Lydia is not having her best day it seems. ^^
Fun so far, would be a shame if you don't continue this.

6 hours ago, Talesien said:

Lydia is not having her best day it seems. ^^
Fun so far, would be a shame if you don't continue this.

No she doesn't ?

Thank you, I will try every now and then, but i tried the first time making a constant story, not really good and it so if i make another one with this, it will probably be very long intervals ^^

> Very nicely done. I like the transformation from old to young. Now, too bad he didn't have 3some with (Bijin) Lidija

18 minutes ago, Evaloves4 said:

> Very nicely done. I like the transformation from old to young. Now, too bad he didn't have 3some with (Bijin) Lidija

Thank you

i tried to be character considered and didn't want to soil the Personality i have of her in my head ?

Maybe when i continue the story someday she will be involved in some naughty scenes but probably not with him ?

14 minutes ago, Gukahn said:

Thank you

i tried to be character considered and didn't want to soil the Personality i have of her in my head ?

Maybe when i continue the story someday she will be involved in some naughty scenes but probably not with him ?

> I see. You must understand that since I'm living in love triangle and in 99% cases I have 3 way sex, I always expect to see it in the story if there is a possibility and opportunity for it.

Quite the fun introduction here ! Appreciated the constant and somewhat wacky humor that dominated the story all along, as well as the comic style dialogues, and the humorous way you integrated sex to your scenario. Now, since you went through the trouble of underlining your bubbles, you might consider also paying some more attention to the characters lighting (using mods such as facelight for example, more on this tutorial), and to the proofreading. Yet, it is fun to read as is, with lively dialogues and fast paced twists ; not to mention a male protagonist with dominating females is uncommon. Nice work !

« Tying up guys ? I never had the idea before, no. Looks very handy though. »

On 5/3/2022 at 9:06 AM, Evaloves4 said:

> I see. You must understand that since I'm living in love triangle and in 99% cases I have 3 way sex

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1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

Quite the fun introduction here ! Appreciated the constant and somewhat wacky humor that dominated the story all along, as well as the comic style dialogues, and the humorous way you integrated sex to your scenario. Now, since you went through the trouble of underlining your bubbles, you might consider also paying some more attention to the characters lighting (using mods such as facelight for example, more on this tutorial), and to the proofreading. Yet, it is fun to read as is, with lively dialogues and fast paced twists ; not to mention a male protagonist with dominating females is uncommon. Nice work !

Thank you for your kind words, i do try and hope to improve with time ? And just began to use a LL`s Autocorrectur for help with longer texts. Saw for myself that there are quite a few typos ?  

Will keep the mod tabbed and look the  Tutorial up Tomorrow, thanks for that too ?

First i wanted to do a highly dominant male but that's not funny ? this way is way lighter for my brain even if there can and will be some dominant male scenarios. Mostly tho, i try to let the Women hold him. ? So it will be somewhat develop in a switch sometimes.

1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

« Tying up guys ? I never had the idea before, no. Looks very handy though. »

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