Erh.. why does everyone want to post PNGs nowadays ? XD Yosih, it's way too heavy, most people won't wait for a 500 Mo download just to read a story ! In terms of audience, it's just like shooting yourself in the foot... I strongly advice you to reupload your images as JPEGs. You'll find batch tools in this tutorial if you want to quicken the process.

I'm eager to read your story though, I've seen some of the half loaded images, and it looked great.

Great job!

Really like this set/story.

Maybe a bit too many close ups for my taste, especially in the heavy dialogue beginning, but a very enjoyable read.

On 12/18/2019 at 3:01 PM, Tirloque said:

Erh.. why does everyone want to post PNGs nowadays ? XD Yosih, it's way too heavy, most people won't wait for a 500 Mo download just to read a story ! In terms of audience, it's just like shooting yourself in the foot... I strongly advice you to reupload your images as JPEGs. You'll find batch tools in this tutorial if you want to quicken the process.

 

I'm eager to read your story though, I've seen some of the half loaded images, and it looked great.

Reuploaded with JPEG files. Hope it's small enough to be readable!

34 minutes ago, Yosih said:

Reuploaded with JPEG files. Hope it's small enough to be readable!

Thanks Yosih, it works fine right now.

As for the story, the viewing angles and their progressiveness in showing the characters is a nice find in terms of ambiance, the atmosphere warm, soft and cozy being constant through the story. I wonder if that sugary feel wasn't even a bit much in fact, as the conversation, the seduction, and then the sex scene do follow each other in an almost too fluid way. It's like the dialogues, which are well written, but so consensual at a certain point that they lose the spice they had at first. Yet the whole thing is very neat, and the read pleasant. Good job.

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