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Bruce Chapter 2: Club Night

Jotunn25

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The next day was my first day at the new job.

I was very excited to meet my new Team.

For breakfast I had some vegetable pastries I made the day before.

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Then I had a morning run and a shower.

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Followed by some researches for the new job.

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Then it was time for my first working day.

 

I had a great time at work. My Team is very friendly and the work is very interesting.

We are programming a goods management system from scratch for one of our customers.

 

In the evening I relaxed watching TV.

Then Christina called me.

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“Hey Christina, how are you?”

“Hey Bruce. Just helped my mother with dinner. A friend of mine invited me to this new, fancy night club “Purple Rain” tonight. Wanna join us?”

“Yes, sounds nice.”

“Ok, I'll send you the address, let's meet at 9:00 PM in front of the club.”

“Ok, but I could also pick you up.”

“No, I am driving to my friend now. Let's meet later.”

“Ok, looking forward to a nice evening.”

“Yeah, me too, see you.”

“See you!”

 

I was totally tired from work, but I could not pass up the possibility to meet Christina again.

So, I had a cold shower, hoping that it would wake me up, got ready and drove to the club.

Christina was waiting in front of the club as agreed.

She hugged me.

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“Hi Bruce, so nice that you came.”

“Hi Christina. Sure. I won't miss a club night with you, haha. Ahm, where's your friend?”

“He's waiting inside and looking forward to meet you. Let's go!”

 

Some moments later...

 

“May I introduce, my dearest friend Marco. Marco, this is Bruce.”

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“Hi, nice to meet you. Christina told me you recently moved to Brindleton Bay?”

“Hi, Marco, nice to meet you too. Yes, I found this little land and built a house there. As far as I have seen so far, Brindleton Bay has much to offer.”

“Yes, it has.” Smiles to Christina

“Guys, I want to dance. Do you two have the guts to follow me?” Impish Grin

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We had the guts.

She wanted to perform a group dance.

Spoiler

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I think I have done quite well, remembered all the steps correctly and it was lot of fun dancing with them.

 

Later I asked Christina to dance with me.

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Fortunately, Marco left us alone. I think he knew that we both wanted to came closer this night.

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And we came really close...

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Then I tried my luck and kissed her.

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She returned the kiss.

 

I didn't want to rush things with her, because I feared she would think she would only be a one-night stand for me.

 

So, we let this beautiful evening come to an end soon.

 

I went to bed satisfied and excited, already planning our next date.

It's my turn now to invite her...

 

I had no wicked dreams this night. I think that was because I don't needed my imagination anymore to see the finish line.

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Tirloque

Tirloque

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@Jotunn25

So far it's written in a rather convincing fashion, with a good pacing, and a pleasant execution (both regarding the writing and the screens). The faces in particular are quite good for a sims base, though the quality of the expressions significantly varies, from

 

definitely weird :

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to really excellent :

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I also like how you imbued Bruce with a very realistic way of thinking and reacting, which makes this slice of life story quite interesting ; even more considering we've got a male protagonist for once. I'm not sure that his own restraint, which gives a progressive and believable feel to the stories, goes well with the so revealing erotic dream beforehand, in the previous entry. It kinda spoils the magic moment to come, IMO. Anyway, good chapter ! :D

 

 

Malicia : « That gal, she just sit right next to him at the bar, and then called him at the night club. She very wants to honey-honey with him, yes. ? »

 

Jotunn25

Jotunn25

Posted

7 hours ago, Tirloque said:

....

 

Thanks again.

Yeah, I am having a hard time especially with the facial expressions, but try my best. ?

 

About the dream:

Yeah, you are right, it spoils the moment to come. But I wanted to play around with the lightning a little bit and also I am thinking about if chapters without Whohoo are interesting enough for the audience.

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Tirloque

Tirloque

Posted

16 hours ago, Jotunn25 said:

About the dream:

Yeah, you are right, it spoils the moment to come. But I wanted to play around with the lightning a little bit and also I am thinking about if chapters without Whohoo are interesting enough for the audience.

About that, you have choices to make regarding the content of your chapters.

  • Do you want your story to feature sex on a regular base, or do you want it to be infrequent ?
  • Do you want readers to expect that kind of content regularly ?

Depending on those, there's the choice to feature sex scenes irregularly, but to have nudity more frequently. In that case, the dream would've been a good idea, but shorter, or based only on Bruce dreaming only about Christina. :classic_smile:

Jotunn25

Jotunn25

Posted

6 hours ago, Tirloque said:

About that, you have choices to make regarding the content of your chapters.

  • Do you want your story to feature sex on a regular base, or do you want it to be infrequent ?
  • Do you want readers to expect that kind of content regularly ?

Depending on those, there's the choice to feature sex scenes irregularly, but to have nudity more frequently. In that case, the dream would've been a good idea, but shorter, or based only on Bruce dreaming only about Christina. :classic_smile:

At the moment, there is a sex part in every chapter finished but still to be released (2 atm).

So there are 5 without sex and 8 with sex.

But there are some chapters planned without sex in the near future.

You definitly should not expect sex in every single chapter.

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