Ellie's story

Hello, I have been inspired by the Take Notes mod  (https://www.nexusmods.com/skyrim/mods/48375) to write a journal of my playthrough. First it was just for fun then I expanded it alot to improve my english writing. Then I wanted to add screenshots to ilustrate the story better and this small project got soon out of hand since I was constantly adding and rewriting stuff. 

I want to share the first parts of the story with you, to get some critics and maybe tips on how to write better or do better storytelling. English is not my first language though. This is probably just 10% of the prewritten story so there is a lot more to come once the rest is fully elaborated, which takes a lot of time. 

This is all based on a real playthrough (sometimes a litte bit enhanced, but more or less its the same) with Requiem and all the sexlab mods that are somewhat immersive. I created a dark unforgiving Skyrim in that my heroine has to survive. Enjoy.