I like how this not at all evil cult plot is tying together all of your characters. Very nice!

2 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

I like how this not at all evil cult plot is tying together all of your characters. Very nice!

I hope they'll be successful.  Because I couldn't do it.    So much work.  These Warlocks need all the help they can get.  

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Jay-omm: Perhaps father can help? So what do you say father?... Wait don't answer that... Nevermind. I think you might know... sort of of what he would do.

Sheogorath: OH! REALLY! I SAY!.... Umm?! What was I gonna say? Well that depends what exactly is he asking specifically?! Chickens! Perhaps Fish Dicks! A very delicate fish penetrating these lovely young ladies... I mean a very delicate state of mind.  

Jay-omm: Don't mind him DJR... Sir... hmm... Are you not satisfied with your girls potential outcome?

 

Smells Fishy!  HA! To be honest, I'd be interested in Jay-Omm's perspective on what encounters these women should face.  Could prove to be quite interesting.  

This was more like an introduction of the characters by these nose bleeding cultist ?

Curious of the coming events.

14 hours ago, djregs said:

I hope they'll be successful.  Because I couldn't do it.    So much work.  These Warlocks need all the help they can get.  

 

 

Well the important thing is that they seem above board and not at all suspicious. 

1 hour ago, Resdayn said:

This was more like an introduction of the characters by these nose bleeding cultist ?

 

Curious of the coming events.

I would hope you learned more about the cultists and their motivations.  Maybe event be a little sympathetic towards them! But if it was a clear as mud, I guess I should learn to story tell better.  ?

55 minutes ago, SpyVsPie said:

Well the important thing is that they seem above board and not at all suspicious. 

1 hour ago, djregs said:

 

I should say not! Completely above board!

On 3/7/2020 at 1:47 AM, djregs said:

I hope they'll be successful.  Because I couldn't do it.    So much work.  These Warlocks need all the help they can get.  

 

Smells Fishy!  HA! To be honest, I'd be interested in Jay-Omm's perspective on what encounters these women should face.  Could prove to be quite interesting.  

Oh Yes... But what are you trying to do? Are you starting their stories over from scratch? Or just making new chapter? You said relaunch. What do you mean by that?  What are we working with? Is it just new encounters with other people or monsters or Daedra or world disasters or or or all the above?.. 

Heck! Beautiful girls, dark sexual rituals and cultists? That's my speciality, sign me up in da club! This is damn intriguing and damn sexy!  ^_^ 
Now I can't wait to see where it goes ^_^ 

Great job! And I fully agree with Crw

3 hours ago, Jayomms said:

Oh Yes... But what are you trying to do? Are you starting their stories over from scratch? Or just making new chapter? You said relaunch. What do you mean by that?  What are we working with? Is it just new encounters with other people or monsters or Daedra or world disasters or or or all the above?.. 

2 hours ago, Crw said:

Heck! Beautiful girls, dark sexual rituals and cultists? That's my speciality, sign me up in da club! This is damn intriguing and damn sexy!  ^_^ 
Now I can't wait to see where it goes ^_^ 

1 hour ago, Alter Native said:

Great job! And I fully agree with Crw

It appears I'm being too vague for my own good.  I should probably introduce the Warlocks at Labyrinth Designs Inc a bit more. (Next Story).  Coming soon.  But at a high level, I'm looking for "encounters" (that's the DnD term for it) to help them capture each adventurer for their Benefactor.  

A nice setup for an interactive start ! The usual screens quality put aside, I like the new round/black bubbles you're featuring. As for suggestions, well if it's a matter of capturing them, I guess it should be done with their weaknesses in mind : weakening magic for Aurora, a trap for an overconfident Varina, and foes resistant to ice for Demetria. Or capturing them during their photoshoots, that could work with either of the three i guess. ^^

4 hours ago, djregs said:

 But at a high level, I'm looking for "encounters" (that's the DnD term for it) to help them capture each adventurer for their Benefactor.  

Malicia : « Well then you can go cook yourself an egg, 'cause we're not gonna help you. There are enough gals having problems with their trainers, uh. 

                 And if you still capture them, I'll tell them to sue you, and it'll cost you money ! »

I love the introduction to your girls being woven into a business meeting of completely not-evil and not suspicious cultist guys.  ☺️

The Labyrinth sounds interesting but also a bit confusing. Is it like a labyrinth created with traps and treasure ( your girls would be there in the role of 'treasure') to lure heroes in? ? Or is it something more sinister, meant to have them as a sorts of sacrifice in order to bring the big bad guy into their world? ? Or are we not even supposed to know it yet and I'm just sitting here trying to guess the whole storyline? ?

As for capturing the beautiful ladies I agree with Tirloque - exploiting their weaknesses seems like a solid idea.  Though if their capture happened during a drunken sleepover complete with see-through pajamas and pillow fights I do not thing anyone would complain. ?

3 hours ago, Tirloque said:

A nice setup for an interactive start ! The usual screens quality put aside, I like the new round/black bubbles you're featuring. As for suggestions, well if it's a matter of capturing them, I guess it should be done with their weaknesses in mind : weakening magic for Aurora, a trap for an overconfident Varina, and foes resistant to ice for Demetria. Or capturing them during their photoshoots, that could work with either of the three i guess. ^^

 

Malicia : « Well then you can go cook yourself an egg, 'cause we're not gonna help you. There are enough gals having problems with their trainers, uh. 

 

                 And if you still capture them, I'll tell them to sue you, and it'll cost you money ! »

 

Tirloque understands the Benefactor's cryptic message!  I'm interested in what kinda of trap you think would work on Varina.  

1 hour ago, Devianna said:

I love the introduction to your girls being woven into a business meeting of completely not-evil and not suspicious cultist guys.  ☺️

 

The Labyrinth sounds interesting but also a bit confusing. Is it like a labyrinth created with traps and treasure ( your girls would be there in the role of 'treasure') to lure heroes in? ? Or is it something more sinister, meant to have them as a sorts of sacrifice in order to bring the big bad guy into their world? ? Or are we not even supposed to know it yet and I'm just sitting here trying to guess the whole storyline? ?

 

As for capturing the beautiful ladies I agree with Tirloque - exploiting their weaknesses seems like a solid idea.  Though if their capture happened during a drunken sleepover complete with see-through pajamas and pillow fights I do not thing anyone would complain. ?

You're not quite supposed to know too much about their aims yet.  But shining some light might help understand what I'm asking for.  To answer the last part of the question, it's more in the how would you go about exploiting their weaknesses.  Because these guys... they're definitely in over their head.  

6 hours ago, djregs said:

You're not quite supposed to know too much about their aims yet.  But shining some light might help understand what I'm asking for.  To answer the last part of the question, it's more in the how would you go about exploiting their weaknesses.  Because these guys... they're definitely in over their head. 

Malicia : « They should use a trap which is called "we cancel everything, yes". That way you won't be sued, and it won't cost you money when doing movies, you see ?  »

6 hours ago, djregs said:

Tirloque understands the Benefactor's cryptic message!  I'm interested in what kinda of trap you think would work on Varina. 

There are quantities of possibilities, such as confining into a area with enemies too numerous/powerful to be fought, trapping the resting area (by complicity with an innkeeper) so that a limited number of opponents can be effective, or just hiring someone more powerful than her. The more powerful the target, the better the trap should be prepared/empowered, that's all. I think of Varina as being somewhat prideful, and with the Sylphs essentially being mercenaries, there are quantities of ways to setup this.

I can't warranty Malicia won't try to warn them though (aside of Aurora maybe ^^), so surprising the readers might more effective in that regard.

11 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Malicia : « They should use a trap which is called "we cancel everything, yes". That way you won't be sued, and it won't cost you money when doing movies, you see ?  »

Hmm... Malicia would be an interesting target!  

11 hours ago, Tirloque said:

I can't warranty Malicia won't try to warn them though (aside of Aurora maybe ^^), so surprising the readers might more effective in that regard.

I've got a basic outline of how things could go down.  But I think I'm looking for something novel.  Like this one if you have the time to watch.    

What I was planning on doing was having encounters that the community creates having an advantage on the girls and the ones that I create have disadvantage.  Then let the random number generator sort out the story.  But it might just be more story based at this point.  

9 hours ago, djregs said:

Hmm... Malicia would be an interesting target! 

Malicia :

9 hours ago, djregs said:

I've got a basic outline of how things could go down.  But I think I'm looking for something novel.  Like this one if you have the time to watch.    

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What I was planning on doing was having encounters that the community creates having an advantage on the girls and the ones that I create have disadvantage.  Then let the random number generator sort out the story.  But it might just be more story based at this point.  

Well, why not ? The countdown puzzle  was only a (psychological) test, but you could perfectly use it as a D20. But then what you'd need isn't the readers to create traps to gather the Sylphs (which could simply be led there as mercenaries on the mission), but rather for the individual Sylphs to overcome upon activating the room. Plus you'd have at least 3 scenarios used for it, since there are three girls. Just make sure for the readers to understand they are supposed to suggest traps (by adding a message on top of a blog entry, and linking to this one as an introduction for example). ?

1 hour ago, Tirloque said:

Just make sure for the readers to understand they are supposed to suggest traps (by adding a message on top of a blog entry, and linking to this one as an introduction for example). ?

@djregs yes, cos that wasn't really obvious. Tho I thought about it, I didn't have enough courage to suggest anything. 

4 hours ago, Tirloque said:

Just make sure for the readers to understand they are supposed to suggest traps (by adding a message on top of a blog entry, and linking to this one as an introduction for example). ?

 

3 hours ago, Crw said:

@djregs yes, cos that wasn't really obvious. Tho I thought about it, I didn't have enough courage to suggest anything. 

Yeah, this one is on me.  I was trying to be too vague and ended up confusing everyone.  Let's see if I can recover this weekend.  

1 hour ago, djregs said:

Yeah, this one is on me.  I was trying to be too vague and ended up confusing everyone.  Let's see if I can recover this weekend.  

Nah, if you just hint about what you mean when you say "advantage on the girls" it will become much clearer.
Kinda girls end up in an uncomfortable situation, or dungeons inhabitants must *khem* have their 'way' with them. 
Like, what is the goal of a trap? Beside capturing ofc. ^_^
UPD: I was so carried away by intrigue that I did not notice such a delightful reference to the Goblin Slayer. ^-^ 

On 3/10/2020 at 9:52 AM, Crw said:

...or dungeons inhabitants must *khem* have their 'way' with them. 

This is a family website, sir! ?

On 3/10/2020 at 8:52 AM, Crw said:

Nah, if you just hint about what you mean when you say "advantage on the girls" it will become much clearer.
Kinda girls end up in an uncomfortable situation, or dungeons inhabitants must *khem* have their 'way' with them. 
Like, what is the goal of a trap? Beside capturing ofc. ^_^
UPD: I was so carried away by intrigue that I did not notice such a delightful reference to the Goblin Slayer. ^-^ 

Oh Don't worry, everything will be made clear when this next entry is done... Thinking Saturday or Sunday.  (*Keep being Vague, DJ! Keep Them Guessing!) 

But you're in the range of encounters I'm looking for.   

2 hours ago, SpyVsPie said:

This is a family website, sir! ?

7 hours ago, djregs said:

Oh Don't worry, everything will be made clear when this next entry is done... Thinking Saturday or Sunday.  (*Keep being Vague, DJ! Keep Them Guessing!) 

But you're in the range of encounters I'm looking for.   

 

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How did you know my suggestion was going to be carebear rape ??