Well, this is quite the surprise. I wasn't expecting the captions to be so well written in particular, it emphasized the narratives, the feelings and the ambiance quite significantly, which was useful considering the amount of idle screens. Atmosphere which isn't too commonwealth since Fallout isn't the most popular media for the blogs section. Quite enticing screens I"d say, and an unusual body type as well. Now, while the radioactive  damsel in distress setting is uncommon, don't forget to keep the story advancing and to setup twists, this will vary the entertainment types, and refresh the main attraction. And to develop your protagonist personality and capabilities, now that she's free from her captor. Anyway, interesting work.

Thanks for the feedback, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
This was my first go at the whole 'webcomic' style thing so it's a little rough around the edges, but I've finished the next volume already with a bit more polish and I have quite a lot of ideas for the future of the series going forward. I'm definitely going to be adding more character development and 'world building' as I go (the next volume is more focused on that and it's a good deal longer overall because of it. lol)  I'm also going to be adding a few more characters in the future (since it's set up like a collection of "reports", so-to-speak), so while Telsei is going to be the main focus, others will eventually pop up (and probably crossover) in the future. I definitely want to progress an actual narrative in the long run, while sprinkling in the various naughty bits to keep it what it is.

(I'm also working hard on keeping it 'realistic' in the Fallout 4 world sense. I'm going to have these stories run parallel to (or before/after) the Sole Survivor's involvement in the Commonwealth, but never actually interfere with anything that the player would be doing themselves, so as to make it more believable that this stuff could conceivably be happening at the same time as the SS's journey and they just never happen to cross paths. haha)