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good job as always, i really liked the personality of the captain aldis character. Although, I had thought that something would happen between Sirrae and Elisif, now I'm hoping for more scenes with the captain. Anyway, keep up the great work and godspeed.

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Good entry, I'll have to go back and read more of it at some point. ? I can tell these took lots of effort. My only mild criticism is the outlined colors with the font are hard to read for somebody like me with vision problems, but that is something I can deal with on my end, so keep doing you? and good read!

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