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Alina and Jalisa Take the City - The Story So Far Poll


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Alina and Jalisa Take the City - The Story So Far   

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  1. 1. Who's Your Favorite: Alina or Jalisa?

    • Alina
      18
    • Jalisa
      30
  2. 2. Favorite Pairing?

    • Jalisa and Tre
      13
    • Jalisa and Alina's Dad
      10
    • Alina and Mastermind
      4
    • Alina and Elijah
      5
    • Alina and Herman Laine
      10
    • Other
      6
  3. 3. Did you enjoy the Tre Flex side story?

    • Yes
      42
    • No
      6
  4. 4. Would you be interested in seeing more side stories in the future?

    • Yes, expand the universe.
      41
    • No, stick to the girls.
      7
  5. 5. Are there any pre-made characters you'd like to see make an appearance in the story?

    • The Pancakes
      4
    • The Landgraabs
      14
    • Penny Pizzazz
      11
    • Thorne and Olivia Bailey
      10
    • Other
      9
  6. 6. Do you think the chapters are, more or less, well-balanced between plot and sex?

    • Yes
      42
    • Less talk, more sex
      4
    • I read this for the plot...
      2
  7. 7. Are there any pairings you'd like to see in the future?

    • Alina and Jalisa
      25
    • Jalisa and Mastermind
      6
    • Alina and Tre
      8
    • Other
      9
  8. 8. Are there any sexual situations you'd like to see more of in the future?

    • Gangbangs
      15
    • Girl-Girl
      12
    • Guy-Guy
      2
    • Threesomes
      18
    • Other
      1
  9. 9. If there were more side stories explored, who would you like them to focus on?

    • More Tre stories
      5
    • Alina's Parents' Swinging Days
      17
    • Younger Herman Laine
      9
    • Mastermind Lex's Sexploits
      9
    • Other
      8
  10. 10. Would you want the story to explore any supernatural or fantastical elements of the TS4 world?

    • Sure
      20
    • No, keep it grounded in reality
      15
    • Maybe for Halloween
      13

I finally managed to migrate the full first "season" as I'm calling it of Alina and Jalisa Take the CIty. Don't worry, there's still more to come. 

 

But I wanted to take the opportunity to ask some questions based on these first 32 chapters, as well as some that pertain to the upcoming few, which is a side story based on one of the supporting characters (Hint: you can already read up on these over on the story's forum page). 

 

Feel free to fill out the poll and also, if you have any suggestions (please keep it constructive), I'd love to hear it.

 

Thanks! 

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I've finally got through the entirety of part one and it's 32 chapters.

 

I have to say your narrative is very believable. Most of what I've seen on these forums, either video or graphical story, is fairly tongue in cheek. No pun intended. Your characters are well rounded, fleshed out and have tangible personalities. The girls are both 18 and slightly immature. Going out into the world and making the mistakes we all did, or tried to, at that age ourselves.

 

Writing erotic stories can be fairly difficult, I've tried it myself. But wouldn't know where to begin with the video or screenshot, so kudos to you.

 

Please, keep up the exceptional work.  

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1 hour ago, Silkhands said:

I've finally got through the entirety of part one and it's 32 chapters.

 

I have to say your narrative is very believable. Most of what I've seen on these forums, either video or graphical story, is fairly tongue in cheek. No pun intended. Your characters are well rounded, fleshed out and have tangible personalities. The girls are both 18 and slightly immature. Going out into the world and making the mistakes we all did, or tried to, at that age ourselves.

 

Writing erotic stories can be fairly difficult, I've tried it myself. But wouldn't know where to begin with the video or screenshot, so kudos to you.

 

Please, keep up the exceptional work.  

 

Thanks for the kind words! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. I'm having fun writing these and I'm glad to know people enjoy reading them. 

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