw said:

Oh! Something new! That's always good! And it's always interesting to see what else can be done and what stories to tell. Experimenting in the storyteller field is always interesting and rewarding in terms of experience. 

Yes, I think so too. It's astonishing how much the working process and own quality control can change over Time too ?

 

2 hours ago, Crw said:

So that's a start, and I wish you luck with new stories ^_^

Thank you very much, I certainly will have  much fun working on them ?

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So Noo, this is NOT a Substitue Story, nor is it the New Oldman NOR will it ever replace Oldman. Oldman Dovakiin will go on! So I hope everyone finally gets that ..

But Gukhan, why did you stop Old Man? It was sooo good and had still so much potential. ?
Hehe, sorry couldn't resist. ^^

Interesting new story, sooo I suppose the only way to kill one of those Immortals is by beheading? ?

White Nyr ... not a bad choice at all, hopefully she will be a main. ^^

 

Btw. *engage nitpicking mode*
 

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that's reversed for Oldman

Reversed? So totally unlike "erster Gang, zweiter Gang, dritter Gang, vierter Gang, dann R für Rally"? ^^

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17 minutes ago, Talesien said:

But Gukhan, why did you stop Old Man? It was sooo good and had still so much potential. ?
Hehe, sorry couldn't resist. ^^

I will put Enyo in a Chastity belt! ?

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20 minutes ago, Talesien said:

nteresting new story, sooo I suppose the only way to kill one of those Immortals is by beheading? ?

 

Ok fuck it, I've looked for 8 minutes to find a funny Highlander Meme.. I've got over 200 Sex pictures to sort out cut and to edit. ?

Btw, the Characters you saw ain't Immortal.. That was more for the daedra, Aedra, whatever Dras.. xD

 

26 minutes ago, Talesien said:

White Nyr ... not a bad choice at all, hopefully she will be a main. ^^

Uhhh you gonna hate me.. You really going to hate me..

 

26 minutes ago, Talesien said:

Reversed? So totally unlike "erster Gang, zweiter Gang, dritter Gang, vierter Gang, dann R für Rally"? ^^

T__T ever so often.. reserved I know, I know... stupid Fingers, too fast for their own good sometimes

 

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8 hours ago, Gukahn said:

I will put Enyo in a Chastity belt! ?

Who are you kidding? You like her to much to do that to her just on my behalf (and who knows, I might think it's funny ... I definitely would like to see Pris after a couple of days in one. ?)

 

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Uhhh you gonna hate me.. You really going to hate me.

So if I added that I didn't feel it appropriate to also mention the other two ladies were not so much my type (hence if they would not show up again in any significant capacity that wouldn't faze me at all), that would make things better or worse? ?

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4 hours ago, Talesien said:

Who are you kidding? You like her to much to do that to her just on my behalf (and who knows, I might think it's funny ... I definitely would like to see Pris after a couple of days in one. ?)

True... I Like Enyo so much right now.. Gdmn.   And yes, seeing Pris in one would be god damn funny ?

I Think I have a new Idea for a Chapter, yes, yes I like you Guy's giving me new Ideas to bullshit ?

Chastitiy Belt for Pris.. And an awkward Meeting with Talos' Ghost for Lyida.. Yes, yes..  What was the Plot again? What did I just said recently about following it a little bit more? ?

Who cares.. :classic_angel:

 

4 hours ago, Talesien said:

So if I added that I didn't feel it appropriate to also mention the other two ladies were not so much my type (hence if they would not show up again in any significant capacity that wouldn't faze me at all), that would make things better or worse? ?

 

Mh.. A Little Spoiler that is. ? Dunno how significant as of now. Only finished a Part of the chapter rn But if you wanna now if they become regular ?

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No, they won't ^^ never was the plan. (Yes I have a Plan.. Holy shit xD)

 

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38 minutes ago, Talesien said:

Plans don't seem to be your problem, to be honest. Foe contact is, and you are your own foe here, it seems. ;)

When it comes to Oldman.. Yes. I definitely wrote myself into way to many Plots at once. Should've solved one Issue before making the next ?

Good Thing is. One big Issue I've fucked up is resolved. Only thing I need to fix now is the McGuffin Issue with this "Item" nobody even knows exists anymore and was the whole Reason for Lydias search in the first Place.. I Think the best way to resolve this would be some flashback Episodes with her and Enyo ? shouldn't be too hard.. I still have all items they wore in Chapter 1.. Would need to change Lydias replacer back for a while tho.. I think ? cleaning the one I'm using now, hence making it empty so Bijin can take over again should suffice..

(You see and that is why most other if not all other story blogger don't add too much new shit to their modlist.. Unlike me cause.. I am an Idiot ?)

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Interesting start ; with the plot getting intertwined with the sex scenes more or less successfully (I can think of other ways of waking up a faking man ^^) but always getting the pacing right. Now technically, the lighting isn't always perfect, but I suspect there were some photoshopping in the unclothing sequence. While it was well executed, at some point Shamone seems not to hold her bra anymore, yet there isn't a visual indicator of it falling, which looked a bit strange. Kudos for the character design of the "elder" specially, all in contrast between her skin and her hair/paint/eyes. Noticed some useful uses of different layouts as well.

I'm curious to see how the plot will develop as well compared to sexual part of the entertainment (though it seems implied that daedra and aedra were about the same at some point, which might be incorrect). Anyway, nice entry overall. :D

 

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Does it make sense that a Bunch if Stars reproduce? Nope.. But i don't care :classic_angel: And If i remember right, i played a Questline in Eso once where they had a conscious .

ldyMRSUy_o.png « Stars can't honey-honey, 'cause even though sometimes they look very close, in fact they're thousands of miles away from each other.

              Plus they have gaz problems, uh. :classic_angel: »

 

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ldyMRSUy_o.png      « Well, I would call it "a man's thing".  More commonly known as the pee-pee. :classic_lightbulb:  »

 

 

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30 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Now technically, the lighting isn't always perfect, but I suspect there were some photoshopping in the unclothing sequence. While it was well executed, at some point Shamone seems not to hold her bra anymore, yet there isn't a visual indicator of it falling, which looked a bit strange

Mhm the Lighting is a problem of mine when doing things in the dark, I still need to work on yes that's why the next Chapter I am writing will be in a darker area too, hopefully that way I can improve. About the unclothing, thanks I will keep it in mind when I'm doing another one, to show every important piece drop ^^

Yes I edited a little bit in Photoshop and Paint.Net, very much in the second chapter too were I tried myself again to ad things that aren't really there. Same as with the dark scenes, I'm hoping to improve with constant practice

 

39 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Noticed some useful uses of different layouts as well.

Thank you for noticing that. I've been experimenting a lot. The next chapter also had noticeable differences in regards to the Bubbles a little bit later. I "upgraded" to a different Tool for them. Made their quality noticeable better after reading the Whole of  Crw's blog I thought i really needed to change those to look at least almost as good as theirs.

(But I also saw that I really have more spaces to improve.)

 

45 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Kudos for the character design of the "elder" specially, all in contrast between her skin and her hair/paint/eyes.

Again, I can't take credit for other Peoples Work. I'm using very many Follower and NPC mods. the only thing about them i can take credit are the lighting and positioning (apart from the wiring part of course.)

The Only Character I've made myself in this Chapter is the Guy. The only Female Character I made up till now is Varemina in Oldman ?

 

46 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

I'm curious to see how the plot will develop as well compared to sexual part of the entertainment (though it seems implied that daedra and aedra were about the same at some point, which might be incorrect). Anyway, nice entry overall

We will see about them. They aren't the main objective of the overall story, more or less a way of exposition and a way to add a little bit extra to the World. There will be more descendants of them in the future and they will play their Part ,but the real story will be about Arlans Journey and another Character I am going to show in Chapter 3. ^^

 

 

54 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Stars can't honey-honey, 'cause even though sometimes they look very close, in fact they're thousands of miles away from each other.

              Plus they have gaz problems, uh.

 

maybe they've send their "Affection" with spacepost :classic_angel:

 

 

Thanks as always for giving me pointers to improve :)

 

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?Well it seems it has began.

 

That was.. quite a horny start.

 

Did you rebooted it? I remember you not having an enb, but this one seems have it, visually looking better than vanilla.

 

:classic_angel:That hairstyle is interesting choice on our protag.

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3 hours ago, Resdayn said:

Did you rebooted it? I remember you not having an enb, but this one seems have it, visually looking better than vanilla.

I didn't, you're just at chapter one of already 16 ?

I started to use ENB from chapter 10 on wards, everything before that is reshade^^

Only got hornier from there :classic_angel:

 

29 minutes ago, wilson99 said:

thank you a nice and cool start , looking forward to get more of your story ?

thank you, there are already quite a few chapters finished ^^

 

 

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