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Sloan's Story part 17 - If You Can Sneak Up On a Deer, You Can Sneak Up On Anything


jfraser

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“This is stupid. Don’t we know anyone who can shoot a bow?”

 

“Shh!” Gilna waved frantic hands in a downward gesture.

 

Sloan dutifully shut up, but the question remained in her head. Here they were, sneaking through the trees to kill a deer with a dagger from close range instead of doing what sensible people did – shoot it from a distance. Fortunately, the deer did not appear to have heard the talking - it continued to munch on clover-laden grass.

 

Gilna stopped, so Sloan did as well, but then Gilna motioned forward. It took a moment for Sloan to understand that she was meant to finish the job herself. She frowned and made a half-hearted gesture of protest back, but it was meant more as jest than anything else. At Gilna’s second wave, Sloan turned and began her approach.

 

Her steps made no sound on the loam (another question: had all that “silent step” training really been to prepare her for this? Was Gilna looking to find new hunting partners? It had never made much sense that they would need to step so quietly around the Ladies) and they had spent a good chunk of time maneuvering to get downwind. All that was left was to sneak up behind a giant wild beast and slice its neck open without getting gored or trampled.

 

Easy.

 

 

As she stepped out of the trees and into the small clearing, the deer finally seemed to sense something was amiss. Its head snapped up and it snuffled the air. Sloan froze in place. She figured she had three steps to go, but she doubted her acceleration could match the beast’s. But then its head began to turn and she knew she was out of time. She braced herself then ran forward, one step, two steps, then a leap. The deer started and turned fully, flanks bunched to make its own jump.

 

Blind luck more than anything saved the hunt – the deer leaped forward directly into the path of Sloan’s dagger. Bright red splattered as the creature’s throat sliced itself along the blade’s keen edge. A half-second later, the deer was gone, leaving a crimson trail as it crashed through the trees. Sloan grunted as she belly-flopped onto the ground. The impact pushed the air from her lungs and the knife from her hand and she spent several seconds simply trying to breathe.

 

Much like her predecessor in this clearing, she didn’t hear anyone approach. Gilna was just there by the time Sloan had her breath back and was able to sit up.

 

“That was well done.” Gilna studied the trail of blood as she spoke. “It took me three tries to get my first deer. You got yours the first time.”

 

“Maybe.” Sloan looked around for the knife but didn’t see it. “I’m not sure how deep the cut was. It may have been only a surface wound.” She poked at the nearest bush.

 

“Not with this much blood. You cut it good. Now we just have to follow the trail. It might make it a few hours, but it will die.”

 

“Hours?” The knife didn’t appear to be under the bush. Sloan turned her attention to the tall grass that footed the forest. It couldn’t have gone far.

 

“Yes, they can last a long time. They’re big and have a lot of blood, so it takes a while for enough to empty for them to die.”

 

“Macabre.” A glint to her right turned out to be the last bit of dew on a blade of grass. Where could it be? She had already lost one of the Matron’s knives – she sure as Oblivion wasn’t going to lose another.

 

Gilna finally turned her attention away from the trail. “What are you doing?”

 

“I dropped the knife when I landed. It’s got to be around here somewhere.” Sloan flattened herself on the ground and peered under the bush.

 

“You mean this one?” The Khajiit held out Sloan’s knife and Sloan glanced over her shoulder and frowned.

 

“Yes. Where did you find it?”

 

Gilna laughed. “On the ground near your hand. You were busy trying to breathe. Are you ready to go?”

 

Sloan shoved herself off the ground, wiped her clothes with her hands (which only smeared more dirt and blood instead of cleaning anything off), and took the knife. “I suppose.”

 

Gilna turned and began following the trail of blood. After a few steps, she pointed at a small white-flowered plant. “Ooh, look! Hemlock! Very poisonous. Even touching it will give you a rash.”

 

Sloan frowned at the plant as she passed it. “It just looks like flowers to me.”

 

“Yes, that’s why I am letting you know. Someday you might see one and be tempted to pick it. Now you know better. You approached your deer from the back and had to lunge to get to the front of it. You were lucky you made it in time. If you’re ever in a similar situation again, consider going for the hamstring.”

 

Gilna pointed at her leg while Sloan’s mind reeled onto this new track.

 

“Right here. Cut that and your prey won’t be able to run. Then they’re easy to finish off and, as a bonus, you don’t need to walk for who knows how many miles first.”

 

“That makes sense. Why didn’t you tell me that before?”

 

A laugh. “I wanted to see if you would think of it yourself. See that mushroom? That is an imp stool. It is a key ingredient in many healing potions BUT accidentally add in, say, the ground up pod from a swamp fungus and you have made yourself a poison instead, one that will cause paralysis.”

 

Sloan laughed, though her mind was barely keeping pace with the every-changing topics. “I had no idea you were just an expert at plants. I’ll be sure not to mix those things!”

 

“Unless you want to! You never know when it would be useful to paralyze someone.” The Khajiit looked back and winked. “They don’t even need to ingest it. Just a little applied to a dagger blade, enough of a cut to cause bleeding.”

 

Sloan laughed again. “Why would I ever need that? I suppose it might be useful if someone is trying to slip out without paying.”

 

“Exactly!” Gilna laughed along. “You just never know. Oh, wow, that cut must have been deeper than we thought. I think I see your deer already. Have you ever skinned and dressed an animal?”

 

“I…um…no.”

 

“Great! More to learn!”

 

Sloan’s attempted laugh resolved to a sigh. “I don’t know if I can fit anymore in today.”

 

“I hope you can! We have so much more to do! Ooh, look! A butterfly! Did you know their wings can be used to…”

 

Sloan rubbed her face with her hands as Gilna went on about the uses of butterfly wings (which, when you thought of it, sounded just cruel. Why would you pull the wings off such a beautiful creature?) How had she ended up in this position? This was nothing like she had expected when Gilna had suggested taking a walk in the woods on their day off. Had she known her friend was such an outdoorsman…outdoorscat?...she would have just stayed at the Vixen.

 

Maybe. She had to admit there was something infectious about Gilna’s enthusiasm and certainly Sloan had learned a lot! Never mind that it seemed like stuff she would never need to know – she wasn’t planning on opening an apothecary (or a daggers-only hunting guild) anytime soon.

 

She sighed as they reached the deer’s carcass, its life blood pooled beneath the cut across its neck that was much deeper than she had expected. She knelt beside Gilna as her friend explained about tendons and muscles and the best places to strike for a quick kill (using Sloan and her own bodies to demonstrate, which seemed a little odd considering they didn’t look much like deer). Despite the seeming uselessness of it all, she paid close attention. Better to know things than not know them, even if there was no chance the knowledge would ever be used.

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Tirloque

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Nicely written and directed as usual. On the strong side, one can appreciate how you link past event to the present, which allows you to develop only the good parts instead of going through a linear exposition. On the weaker side, and even though I see where this leads, dagger hunting big game animals seems more like a sneaking-one handed video game training concept than something that would make sense in another concept. You're the story master now, feel free to break free from the original game limits realism wise. Still, good dialogues, appreciable photoshopping, and enjoyable read. :D

 

ldyMRSUy_o.png « Sloan got very lucky, 'cause the deer could've gone in her direction and trampled her. 

               And it would've been very bad. Like, she could've gone unconscious and lost all her teeth, you see ? 1000_F_146736659_ZAp1o10bUUTdUnSADzZpKm9

               To hunt a deer, my expert advice is to take :

                - A bow like this -> SR-icon-weapon-Long_Bow.png

               - some arrows -> SR-icon-weapon-Iron_Arrows.png

 

               - and hunting gear -> -p.jpg?auto=compress,format&fit=crop&cro.

 

                  And then you use them like this  ┐

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                     That way you can both hunt and keep your teeth, yes. :classic_lightbulb: »

jfraser

Posted

15 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

Nicely written and directed as usual. On the strong side, one can appreciate how you link past event to the present, which allows you to develop only the good parts instead of going through a linear exposition. On the weaker side, and even though I see where this leads, dagger hunting big game animals seems more like a sneaking-one handed video game training concept than something that would make sense in another concept. You're the story master now, feel free to break free from the original game limits realism wise. Still, good dialogues, appreciable photoshopping, and enjoyable read. :D

 

ldyMRSUy_o.png « Sloan got very lucky, 'cause the deer could've gone in her direction and trampled her. 

               And it would've been very bad. Like, she could've gone unconscious and lost all her teeth, you see ? 1000_F_146736659_ZAp1o10bUUTdUnSADzZpKm9

               To hunt a deer, my expert advice is to take :

                - A bow like this -> SR-icon-weapon-Long_Bow.png

               - some arrows -> SR-icon-weapon-Iron_Arrows.png

 

               - and hunting gear -> -p.jpg?auto=compress,format&fit=crop&cro.

 

                  And then you use them like this  ┐

                                                                      v

 

  

 

                     That way you can both hunt and keep your teeth, yes. :classic_lightbulb: »

And here I thought I was being extra creative in thinking of ways to train someone without them realizing they were being trained. ?

 

Also, Sloan had very similar thoughts, Malicia.

HM1919

Posted (edited)

Are we certain this "Gilna" is really a Khajiit and not secretly a blonde nord woman in disguise? I mean: Old Grelod has wandered off to permanently "visit" her ancestors. And I have heard rumors, that when that happens aforementioned nord shows up shortly thereafter. With a... business-proposition. One that it's downright dangerous to decline. Oh well... probably just baseless gossip after all. ?

 

This was a good read. Who would have thought, that a brothel is the perfect training-ground for the aspiring dagger-assassine.:classic_ph34r:?

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Tirloque

Posted

8 hours ago, jfraser said:

And here I thought I was being extra creative in thinking of ways to train someone without them realizing they were being trained. ?

Well since we've been tipped by the Aretino start, we can smell what's to come. Yet even if that's precisely one of the points that would make melee sneak attacks on a deer complex to setup (animals tend to have a better smell sense than us), I think even getting close enough to get a clean shot on a dear already would constitute for an interesting sneaking challenge. :classic_smile:

 

8 hours ago, jfraser said:

Also, Sloan had very similar thoughts, Malicia.

ldyMRSUy_o.png « She should've listened to them then. 'cause she won't be seductive anymore once she has no teeth.

                jafars-teeth.jpg

 

                :classic_sleep: »

 

5 hours ago, HM1919 said:

This was a good read. Who would have thought, that a brothel is the perfect training-ground for the aspiring dagger-assassine.:classic_ph34r:?

ldyMRSUy_o.png « I very saw you quoted me, but there's nothing to read, so I guess you very agree. :classic_sleepy:

 

              I would advice people not to become dagger assassin's though. :classic_angel:»

 

jfraser

Posted

2 hours ago, Tirloque said:

 

 

ldyMRSUy_o.png « She should've listened to them then. 'cause she won't be seductive anymore once she has no teeth.

                jafars-teeth.jpg

 

                :classic_sleep: »

 

 

 

One idea I that I thought about using for poor Aithne was the forceful removal of all the teeth so there could be no biting during blowjobs. See how many punches I pulled? ;)

fred200

Posted

You still have an eyeball in a jar somewhere that Aithne is owed. We will wait.

jfraser

Posted

Didn’t he throw it in the fire? I can’t remember now

fred200

Posted

Nothing a good healer can't fix. Heck, with the necromancers at the college, they can borrow one from a corpse.

jfraser

Posted

6 minutes ago, fred200 said:

Nothing a good healer can't fix. Heck, with the necromancers at the college, they can borrow one from a corpse.

In the vanilla game, necromancy is forbidden in the college. In this version, who knows?

Tirloque

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6 hours ago, jfraser said:

In the vanilla game, necromancy is forbidden in the college. In this version, who knows?

I hadn't understood that personally. Necromancy of course is badly perceived by the population (though that applies to all magic), but the magic institution who forbade it was the Mages Guild, and that was one of the core difference with the College of Winterhold. Phinis Gestor says he was in the College for that reason I think. There would be some limits the College sets though (not sure which), but they'd allow necromancy to be studied.  :classic_smile:

 

 

11 hours ago, jfraser said:

One idea I that I thought about using for poor Aithne was the forceful removal of all the teeth so there could be no biting during blowjobs. See how many punches I pulled? ;)

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11 hours ago, jfraser said:
11 hours ago, fred200 said:

You still have an eyeball in a jar somewhere that Aithne is owed. We will wait.

Didn’t he throw it in the fire? I can’t remember now

ldyMRSUy_o.png « You didn't mention.

                If you were Aithne, you'd very remember. :classic_sleep: »

 

 

jfraser

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18 minutes ago, Tirloque said:

I hadn't understood that personally. Necromancy of course is badly perceived by the population (though that applies to all magic), but the magic institution who forbade it was the Mages Guild, and that was one of the core difference with the College of Winterhold. Phinis Gestor says he was in the College for that reason I think. There would be some limits the College sets though (not sure which), but they'd allow necromancy to be studied.  :classic_smile:

 

 

ldyMRSUy_o.png « Smiley-ryoandr-HFR.gif

 

 

                   mcberd.gif »

 

ldyMRSUy_o.png « You didn't mention.

                If you were Aithne, you'd very remember. :classic_sleep: »

 

 

Turns out there are conflicting reports on necromancy. I was remembering the quote from Wuunferth in the quest Blood on the Ice: "I beg your pardon? Necromancy? I am a member of the College of Winterhold, in good standing! They haven't allowed necromancy for hundreds of years!" Yet an actual active member in the College , Gestor, says, "By Sheor, no. Those archaic policies died out with the Mages Guild, and were never enforced here. Necromancy, as any other type of magic, is a tool to be used. Of course, non-mages may not see it that way, so we don't go around flaunting it." So it appears that the Official Stance for the public is "no, we would never!" but they actually aren't opposed to it internally.

 

Malicia, I disagree - I doubt Aithne was paying attention to much of anything besides the pain and horror of the moment, so I doubt she noticed the eye's final destination.

jfraser

Posted

It took a while to come up with something else to add to the secret assassin training regimen. For the record, killing the deer with the dagger had nothing to do with gameplay (the "playthrough" portion of this story ended several chapters ago), it was just something that came to me as a possibly useful training tool. That said, this is one of my least favorite chapters just because it seems a bit farfetched, even in a fantasy story. But I needed something to fill in this gap so Sloan wouldn't get skipped on her story turn. ;) 

HM1919

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On 1/7/2025 at 12:52 AM, jfraser said:

It took a while to come up with something else to add to the secret assassin training regimen. For the record, killing the deer with the dagger had nothing to do with gameplay (the "playthrough" portion of this story ended several chapters ago), it was just something that came to me as a possibly useful training tool. That said, this is one of my least favorite chapters just because it seems a bit farfetched, even in a fantasy story. But I needed something to fill in this gap so Sloan wouldn't get skipped on her story turn. ;) 

If you don't like this chapter all that much, but still want a training-chapter, then why not exchange the deer with a more senior student? Or possibly even a fully fledged assassin, if you really want to challenge Sloan. Then give her a small brush and some paint and have her try to sneak up on that older student and mark him/her with the paint (thusly simulating the stabby part of her job). And no, this isn't my idea. I got it from one of Dan Abnett's 'Gaunt's Ghosts'-novels, so all credit for it goes to him.  

 

p.s. This hypothetical sneaky-peeky lesson could also be used as an opportunity for Sloan to gain the respect of one of her seniors. Or make him/her hold a permanent grudge against S., depending on the outcome of the training.🤔 

 

p.p.s. Or, if you REALLY wanted to go overboard with this, then Kira could have a falmer chained up in her basement. Or better: In a secluded and well guarded training facility some distance away from Riften. To train budding assassins in the arts of stealth. Because those pointy-eared f*ckers can and will hear a hair fall.

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jfraser

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4 hours ago, HM1919 said:

If you don't like this chapter all that much, but still want a training-chapter, then why not exchange the deer with a more senior student? Or possibly even a fully fledged assassin, if you really want to challenge Sloan. Then give her a small brush and some paint and have her try to sneak up on that older student and mark him/her with the paint (thusly simulating the stabby part of her job). And no, this isn't my idea. I got it from one of Dan Abnett's 'Gaunt's Ghosts'-novels, so all credit for it goes to him.  

 

p.s. This hypothetical sneaky-peeky lesson could also be used as an opportunity for Sloan to gain the respect of one of her seniors. Or make him/her hold a permanent grudge against S., depending on the outcome of the training.🤔 

 

p.p.s. Or, if you REALLY wanted to go overboard with this, then Kira could have a falmer chained up in her basement. Or better: In a secluded and well guarded training facility some distance away from Riften. To train budding assassins in the arts of stealth. Because those pointy-eared f*ckers can and will 

Because I didn't think of any of those ;)

HM1919

Posted (edited)

2 hours ago, jfraser said:

Because I didn't think of any of those ;)

Well... you are in the middle of writing a re-run of your stories, right? And, unless everything is already set in stone, a little bit of creative editing would be entirely appropriate. To keep things fresh and interesting for us, your spoiled readers. That's not to say that I expect you to go with any of my half-baked ideas, of course. Just that I wouldn't see it as negative, if you were to take some creative freedom here and there.☺️
 

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jfraser

Posted (edited)

7 minutes ago, HM1919 said:

Well... you are in the middle of writing a re-run of your stories, right? And, unless everything is already set in stone, a little bit of creative editing would be entirely appropriate. To keep things fresh and interesting for us, your spoiled readers. That's not to say that I expect you to go with any of my half-baked ideas, of course. Just that I wouldn't see it as negative if you took some creative freedom here and there.☺️
 

 

Sneaking up on a deer is quite creatively free. A little too much so, which is why I didn't care for it that much. ;)

 

But no, I am not doing any new reruns. That would be something,wouldn't it? "Starting all over! Again!" XD

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HM1919

Posted (edited)

13 hours ago, jfraser said:

 

Sneaking up on a deer is quite creatively free. A little too much so, which is why I didn't care for it that much. ;)

 

But no, I am not doing any new reruns. That would be something,wouldn't it? "Starting all over! Again!" XD

My bad. Poor choice of words on my part. What I meant was 'continuation of the story during which the sisters may need some additional training to get their skills up to where they used to be/need to be.' At least for Sian this seems to be true, since she apparently lost a lot of muscles when the time-shenanigans happend. But if Sloan is not effected by this, then so much the better.☺️

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