For this second installment, the protagonist indeed seem to have a more active roles/choices/attitude, and it's nice to see her more active. Good ambiance as well, with the quality of the written part doing a good job at enforcing it (humor included ^^). Actually, in the sex scene, there eve was way more written than what we actually saw considering the viewing angles (which is a good sign for the dialogues/onomatopoeia, but means the screenshots aren't self sufficient). Still refreshing in its setting at the moment, and a pleasant read overall.

« I see Telsei has some experience at being seductive, yes.

                My expert advice would be to sit right next to the guy, or even on his lap if you're extra-sure, but not on the table, no.

                'cause the guy isn't gonna creak nor break when you're sitting on it, you see ?  »

9 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

For this second installment, the protagonist indeed seem to have a more active roles/choices/attitude, and it's nice to see her more active. Good ambiance as well, with the quality of the written part doing a good job at enforcing it (humor included ^^). Actually, in the sex scene, there eve was way more written than what we actually saw considering the viewing angles (which is a good sign for the dialogues/onomatopoeia, but means the screenshots aren't self sufficient). Still refreshing in its setting at the moment, and a pleasant read overall.

 

 

 

« I see Telsei has some experience at being seductive, yes.

                My expert advice would be to sit right next to the guy, or even on his lap if you're extra-sure, but not on the table, no.

                'cause the guy isn't gonna creak nor break when you're sitting on it, you see ?  »

> As you can see, mr. Trilog, Malicija appeared even in FO4 and here https://www.loverslab.com/topic/172016-animated-gifs/?do=findComment&comment=3835825. Soooo popular

11 minutes ago, Evaloves4 said:

> As you can see, mr. Trilog, Malicija appeared even in FO4 and here https://www.loverslab.com/topic/172016-animated-gifs/?do=findComment&comment=3835825. Soooo popular

 

« The first gal can't be me, 'cause even if I like cookies, I exercise too. 

                About the second gal, I forgot you can also sit on a guy's face, but that's only if you've already met him before, yes.   »

8 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

 

  About the second gal, I forgot you can also sit on a guy's face, but that's only if you've already met him before, yes.   »

> No, not necessarily. I used to sit like that on many guys' face and i didn't even know them

54 minutes ago, Evaloves4 said:

> No, not necessarily. I used to sit like that on many guys' face and i didn't even know them

« That's very not recommended, 'cause if you don't know the guys, you don't know if they have Chlamydia or not, you see ?

                 »

On 8/8/2022 at 3:20 AM, Tirloque said:

For this second installment, the protagonist indeed seem to have a more active roles/choices/attitude, and it's nice to see her more active. Good ambiance as well, with the quality of the written part doing a good job at enforcing it (humor included ^^). Actually, in the sex scene, there eve was way more written than what we actually saw considering the viewing angles (which is a good sign for the dialogues/onomatopoeia, but means the screenshots aren't self sufficient). Still refreshing in its setting at the moment, and a pleasant read overall.

 

« I see Telsei has some experience at being seductive, yes.

                My expert advice would be to sit right next to the guy, or even on his lap if you're extra-sure, but not on the table, no.

                'cause the guy isn't gonna creak nor break when you're sitting on it, you see ?  »

Thanks for the feedback again; I appreciate the insight!  
I'm definitely trying to mix a good amount of light-hearted humour into the mix since that's my favourite kind of storytelling myself (I don't like SUPER serious all the time), and this whole Diamond City story arc has quite a bit of world and character building to help set up the actual underlying plot I'm trying to go for. As for the screenshots not being super sufficient, I definitely agree that this particular chapter was on the weaker side visually, but I wanted to keep it short to move on to the meat of the chapter sooner. I'm also at the mercy of what AAF poses/scenes I have installed, and the sad fact that I can't seem to make all the model skeletons work as perfectly as I'd like (so I have to compensate with angles or 'ModPos' the characters mid-action), but I'm doing my best to keep a nice mix of decent visual and written stuff in there going forward. All in all though I'm glad you enjoyed it and hope my work only improves with time and experience messing around with what I have available to work with.

In regards to your character's comments, Telsei indeed has some experience being seductive. Her run-in with the ghoul wasn't the first time she's gotten busy, but it was her first experience being taken by force by a wasteland monster! lol That being said, life in the Commonwealth is pretty dangerous at the best of times, so she's had to use her feminine wiles to get out of some sticky situations before (and will again, obviously!)  As for sitting closer to the merc than she did, she IS pretty shy around him due to the crush she has on him, so she didn't want to overstep her boundaries until she knew he was interested too.