Desmond_CA Posted November 3, 2016 Posted November 3, 2016 Catherine's Adventure is adult rpg game that are made by rpg maker vx ace. The story: Chapter 1 Catherine is a female knight who protects peace in her city.In v.0.1 which covers Chapter 1, Catherine will be busy exploring the city and trying to prepare for the mission. She has only 30 days before the time runs out. Chapter 1 should take about 2 hours to beat preparation goal. Also, it includes several fighting and different jobs implemented. Chapter 2 Catherine prepared for her mission and left the city. But what she has to beat before she can start fulfilling the mission? Or whom? Maybe those two men behind? Catherine will be offered different approaches to accomplish the mission. It's up to you to decide. Chapter 3 Catherine returns to the city and finds out dangerous gang are operating in the city leading by mysterious foe. Time is short and enemy is сunning. Catherine's skills put to the highest test yet again. PatreonCurrent release:Chapter 4 Download If you already have VX ACE RTP installed you can use this Download instead. Catherine's Adventure Chapter 4 added. Save01(starting Chapter 2) included. Save02(starting Chapter 3) included. Save03(starting v.0.4) included. Save04(starting Chapter 4) included.
Desmond_CA Posted December 16, 2016 Author Posted December 16, 2016 Catherine's Adventure v.0.12 added.
XJ347 Posted December 16, 2016 Posted December 16, 2016 Opinions in the spoiler Standard disclaimer... I am just one guy, who is overly opinionated on things. Do not freak out at my comments, I am a perfectionist so I tend to be overly critical, even to things I like. Just because I don't like something doesn't mean everyone will agree with me. Lets get started... As a fantasy game, I don't mind the Katana. Not thrilled but not annoyed, Good job giving directions to help direct the player in the beginning. Be surprised how many dont, and people get confused how to get the games plot moving. Catherine's appearance is acceptable. She isn't super sexy, but she is a knight so it shouldn't be. She should be buff and muscular. OMG Catherine wears armor and not a slut suit. +1 realism and a thank you from me. Few sentence errors here and there. example, "Commander Valen waits me at the knights hall." While giving direction is good... narrating everything is annoying. Like telling the player this, "Knights hall is here. Commander Valen must wait me." Why are you stating the obvious, we know the commander is here because you narrated that the commander is west in the barracks. It also needs to be edited to be correct English. Conversation with the Commander doesn't feel natural. It feels like he is reading a list. I get the sense that English is not your primary language. Wait you work for the guard... why do I have to do odd jobs for money? Shouldn't I be doing guard work? Why do I have to buy my own armor if I work for the guard, the guard should pay for it. This needs to be properly explained in the story. As is it doesn't make any sense. Wait.... how is there a shower in a medieval time? It should be a bath. This makes ZERO logical sense to history. Did they have showers in Lord of the Rings? No because that is a modern invention. What confuses me is that you have a public bath which is historically appropriate. There also should not be modern toilets. They used chamber pots... google it. Just so you know that type of bra is a modern invention too. It wouldn't have been invented yet. Bug that I have noticed, many times the text is auto hidden when you initiate conversations. Having to take off your clothes to sleep, only to put them on moments later when you wake up is a HUGE waste of time. Just have a short scene when you click the bed showing you undressed. To be honest it makes most sense she sleeps nude. Looks like the ONLY way to make money is working at the bar. As pointed out above, I am not trilled that you have to work at the bar. You should be working as a guard. An idea when you wake up in the morning and dress, have a short scene saying time to go to work... You then skip to you leaving the barracks and say, well today was a quiet day patrolling. That way it shows you are being a guard, but now you need to do these side projects. As is it makes you look unemployed. I have to admit, you did a good job with the witnessing job. By adding the time element it made it faster and engaging. Good job. How is she being watched? Her bathroom (which she shouldn't have) doesn't have any windows. The game gets SUPER repetitive after the first day. About 99% of everything is the same. LOL you will not let me work everyday, slowing the game down even more. OK... I guess at least this day is not the same. Thing is there is NOTHING else to do, we need the money for some reason. So you can train on the off days in the barracks. How are we supposed to know that? Bug: Command whats to see me but when I saw him he had no new text and now I keep getting announcements at night to see him though I need to sleep LOL. Something is off. This breaks the game, I can't sleep but I can't go out at night. Can't work because you are fustrated? Welcome to life. That is an unrealistic idea. lowering frustration is annoying. You should have a few hints how to lower frustration rather than relying on the player randomly stumbling on the book and looking it up. This is a really awkward system because I don't know what I need to know in that book and I'm not just going to read every entry. Having to pay to use the public baths is annoying. It also makes it not a public bath in my point of view. You had a BOY molest her? Isn't that inappropriate with the rules of this site? Having a minor used in a sexual situation? Something to be aware of. Moved the plot along, become an messenger girl, check. The end... Wait I spend hours and all I got was molested? There needs to be some reward for this. To be honest the game is to slow. You have a TON of actions that waste time. Having to change in the baths, you should auto change clothes and not have to activate it. You should auto change clothes at night and not have to waste time going to the dresser. You explain things that don't need to be explained but leave out things that make the game work out. This game needs help. Many of the pictures have Catherine looking off to no where looking like a statue and not a person. The dialogue feels forced and missing all nuance. Game shouldn't treat women like they have to be embarrassed about their bodies. Point being, I think there needs to be a TON of work to fix this... but it is fixable. The core idea works, and I like the idea that Catherine isn't a whore, but there is a long list of things that need to be fixed like the shower. Eliminate the fucking shower. I wish you luck. Don't freak out. Game has potential but Rome wasn't built in a day.
Desmond_CA Posted December 16, 2016 Author Posted December 16, 2016 The knight is using a katana? Sure, it's ideal for female knight in fantasy city. Otherwise, Catherine should be really muscular. XJ347, thanks for your comment. This is the most detailed for sure. I will consider it later!
Sosina Posted December 16, 2016 Posted December 16, 2016 his issue was that a Samurai uses a katana while a knight tends to use European weapons like long swords and the like. also a katana is not any faster or lighter then a basic longsword, the main difference is how they are designed, a long sword is strait and can deliver a more powerful thrust, while a katana is more designed to slash so they out preform the other in their respective categories, it's also far easier to half grip a long sword then a katana (half gripping is gripping the weapon halfway down it's length and then using it for a stronger stab, longswords could be used in this fashion to get through armors a bit easier, and no this doesn't cut the hand as a simple leather glove could protect the hand when doing the maneuver but proper training was required) sorry for the info dump XD
Thickthighsmallfeet Posted December 17, 2016 Posted December 17, 2016 his issue was that a Samurai uses a katana while a knight tends to use European weapons like long swords and the like. also a katana is not any faster or lighter then a basic longsword, the main difference is how they are designed, a long sword is strait and can deliver a more powerful thrust, while a katana is more designed to slash so they out preform the other in their respective categories, it's also far easier to half grip a long sword then a katana (half gripping is gripping the weapon halfway down it's length and then using it for a stronger stab, longswords could be used in this fashion to get through armors a bit easier, and no this doesn't cut the hand as a simple leather glove could protect the hand when doing the maneuver but proper training was required) sorry for the info dump XD Thanks, you are right that was what I thought was odd. If it was just a generic mercenary or swordsman or warrior I wouldn't even have made a comment but a "Knight" has certain qualities that aren't really met here and it makes me wonder if perhaps the author is just not familiar with it. I mean, it could be changed to an Order of Warriors and it would be fine, kind of.
Guest Posted December 17, 2016 Posted December 17, 2016 This game has a very great potential, despites some little defaults but i know this is only the beginning. Keep up the good work.
sen4mi Posted January 2, 2017 Posted January 2, 2017 That whole job thing should be easy to explain: Quite often, historically, countries have been strapped for cash in times of war. Depending on rank, also, you may have beeen expected to show initiative and/or supply costly gear.
Desmond_CA Posted February 25, 2017 Author Posted February 25, 2017 Catherine's Adventure v.0.2 (Chapter 2) added.
ImmortalOne Posted February 28, 2017 Posted February 28, 2017 Bit of a dumb question, but how are you supposed to defeat Jon to get the second skillThe fight seems really unfair, but maybe I'm doing something wrong
XJ347 Posted March 1, 2017 Posted March 1, 2017 Bit of a dumb question, but how are you supposed to defeat Jon to get the second skill The fight seems really unfair, but maybe I'm doing something wrong If i remember right, he uses deflect every 3 attack. All you have to do is not attack on that 3rd attack, just dodge on your 3rd attack. Maybe it's every 2 attacks? Once you get the rhythm it should be easy since his normal attacks are weak, its only the redirect that is strong.
D_ManXX2 Posted March 10, 2017 Posted March 10, 2017 hm so that is why i could defeat it. i was wondering how do you even earn enough gold to buy everything. all is so expensive. iI could only gather enough to buy upgrade for weapon and armor and no enough to get even 1 potion ?? also what is the deal with the waitress job it goes so fat that i hard ly have time to get close enough to start conversation before it jumps to the next customer am i doing something wrong ?? also after that person sabotage your shower it will get even more expsinve to buy the bath to lower your stuff if something gets to high and you cannot work cannot work means no money no money is game over ?? is there some walk through or save game that skips the first chapter ??
D_ManXX2 Posted April 4, 2017 Posted April 4, 2017 was wondering does anyone have a save game after chapter the 30 days for preparring ??
Desmond_CA Posted May 17, 2017 Author Posted May 17, 2017 Catherine's Adventure v.0.3 added. Save01(starting Chapter 2) included. Save02(starting Chapter 3) included.
Desmond_CA Posted July 14, 2017 Author Posted July 14, 2017 Catherine's Adventure v.0.4 added. Save01(starting Chapter 2) included. Save02(starting Chapter 3) included. Save03(starting v.0.4) included.
Loveryus Posted September 10, 2017 Posted September 10, 2017 Just want to say that this is one of the best games to be found on this site! Great job, Desmond! It's quite mean that to progress in the story I have to avoid certain hot scenarios.
Desmond_CA Posted September 19, 2017 Author Posted September 19, 2017 Catherine's Adventure Chapter 4 added. Save01(starting Chapter 2) included. Save02(starting Chapter 3) included. Save03(starting v.0.4) included. Save04(starting Chapter 4) included. Loveryus, thanks for the opinion. I appreciate it. Working hard on next updates to make even more impressive story!
korbe Posted October 1, 2017 Posted October 1, 2017 hi. i'm trying this game but ran into 2 issues right away.! 1 = No Full screen option! i'd like to play this full screen please! 2 = Time of day too short. I went outside & was talking to people when it said 'its late, time to go home.' I had no time to find or meet the commander & when I went home & took a shower I clicked on bed & it said go talk to commander BUT I couldn't leave the house cus it was night. ugh. please fix this. No forced to be anywhere please. if I wanna stay out all night & get really frustrated I should be able to. thx for considering. I hope u fix these issues! thx
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