Gukahn blink twice if you are okay! Wait no, blink twice if you are not okay! What have you done with him??

Milf needs punishment but your going to have to get real creative on how to make her not enjoy it.?

I also recommend imagining Sheogorath's part as his voice actor reading it.?

4 minutes ago, yorpers said:

Gukahn blink twice if you are okay! Wait no, blink twice if you are not okay! What have you done with him??

Gukahn is currently figuring out how in the world he got the feels and how to kill them off. Cause as he started writing, he happily thought about a 2 Some with Aria, DB and Enyo and then the Feels took over and everything went down Crying Vile, Population one. T^T

5 minutes ago, yorpers said:

Milf needs punishment but your going to have to get real creative on how to make her not enjoy it.?

Oh trust me, she won't.. I have an Idea.. If she had a Dick, i would Theon Greyjoy her this instance..  

8 minutes ago, yorpers said:

I also recommend imagining Sheogorath's part as his voice actor reading it.?

Shit.. That's good ?

40 minutes ago, Gukahn said:

Gukahn is currently figuring out how in the world he got the feels and how to kill them off.

Whiskey? blowjobs? Blowjob on the rocks? WAIT NO, FUCK THAT!

41 minutes ago, Gukahn said:

Oh trust me, she won't..

I guess we will find out who is the most sadistic of the sisters? or even DB? He has been hanging around deadra too much to not get some ideas. I guess it's  only fitting Enyo will be the key actor though, going to be fun seeing what you come up with. Well, for some people?

Just now, yorpers said:

Blowjob on the rocks?

Don't let that Idea go to waste my Friend.. Ice Cubes are.. Interesting trust me.. It's not as bad as it sounds ? (the reverse however, wasn't as fun.. Maybe I really am a bit of a masochist)

2 minutes ago, yorpers said:

I guess we will find out who is the most sadistic of the sisters? or even DB? He has been hanging around deadra too much to not get some ideas. I guess it's  only fitting Enyo will be the key actor though, going to be fun seeing what you come up with. Well, for some people?

The other Sisters have no reason to make their Mom suffer. It's just a Human ?

they might feel for her, but only as much as you would feel for your Sister crying about a broken Toy.. Well not all of them, but the majority and then nothing will get done x.X

Haha this looks like some type of Demonic Reunion 

Alright Gukahn, there are a few things that I have to say about this chapter:

- It's time to run for the hills when Sheogorath appears to be the most reasonable person present.

- You better make sure Enyo get's some extra moral support after this. She deserves it.

- As far as I am concerend Ruppert's spirit is still floating around somewhere. And I will not accept "Nope. He's gone." as an answer at this point in time. Perhaps later. Maybe.

- As for Mommy Dearest's punishment: You could always stick her into some deadric pocket-dimension where no naughty stuff can exist. At all. Like a magical snowglobe that is the antithesis to everything that a succubus stands for. Where she has to remain for... How long ago was it again since she pulled her little stunt with Ruppert and Enyo? Yeah, that long.

p.s. I shall now go and squish feels of my own.

3 minutes ago, FutaNemesislol said:

Haha this looks like some type of Demonic Reunion 

Well, you're not wrong ? Maybe I should've put some Wings on the Teddy

1 minute ago, HM1919 said:

- It's time to run for the hills when Sheogorath appears to be the most reasonable person present.

Yup.. We should all be worried about that..

1 minute ago, HM1919 said:

- You better make sure Enyo get's some extra moral support after this. She deserves it.

She gonna get all the comfort i can give her ?

2 minutes ago, HM1919 said:

As far as I am concerend Ruppert's spirit is still floating around somewhere. And I will not accept "Nope. He's gone." as an answer at this point in time. Perhaps later. Maybe.

You will see..

3 minutes ago, HM1919 said:

As for Mommy Dearest's punishment: You could always stick her into some deadric pocket-dimension where no naughty stuff can exist. At all. Like a magical snowglobe that is the antithesis to everything that a succubus stands for. Where she has to remain for... How long ago was it again since she pulled her little stunt with Ruppert and Enyo? Yeah, that long.

 

So round about.. uff  180 Years? Don't worry, she will get her punishment ? Just have to write everything in a way, her other loyal Daughters and the Princes can't say anything against it.. I do have an idea.. And this time.. no dick shall rise and no pants is to drop. The thought of doing a lewd scene with Mommy makes my sick rn tbh 

19 minutes ago, Gukahn said:

 

The other Sisters have no reason to make their Mom suffer. It's just a Human ?

I just figure the succubus instincts might kick in when someone mentions "punish mommy"?

Nah my money is on Vaermina being the most volatile one to be honest. I figure the ass whopping is going to come from someone who seems to be more powerful like that, but I'll wait and see?

18 minutes ago, Gukahn said:

Don't worry, she will get her punishment ?

Oh, I am not worried. Judging by what you managed to come up with so far I am sure, that she will not enjoy herself when the times comes. So much so, that her having to wear nuns clothing and chastity belts for a few centuries might seem downright mild in comparison.

I like this episode so mutch

The moement when Sheo is the most sane person in "the room"... i start thinking we have problems.... a lot of them. XD

Oh wow, that 2nd half of the story was really bittersweet. You did some amazing writing there. Loved it.

First half (ok more like 1st third) was of course, as usual, ok perhaps slightly less naughty, but certainly funny. That 'childrens book world' was great, I'm with Rupert here, I think Pris lost a few too many braincells to the continual endorphin rush she is in. 
I hope she does not get between Enyo and DB, now that they finally form some bonds. Doubt she would do that intentionally (unless she thinks that might cut her off from his cock ?)  [There I can do some half clever wording as well. ^^] Still she might do it unintentionally, she has not exactly scored high in the EQ department so far. To put it mildly.

Must feel odd for Sheo to keep getting "outperformed" in the "behaving utterly mad compartment". ^^


Of course now we want to know even more why DB went to that trash shack of a house and lived (if we can call it that) there for 20 years. Seems more and more like an odd decision. If he wanted boredom, he obviously could have picked up farming again. Painted yourself into a corner there? ^^

Guess it's decided now, I will have to remake Enyo into a proper (aka custom voiced, situational aware, etc.) follower. I've been planning to do something like that as my first serious foray into modding anyway, just not been sure on the follower to pick (a close contender was actually Lydia, as I really liked her using Improved follower dialogues - Lydia, so I considered expanding on that, but then Roadhouse came out with a massive update just recently, so one contender gone, left it between Enyo and Snow). Well, that's a project that will take some time, I know only the bare basics about writing mods so far (and I already don't like the CK :p), but well you know "Winter is coming!" and I need something to do when not cycling 20 hours a week anymore. ^^

8 hours ago, HM1919 said:

Oh, I am not worried. Judging by what you managed to come up with so far I am sure, that she will not enjoy herself when the times comes. So much so, that her having to wear nuns clothing and chastity belts for a few centuries might seem downright mild in comparison.

I will try my best ? And there ain't any Nuns involved.. That's a fetish, she does not deserve any fetish I enjoy writing! She won't take  any kink away from me ?

7 hours ago, Nonseen said:

I like this episode so mutch

The moement when Sheo is the most sane person in "the room"... i start thinking we have problems.... a lot of them. XD

Thank you ?  Yeah.. I get the feeling my Sheo developed dual personality disorder and his "Sane" Character comes out right now... Which still would be mad ?

4 hours ago, Talesien said:

Oh wow, that 2nd half of the story was really bittersweet. You did some amazing writing there. Loved it.

Thanks

4 hours ago, Talesien said:

I'm with Rupert here, I think Pris lost a few too many braincells to the continual endorphin rush she is in. 

Could very well be.. I wanted to be very lazy and just write it off as Succubus Puberty but she ain't that young. As the youngest of them she is less then 200, the actual Age i haven't decided yet. (only Enyo's so far . Who is 200 or 206, i did the Math and noted it somewhere. )

And Enyo is either the second or third youngest. Haven't decided on that either. Maybe start to mentally mature around the Age of 200 ? Or Ruppert is right and she really is the special needs Child of the Family.  That and the thing aboud her not being able to control her Urges yet.

4 hours ago, Talesien said:

I hope she does not get between Enyo and DB, now that they finally form some bonds. Doubt she would do that intentionally

mh.. You know what? That's actually a really funny idea, bound to lead to an interesting Conversation or a little Sisterly Fight between them. Since, like you said, it wouldn't be out of real jealousy in Priscillas case, it wouldn't ruin anything and it would fit her Character so far. ?

And it would make them all more life like too.. Gukahn yes?

4 hours ago, Talesien said:

Of course now we want to know even more why DB went to that trash shack of a house and lived (if we can call it that) there for 20 years. Seems more and more like an odd decision. If he wanted boredom, he obviously could have picked up farming again. Painted yourself into a corner there? ^^

No, i haven't this Time xD I know since Day one why he lives there and why he decided to be there for so long. DB's Backstory is the only thing that's written in Stone in this Story it was just never a Focus Point, like he ain't really the major Character everyone's attention should be on. Like our own Player Character, the really interesting things happen around him. But he will get his Time to Shine and the Why's and How's will be explained too. In what way however, will be decided when  the Story develops further

(I even have a mini story around his Family already written somewhere since Chapter 5 xD)

4 hours ago, Talesien said:

Must feel odd for Sheo to keep getting "outperformed" in the "behaving utterly mad compartment". ^^

Aye, I need to give him the Moment of Crazy befitting a Mad God... Good Thing is, we still owe him 2 Tasks. So opportunity's will come ^^

4 hours ago, Talesien said:

Guess it's decided now, I will have to remake Enyo into a proper (aka custom voiced, situational aware, etc.) follower. I've been planning to do something like that as my first serious foray into modding anyway, just not been sure on the follower to pick (a close contender was actually Lydia, as I really liked her using Improved follower dialogues - Lydia, so I considered expanding on that, but then Roadhouse came out with a massive update just recently, so one contender gone, left it between Enyo and Snow). Well, that's a project that will take some time, I know only the bare basics about writing mods so far (and I already don't like the CK :p), but well you know "Winter is coming!" and I need something to do when not cycling 20 hours a week anymore. ^^

Wow, cool! ?

Enyo sure as hell would be a real interesting choice to make a Custom Follower. When I remember it right.. I Think she also was the very first Follower of that Smithy I downloaded and gave of making that Blog in the first Place. Looks like she must be something of a Muse ?

I don't know who Snow is, but she ain't beating our blue bundle of Joy

7 hours ago, Gukahn said:

And it would make them all more life like too.. Gukahn yes?

I would say, go, knock yourself out. ^^

(Poor DB though, that's one of the situations you never wanna get into as "the guy" ?).

7 hours ago, Gukahn said:

I don't know who Snow is, but she ain't beating our blue bundle of Joy

https://www.nexusmods.com/skyrimspecialedition/mods/46645

Yes, yes, she has Enyo like ... assets, but I really like her face. That's rare as far as Skyrim NPC's go. (And if I've a fetish, then it's certainly a face fetish ... Sack übern Kopp und ab fürs Vaterland läuft bei mir ned. ^^)

1 hour ago, Talesien said:

I would say, go, knock yourself out. ^^

I'm going to enjoy it.. Way too much

1 hour ago, Talesien said:

(Poor DB though, that's one of the situations you never wanna get into as "the guy" ?).

Don't call him poor. "That Guy" has more Friends he had sex with then any other Guy in Skyrim by now ? Although.. Don't know if you can call him and Aria friends.. Associates?  FuckBuddy's? My Girlfriends hot older Sister? (Yep, I think I have almost all good Porn Tags covered by now.. I would need a Dilf and Gilf.. Cougar Project recently comes out frequently.. Grelod the very kind? ?)

1 hour ago, Talesien said:

Yes, yes, she has Enyo like ... assets, but I really like her face. That's rare as far as Skyrim NPC's go. (And if I've a fetish, then it's certainly a face fetish ... Sack übern Kopp und ab fürs Vaterland läuft bei mir ned. ^^)

Doesn't look too bad. Nothing that would fit my game but not bad ?

Singst vorher die Hymne, dann lüppt dat. Hat mein opa immer gesagt ?

My girlfriend's hot sister sounds like it might (soon) fit quite well. ^^

And yes I guess he had lots of sex, but then I wonder if he might suffer from Satyriasis?
 

4 hours ago, Gukahn said:

Doesn't look too bad. Nothing that would fit my game but not bad ?

Well tastes differ of course, she kinda reminds me on the 'vamps' from old B/W Movies, I like that aesthetic, artificial as it might be, it had style.

Ich hege den Verdacht, damit das mit der Hymne klappt, muss man alle Strophen können, da bin ich raus. ?

12 minutes ago, Talesien said:

And yes I guess he had lots of sex, but then I wonder if he might suffer from Satyriasis?

Mh... If you want to be logical about it he might. I would rather call it bad case of Succubus, i mean it isn't hard to imagine their overflowing aura do have an influence of his performance  and lust  ? On another note "How does he Function" might also be because of his Dragonborn status.. Those are at least lowest tier demigod i think. ? So..maybe 3 or 4 levels below a Demi Prince?  So all of that could come from that.. Or a Combination of them all. Or Gukahn just loves to bullshit this Dude as always ready to shoot ?

On a Side note.. Does there something like a Power scale for Elder scrolls exist? Would come in handy of not rate him to high or low.. Fucker killed Alduin but gets kidnapped pretty often xD  I really need to think about it.. For now, I will say something something old, something something rusty, something something bullshit

19 minutes ago, Talesien said:

Well tastes differ of course, she kinda reminds me on the 'vamps' from old B/W Movies, I like that aesthetic, artificial as it might be, it had style.

Mh.. Somewhat reminds me of Vampirealla yes.. Or one of those Scooby Doo Hexgirls

20 minutes ago, Talesien said:

Ich hege den Verdacht, damit das mit der Hymne klappt, muss man alle Strophen können, da bin ich raus. ?

Schwachsinn, musst nur ordentlich einen im Kopp haben, dann klappt's auch

1 hour ago, Gukahn said:

Does there something like a Power scale for Elder scrolls exist? Would come in handy of not rate him to high or low.. Fucker killed Alduin but gets kidnapped pretty often xD  I really need to think about it.. For now, I will say something something old, something something rusty, something something bullshit

Dunno, can't remember seeing any (semi-)official power ranking for the ES, though I bet someone tried something like that.
As for the DB, aye I always wondered if there is something like a pretty odd weakness to ''oddball incapacitating effects". Like he is no more susceptible to say paralysis poison as anyone else (or even less). To effects or substances that are quite rare and no more than a handful of people (still) know, a DB seems far weaker than your average guardsmen.

 

Aye Vampirella also falls into the looks category Snow is in.

1 hour ago, Gukahn said:

Schwachsinn, musst nur ordentlich einen im Kopp haben, dann klappt's auch

But sir, me is tea total.

(Well actually more like water and milk, I'm not big on tea either.^^)

 

7 minutes ago, Talesien said:

a DB seems far weaker than your average guardsmen.

Well apart from the Shouting, I don't think there is any extreme difference between a DB and a normal Person of their Race. Maybe their Potential is higher and they learn and improve faster then other Mortals which might be seen as super human at some point. Imagine a Swords Master of 20 Years, getting beaten by someone who only just started to train for 3 Years or even less. It would be seen as impossible. So since they are mortal apart from those Features, every substance hurts them like everyone else until they reach the point of becoming OP like our Player Character. Also the thing with Dragon Souls might be something to consider. The more they get, the stronger they could become maybe? Even a Blade master or battle Mage could not defeat Alduin Solo..  a hard topic ?

 But if a DB in general has a major weakness.. It's an interesting thought and might be worth looking into. Since my DB started to use shouts again, I tried to minimize their use. I explained myself with his Age and that he really is rusty but the longer the story, the weaker this excuse gets. Can't really say Cool downs xD Ok with the Aspect shout i could but that's  not working for the Rest. Maybe something like 3 Shouts A Day and he is spend.. Imagine using screaming for more then a few Minutes. Kinda like that.

22 minutes ago, Talesien said:

But sir, me is tea total.

(Well actually more like water and milk, I'm not big on tea either.^^)

Waah Tea... Only a few.. Gimme Coffee and I'm happy x.x

3 hours ago, Gukahn said:

So since they are mortal apart from those Features, every substance hurts them like everyone else until they reach the point of becoming OP like our Player Character. Also the thing with Dragon Souls might be something to consider. The more they get, the stronger they could become maybe? Even a Blade master or battle Mage could not defeat Alduin Solo..  a hard topic ?

You know it's kind of like that for a reason? 

When the Numidium was first activated by utilizing the trapped soul of the Underking held in the Mantella,^[23] it caused a Dragon Break that would result in large portions of the region becoming inhospitable, being heavily contaminated with what was only called "poisoned glow-rock," much to the spite of the native population. During the Break, Tiber Septim utilized the power of the Numidium to conquer the rest of Tamriel and purge all the royal families who did not vehemently support Tiber's reign. Due to the memory altering effects of a Dragon Break, this event is remembered by the inhabitants of Tamriel only in obscure legend.

 The lore of Tiber Septim is that he buttfucked himself into the empire not my using his powers as dragonborn, but by buttfucking time itself.?  ??      ??

5 hours ago, yorpers said:

The lore of Tiber Septim is that he buttfucked himself into the empire not my using his powers as dragonborn, but by buttfucking time itself

Tiber is Priscilla's most favorite Person ever now ?

Quite the interesting chapter once again I must say. And quite the coincidence I did pick this one after having read Blue Sorrow. Under that wackiness of yours, you were able to create quite the moving moment on an emotional standpoint. Ruppert the Teddy had more in store than we expected from that point of view (not to mention, good job at getting him facial expressions ^^). Your party of characters look like quite the dysfunctional family, but in the end still a family of sorts. All that in a sexy/WTF permanent wacky atmosphere that make your works quite unique. It might be difficult to set the cursor right on the wackiness aspect though, because too few and it's not Gukahn's, too much and you're diluting the powerful parts of your story into a chaotic myriad.

Now it seems to me that you went through quite the edits for the "in book" part of the entry, to make it more like a drawing. And I noticed that your style regarding the comic layout leads to a good use of different panels, though the color code of the bubbles  requires an effort from the reader. Quite the interesting work overall.

« I very suspect a lot of those people had boobies surgery, uh.

                But they look like they're all good friends now. And they very like their teddy, yes. »

10 hours ago, Tirloque said:

And quite the coincidence I did pick this one after having read Blue Sorrow.

You seem to have a Talent to pick Chapters at Times ?

10 hours ago, Tirloque said:

(not to mention, good job at getting him facial expressions ^^)

I was lucky. I can't take full credit for this, it was more of a coincidence that F.E.P Works on him really. If not I would've had way more work in Photoshop 

(Posing him took way longer tbh.)

11 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Your party of characters look like quite the dysfunctional family, but in the end still a family of sorts. All that in a sexy/WTF permanent wacky atmosphere that make your works quite unique.

Thank you

Would you believe me if I said that Oldman should've been an all in all dark and tragic story and evolved pretty fast into what it is now? I think i consider it as a Parody of sorts now. Something where truly everything that could happen, really could happen. Threw the script out the Window long ago. I think that's the biggest difference between it and most other Blogs I am started to read to improve and see how others work on their Story's and it's the sole Reason I tried to make another Story to block some of my imaginations from entering it. (Which didn't work quite well so I am starting over and make a new one with more holding back my inner Sheo. So that Oldman won't suffer from.. Well the only thing i ever regret writing is the Solitude part.)

I finished this Arc with the last Chapter, just so you know if you pick one of the future Oldman Chaps.

11 hours ago, Tirloque said:

It might be difficult to set the cursor right on the wackiness aspect though, because too few and it's not Gukahn's, too much and you're diluting the powerful parts of your story into a chaotic myriad.

Yes, it's not easy holding myself back at times like I said.. The best example in this One is the Bird Part. That one was solely triggered by my frustration. This Thing crashed into my Npc's 2 Times in a Row and messed up my whole scene ?

But I try to keep an Eye on the sole Reason why they do this and that and to quickly set the focus back to the story. I just sometimes lose myself in the comedic parts.

11 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Now it seems to me that you went through quite the edits for the "in book" part of the entry, to make it more like a drawing. And I noticed that your style regarding the comic layout leads to a good use of different panels, though the color code of the bubbles  requires an effort from the reader. Quite the interesting work overall.

Thank you very much ?  About the Book, I haven't had to do much here too tbh. The Sky already looked like a drawing, so only things I did was fiddling with Reshade for an Hour  and adding a Filter in Photoshop afterwards. But my Working Process involves Editing Tools more in general compared to the past. Also started to see if I can ad Blood and other Things not possible in the Game, I think I've read all Tutorials I found in the Club by now. ?

Could I ask you what you mean with the Bubbles? are they hard to read? If so please tell me and I will stop using the transparent Bubbles and stick with the fully colored ones. 

11 hours ago, Tirloque said:

I very suspect a lot of those people had boobies surgery, uh.

They are a Boobtastic fucked up little Family ?

Thank you for your comment, I'm always glad reading fair criticism so I can improve ?

I love to work on Oldmans story, even if I lost myself at the beginning. I think I found my footing in it tho^^

(not saying that.. It won't be random anymore .. I mean.. that's part of its charm  )

11 hours ago, Gukahn said:

Thank you

Would you believe me if I said that Oldman should've been an all in all dark and tragic story and evolved pretty fast into what it is now? I think i consider it as a Parody of sorts now. Something where truly everything that could happen, really could happen. Threw the script out the Window long ago. I think that's the biggest difference between it and most other Blogs I am started to read to improve and see how others work on their Story's and it's the sole Reason I tried to make another Story to block some of my imaginations from entering it. (Which didn't work quite well so I am starting over and make a new one with more holding back my inner Sheo. So that Oldman won't suffer from.. Well the only thing i ever regret writing is the Solitude part.)

Well, some of the early chapters were almost exclusively sex, sequestration, and rape. So compared to those, there is still darkness in the those two Rupper entries, but many more elements as well. As for the inner She, I see you are quite aware. ^^

11 hours ago, Gukahn said:

I love to work on Oldmans story, even if I lost myself at the beginning. I think I found my footing in it tho^^

(not saying that.. It won't be random anymore .. I mean.. that's part of its charm  )

Of course. It's just like cooking in the end. Getting the good dose for your personal recipe rather than skipping ingredients.

11 hours ago, Gukahn said:

Thank you very much ?  About the Book, I haven't had to do much here too tbh. The Sky already looked like a drawing, so only things I did was fiddling with Reshade for an Hour  and adding a Filter in Photoshop afterwards. But my Working Process involves Editing Tools more in general compared to the past. Also started to see if I can ad Blood and other Things not possible in the Game, I think I've read all Tutorials I found in the Club by now. ?

Could I ask you what you mean with the Bubbles? are they hard to read? If so please tell me and I will stop using the transparent Bubbles and stick with the fully colored ones.

Your bubble's opacity is fine ; it's rather that IMO the eyes gets drawn to the shapes faster than it is to colors. And thus bubbles with tails indicate more intuitively the origin of the voice than just fine borders. So in the end your outlines color codes and bubbles' opacity are fine, but I would simply avoid skipping the tails whenever possible.

11 hours ago, Gukahn said:

They are a Boobtastic fucked up little Family ?

 

Thank you for your comment, I'm always glad reading fair criticism so I can improve ?

« You're very welcome.

                Plus I like giving expert advice to people, yes.  »

16 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

As for the inner She, I see you are quite aware. ^^

He talks to me when I sleep.. He constantly whispers I should put my Fish Stick in custard ? It scares me.. And makes me hungry

17 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Of course. Adjusting the dosage seems to be the way to go, not renouncing to it.

I will try ?

19 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Your bubble's opacity is fine ; it's rather that IMO the eyes gets drawn to the shapes faster than it is to colors. And thus bubbles with tails indicate more intuitively the origin of the voice than just fine borders. So in the end your outlines color codes and bubbles' opacity are fine, but I would simply avoid skipping the tails whenever possible.

Alright now I understand better. So the normal Speechbubbles would be the way to go more often then not ? Yeah I can try that, as long as there are Characters in the Picture. If I have bigger things to write and have no Character in the Pic, I will use the other ones without tail tho. It's a better way to write longer texts and in Sexcenes, I might resolve to use them too, or stick with colored text Photoshop be praised. Of course I could try to learn how to show more and tell less.. Something I currently have a hard time to do x,X But it's one of the Things very high on my List.

I'm reading Crw's storyblog right now. They have a really good way in doing it. Maybe I learn while reading more

24 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

                Plus I like giving expert advice to people, yes.  »

And they are always welcome too. I like to improve my Hobby ^^

And it makes even more fun if the quality reaches new standards