Good job turning this into a full fledged super-heroes/shounen adventure ; it took me quite a while to figure out what game you were using (the sometimes excessive facial expressions were what gave it away). Interesting fights, with good twists and decent effects. The sensual aspect is still there underneath, but doesn't goes further than ecchi at the moment, so what really drives the content is the story. The speech bubbles sometimes do  overlap with the faces though, but that's minor and I'm not sure how much control you can have over that. And the sound part isn't neglected. Good job! 

On 8/17/2020 at 6:16 AM, Tirloque said:

Good job turning this into a full fledged super-heroes/shounen adventure ; it took me quite a while to figure out what game you were using (the sometimes excessive facial expressions were what gave it away). Interesting fights, with good twists and decent effects. The sensual aspect is still there underneath, but doesn't goes further than ecchi at the moment, so what really drives the content is the story. The speech bubbles sometimes do  overlap with the faces though, but that's minor and I'm not sure how much control you can have over that. And the sound part isn't neglected. Good job! 

Thanks for the feedback and I hope you enjoy the rest of the series.